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@G.R.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Well, a collab SS is in d market...wow

Cyclostyle of each other...loved d description

Prologue was a great start...

nd d first part was fabulous

u guys gave them(Sandhir)

new nicknames...thy r hilarious.

Update soon...

Thnks for PM.

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Priyanka

@FaRzI_McP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Res
unressng
omg. Amazng title. Loved d concept.
Well done guys.
Ur intro part was superb.
I lovd ur intro part too.
😃
N ya frndshp story. Amazng, i luv such stories.
N wat a bond sandhir r sharng.
1 line which caught my attention was "Aishwariya acting like a zombie and Ajay Devgn acting like love-struck baboon"
this was rofl... I literally clutchd my stomach in pain while laughng. U guys r really amazng n funny 2. 😆 while readng i felt as if story is lil bit relatd 2 jtyjn. Bt Only u guys might b knowng abt it.
P.s
dis mixture of creativity is amazng. Wil luv 2 read more of ur work. Thnx 4r d pm. 😳
lots of luv
*priyanka*

Edited by angelpriyu - 11 years ago

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Interesting start! Sanyu and randhir know each other for long & they are best frens

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Harshu.

@Awesome-blossom

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

The title is damn good 👍🏼
Res xD
Will unres asap

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

edited on pg.1

(Iptie u know but pari doesn't )

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

interesting SS...

first chapter was amazing

thanks for the PM

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Res.

Im not unresing anytime soon. Infact, I havent even read the update.

As soon as I saw 3 pages of comments, I rushed to Res.

And Im not reading the update anytime soon too.

Cause neither my SoulSister nor my FriendnSisterForeva, informed me bout the collab before.

Anyway, mera review kaha maaine rakhta hai.

Mai toh dono ke liye hi ek 'ex' ban gayi naa.

😡😡😡

PS. Pari, tu toh uss samay WhatsApp par bhi thi aur hum spamming karahe the...and ir u were PMing me too...still dint pre-inform me?😭

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Nice collab..hahaha its so funny to see randhir so flirty n careless n acasanova..alike in the show..its nly ME n his ego!!
N sanyu is also diff frm the show..i jus loved it!!
😉 😆

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Harita

@Harita1309

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Yayayayay!!!! one more ss to read frm d most talented writers🥳 (i know u guys dnt believe me but its okie dats my opinion😡)
d inro was cute n sweet❤️...esp i luvd those smileys😛
part 1 u killed me wid dat🤢...
first thing i lke is dat quote...👍🏼
their nick names r sooo cute...lol their conversation is very funny
n kit kat part🤣...sanyu wud do anythng fr chocolates no!!!
i m luvng dis bff thing..Randhir's feeling abt the love story😆
yippieee their parents want them to get marriedbut wat is dis sudden shock huh😲
all those qstns in d last irked me more n more u guys plz update soon...

Edited by Anamika1309 - 11 years ago