||KR & SS OS||Tera Mera Ki Rishta||Page 8||

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy me a Goldie now.. *Dancing*
Here is an OS written by me with the help of my bestie -Monika- love you sweety..
This one is specially for Mehnaz (FrozenTeardrops) and Reshhuu meri Candy (--resh_kr--) and Simran.. <3
Hume Asha hai ki ye ap logo ko pasnd ayega..
Enjoy.. :))

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A girl was standing infront of the mirror getting ready to meet the someone special of her life and suddenly her bestie came, picked pillow and threw towards her nd said
"Oye itna saj dhaj ke kahan ja rhi hai..?"
Kriya-Rey tu yahan kya kar raha hai?
Rey-Hey bhagwan kaise din aa gye hai.. Ab apni bestie ke ghar bhi nhi aa skta.. Dost dost na raha.. (dramatically)
Kriya intruppted him
"Oye nautanki band kar, Ayaan se milne jaa rhi hun.."
Rey-Oye hoye ye blushing toh dekho.
Kria started blushing more.
Rey-(In punjabi style) Hayee nazar na lgge meri chammak challo nu.
Kria while staring him - Wat is dis chammak challo nw.! Sara din bas mere liye naye naye name hi dhundhta rha kar. Vehlad kahi ka.
Rey- Abi kya kru tu dimag se nikalti hi nahi. Abi to lgta slowly and slowly you are capturing my heart also.
Kria- Chup be gadhe let me get ready.
Rey-Abi aur kitna ready hona tujhe. Pura beauty parlour banke jana hai kya.
Kria- I want to look the most beautiful girl in this world to him and only him.
Rey felt bad after hearing this. He himself didnt know the reason. In a sad mode he said - OK.
Kria- Hmm. Chl mere ko jana he must be waiting.
Rey- Han ja na mai hu hi kon tujhe rokne vala.
Kria- Rey please stop being dramatic.
And she bid farewel from Rey. Rey couldnt resist himself and went after her. He just wanted to know if this Ayaan thingy is good or not.
In the Restaurant Ayaan had booked a small room. They two were alone there. Rey smelt something bad. Unable to speak anything he sat
Unable to say anything he sat near the room where he couldnt be noticed by anyone. Rey saw them chatting happily. He again felt pricked.
(Kria and Ayaan's Convo)
Ayaan- Hey miss can I hold your hand please?
Kria-Ya sure you can. Isme koi puchne vali baat hi nai hai..
Ayaan- Thanq.. You look gorgeous..
Kria-(Blushing) Hmm.. Thanq.. This means alot..
Rey saw Kria blushing and badly wanted to know what is cooking inside the small room..
Waiter came there took the order and Ayaan asked kria if he could close the door so that no one could disturb them.. Kria agreed to this easliy..
Rey saw Ayaan locking the door.. His anger grown.. He was sweating badly.. He now was confirmed that this Ayaan will certainly do something wrong..
Feeling restless he messaged Kria..
Rey- Kria I need your help please come home early.. I am serious.. Please no one can help me except you..
Kria saw her message and vo reply karti hai Rey aisa kya kaam aa pada.. Abi to my date has just started.. Let me enjoy please.. Rey replied with a sad face Ok..
Kria too felt bad.. Use lagta hai k zarur kuch imprtant kaam hoga varna Rey also knew k ye date mere liye kitni zruri hai.. Mujhe ghr jana chahiye..
Kria- Ayaan I need to go home.. I am really sorry.. But mama ka message aya hai k kuch guests aye hai ghar par and they are very close to her.. She wanted to meet them..
Ayaan-(Shockingly) No Kria i wont let you go like this.. Abi to hmari date shuru b nai hue..
Kria- But I have to go.. Zaruri hai..
Ayaan with a wicked smile playing over his face- Itni asani se kaise jane du janeman. Mushkil se to hath mei ayi ho..
Kria was confused after listening this..
Ayaan- Tumhe pata hai kitne dino se maine is din ka intzar tha.. Aur aj jab vo din aya tumhe jaldi jana hai.. No darling No..
I cant let this opportunity go useless..
Kria was terrified and sabse pehle use Rey yad ata hai..
Kria - Ayaan kya boli ja rhe ho.. Mujhe dar lag rha.. Please stop kidding..
Ayaan- M serious baby and came close to her..
Rey saw this and he was fuming with anger.. Kria tried to call Rey but miss call hi jati hai ki Ayaan uska mobile kheech leta hai..
Rey ko pta lag jata hai ki andar room k kuch galat ho rha hai..
He tried to open the door Ayaan saw it and Kria ko kiss karne ki try karta hai.. Kria was crying badly she was avoiding him.. Vo use door karne ki koshish karti hai par Ayaan being a guy holds her with more strength.. Rey was so worried therefore with all his strength he broke the room door that is of glass.. With bleeding hands he enters the room like a hero and punched Ayaan with the same hand..
Kria Rey k peeche chup jati hai and Rey comforted her..
Tab tak hotel authorities vahan pahunch jati hai and Ayaan vahan se bachke nikal jata hai..
Authorities asked Rey for the compensation.. Rey said ap log fikar na kijiye.. Is ka ek ek paisa mai chuka dunga..
He left from there with kria holding her hand.. Car k pas pahunchte hi Kria hugged Rey and started crying again..
Rey- Hey meri chammak challo rone ki kya zarurat hai mai hu na tere sath.. Pagal chal chup kar.. Aise e na ro..
Kria- Lekin ap vahan pahunche kaise..
Rey- Tu se aap kab ho gya mai..?? Chal chod.. Mai to tere peeche peeche hi yahan aya tha.. Mujhe to pehle se hi shaq tha is Ayaan par..
Kria- I am sorry..
Rey- Kisliye.?
Kria- Mujhe us Ayaan k sath jana hi nai chahiye tha..
Rey- Oyee pagal si koi na.. Ab chup kar sab theek hai..
Iske sath hi Rey Kria ko apni aur kheech leta.. Ekdam pas.. Mistakingly Kria pecked Rey..
Rey was shocked..
Rey- Oyee tune ye kya kia.?
Kria- I am sorry Rey vo galti se ho gya.. Apne mere ko apni aur kheecha to vo ekdam se ho gya.. Sorry i am really sorry..
With this Rey kissed Kria fiercely and this time Kria was shocked but she too responded.. (Car k bahr public place mei hi chhalu ho gaye dono šŸ˜† )
Both departed when there was lack of oxygen..
Rey- I Love You Kria..
Another shock for Kria but she somehow had sensed this coming..
Kria- Sachi..?? *Teasingly*
Rey- Muchi..??
Kria- Pehle hi bata dete mai Ayaan k sath kabi jati hi na kyunki sabse jyda trust mujhe aap par hai.. Aap menu kabi hurt nai hone doge..
Rey- Ab bata dia na reply to kar.. Aur ye ap bolna band kar bada ajeeb sa lgta sunane mei..
Kria laughed with this..
Kria- I Love You too Einstein.. (Isme b I used this name.. Pata nai kyu I love this name.. ;) )
Rey- Einstein hayee.. Ab ye kon hai.?
Rey made a puppy face and Kria hit him on his shoulder..

