||KR & SS OS||Tera Mera Ki Rishta||Page 8|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: nature2

<font color="#ff3366">Superbbb</font>

Thanq bhai.. 😳

Originally posted by: sri_crazlacious

<font color="#ff0099"><font size="3"><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Pehle tohtere liye ek bada vala Congratulations!!!!! </font>🥳🥳

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Isiliye balle balee oye shawa shawa...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Meri sweety punjabikudi to goldie sholdie ban gayi...oye hoye!! 👏👏

</div>Yeh OS ek treat tha hum sab ke liye... 😊😊Tu toh star nikli...⭐️Nd I love you so much for making Ayaan get a mukka from our sher.. 👏👏uff kya entry mari rey ne...apne kriya ko bachane ke liye woh kahi bhi pohoch sakta hai.. 😳😳😳

Aur phir woh cute sa confession...haaye.. ☺️☺️

excellent writing...aur likh na... 👏👏

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Thanq didu.. 😳

Abi abi to likhna shuru kia..
Abi abs dekhte jaiyo bohat pakaungi mai ap logo ko.. 😆

Originally posted by: aishu3003

fantastic os👏

loved ittt very much❤️

anddd congozzz🥳

Thanq.. :))

Originally posted by: glmorous_diva

amazing

kriya ne rey ko ap kaha...

rey shocked 😆

loved it

Hmm.. Thanq for cmntng.. :)

next OS jldi se post kr...
waiting...

Originally posted by: cool_star14

First of all congrats for becoming Goldie..

enjoy d new colour..😛

Coming to d os..

It was really sweet n cute..

I loved d way rey called kriya chamak challo..

rey ne kya bachaya kriya ko.. kya baat hai..

Kriya ke rey ko aap kehne lol..

Loved it ...

THanqq. Thnxx for cmntng.. 😳

Tera Mera Ki Rishta

Swaron Version

Wedding preprations are going on. There was great hustle and bustle. Evryone was busy in his/her work.
A girl standing in pink salwar suit was guiding all the workers how the work was to be done. She was the one responsible for all the arrangements. It was her friends marriage. Oh.! Sorry best friends marriage.
A girl calls from behind Sharon
Sharon- Han bol Piya.
Piya- Itni tensn na le. Ho jaega sab. Araam se kar. Tu ta aise kaam kar rahi hai jaise teri apni shaadi ho.
Sharon- Acha. Tujhe kya pata mai ye sara work kyu kar rahi hu.
Piya- Mere liye aur kiske liye.
Sharon- Kar to tere liye hi rahi hu lekin tere jaane ki khushi mei.
Piya with shocked expressions- Kya boli tu..!
Sharon- Jo tune suna meri jaan. Dekh kitni der jhela maine tujhe ab finally tere se peecha chutega.
Piya- Haww ja ab i wont talk to u. Ja jake ready hoja evening k liye. Huh.!!
Sharon in Piya's room. They both were sharing the room. Sharon was here for two weeks. Wedding was after 4 days.
She came out of the washroom with wet hairs and back against the door.
A guy enters and excitedly hugged Shaorn from behind and pecked her on cheek and picked her up rolling over the bed. Sharon was hell terrified. She screamed.
Sharon- Kon hai. Chodo mujhe. Tumhari himmat kaise hue mujhe hath b lagane ki.
Guy- Its me Piya. Me Swayam. Your cousin brother from US. I know we are meating after a long time. Iska matlb ye nahi tum mujhe pehchanogi nahi.
Swayam is Piya's Uncle's son. They shifted to US 10 years back.
Sharon- I am not Piya. Chodo mujhe ab.
Swayam left her after listening this.
Swayam- Oh Sory. I am really sorry miss...
Sharon- Sharon.!
Swayam- Miss. I thought you are Piya. Its her room na. Aunt told me Piya would be here. I am really sorry.
Sharon- Mujhe sab pata hai tum jaise ladko ka. Mauka dhundhte ho. Bahar se aye ho lekin yahn ki ladkio ko kam mat samjhana. Samjhe.!!
Sharon asked him to leave the room. Swayam left from there. While going in the corridor. Swayam in his mind- Yar what was that. Maine to kuch kaha b nai usne mujhe itna kuch boldia. She was cute. Whats new in that every girl is cute. Nahi uska attitude is different. Lekin pehli hi meeting mei misunderstanding.
While Swayam was busy in his thoughts Piya saw him and called him.
Piya- Swayu..!! Tu.?
Swayam- Yes mai Piya. Kyu vishvas nai hua.
Piya- Tu itna bada ho gya.?
Swayam- Tu khud ko dekh shadi krne ja rahi hai to mai vahi thodi atka rahuga.
Piya- Tu ni badlega sachi.Kaisa hai ? Bhabhi kaisi hai.?
Swayam- Oye konsi bhabhi. Koini hai abi.
Piya- Matlb jaldi ban jaegi.
Swayam- Han (Thinking about Sharon)
Piya- Kya.!!
Swayam- Yar whos Sharon.?
Piya- My best friend. Meri marriage ki prepartns krvane k liye pehle aa gayi.
Sharon - Oh acha. Badi sec-c bandi hai.
Piya- Swayu kya boli ja raha. Dhyan se. She is not that easy to handle. Bohay khatarnak hai.
Swayam- Acha aisa kya. Dekhi ja. Teri shadi se pehle pehle maine use apna na bana lia.
Piya- Tujhe kya kabi US mei koi pasnd ni ayi kya.?
Swayam- Ayi na lekin iske jaise attitude vali koi nai mili..
Piya- All the best. Vaise to i know aisa kabi ho nahi paega fir b try karne mei kya jata hai.
After this Swayam left from there.
He saw Sharon walking backward. He got an idea. He too started walking backward but in opposite direction. As a result they both strike with each other. Sharon asked for forgivenes and pretended that it happened by chance.
Sharon ignored it and was back to her back of assisting workers. Swayam again thought of trying the same trick. He again started walking in the same manner. But this time Sharon was aware and she went to some other place from where she was standing. Swayam landed sitting on a sack. 😆 He heard a laughter. It was Sharon. Swayam was fida on that smile too. 😃 With this Sharon left from there.
Swayam in his mind- Hassi to Phassi. Kya yar why the hell i am liking her every ADA. Is it Love At First Sight..!! Stop thinking Swayam. He got up from where he was sitting and went inside home.
Sharon was sitting with Piya' friends. They all were chatting and giggling happily.
Swayam stood a few meters away from her where he could listen everything they were discussing clearly. So that she might not notice him.
Girl- Tumhe apne liye kaisa ladka chahiye.?
Sharon- Mujhe. Sochne do.!!
*Thinking* Han to suno. Mujhe aisa ladka chahiye jo mere khatir kuch b kar sake. Gundo se lad sake apni life ki parwah kiye bina. Mere mama papa ki bohat respect kare. Mere kuch kehne se pehle mere parents se baat kare. And vo jo mujhe love kare Till The End. 😳

Swayam heared all