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THE END..!! :))

This is all, a treat for all of my buddies.. Thanq for the love and friendship..
Hope You Guys Liked It..

Bade vale comment dena please..
Love reading them.. ;)
Thanq.. :))

Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
first of all bada vala congrats sweetie.. :*

tujhe to pta hi hai.. maine kitna wait kiya hai tera goldie banne ka... just becoz of dis os...

or ye besties turn to lovers vala to mera fav concept hai..

awesome...

tune yahan bhi apna punjabi touch dal hi diya..

loved kriyansh's friendship..
lekin kb tk frnds rehte..

aur is ayaan ki toh mai..
aakhir apna hero uski heroine ko kaise kuch hone de skta hai..

i just luv u... :*

half of my reviews maine tujhe kl hi de diye the..
aur aadhe aaj de diye...

to isse jyada nhi de skti...

waiting for u to write more...
Edited by -Monika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo rups, sub ah se wait kar rahi thi iska...

Coming to the OS...

Wah! Kya baat Kay baat Kay baat...

Kya likha hai... Wah!

Einstein... Even I'm starting to like that name...

Ayaan... Ugh! I hate him.

Mujhe starting Mein laga ki friendship based hoga... Lekin KR aur Arsha kanji 'just friends' nai hosakte

Dil khush karditta...

Khush se yard aaya... Khushi ke aansu ruk nai rahe rups...

Koi remedy bata... Mere liye... Tune mujhe dedication diya... Iss nacheez ko...

Issi Khushi Mein... Mera aashirvaad hai baalike... Tujhe aajse... Varun Dhawan aur kriyaansh ke hi sapne aayenge... Tathastu baalike...

Aise hi likhti reh aur meant to be together update kar!!!

Congrats once more...

Isse zyaada dimaag Mein kuch anj aaraha šŸ˜†
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st of all a big congrats rupa ...šŸ¤—
beautifully written dear ..
wishing to see more ..😊
abhi celebrate karo ...🄳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats Rupanshi
Party time...🄳
Wonderful writing...šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayeee my kHUDIYE!!!! Thank u chooo much for mentioning my name there!!! šŸ¤— nd its totally an amazing treat!!!😃
Dil khush kar ditta!!!! 😃
And congo shongo for becoming a Goldie!!! šŸ‘
My darling the OS was awesome! šŸ‘
Kria getting ready for a date and KriYaansh ke chutku sa convo was cute!
Awwhh iss OS mein bhi a villain between our KriYaansh!😲
Rey following Kria till the restaurant! Hawww!
And that cheapo Ayaan! arghhh >_< 😔
Cheap people always have cheap intentions...😵
And baad mein our Rey coming to rescue his princess like a Hero...hayeee!!!
And then car ke paas... *puch puch*ā˜ŗļø
Hehehe...KriYaansh kabhi nahi sudhrenge!šŸ˜†
Loved the kissy sequence...šŸ˜‰
And the final confession was cute...😳
"Tum" se "Aap"...wah Kria ..Shaadi se pehle hi respect deying apna to-be- hubby ko!šŸ˜‰ 🤣
Overall it was an awesome OS!!! šŸ‘šŸ¼
And it had its Punjabi shhhtyleee...Afterall my Punjabi Khudi has written it! šŸ˜‰
Great work...And Thank u again for this treat!!!! Love u baby!
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Hugs and kisses! ā¤ļø

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rupanshi...a big big congrats to you...

superb os..cute and funny...

loved it..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supab os
REYS OVERACTING
THEN REYS ENTRY IN FULLY HERO STYLE
N THAN THEIR PUBLIC ME HI GUTAR GOOG WAS REALLY AMAZING
LOVE IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo dear
cute and funny os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for pm
Loved the punjabi style kriyaansh
Hero and angry young man rey nahi tho who else can save kriya?
Yeh toh hona hi tha
Awesome oneshot
Srsly great work

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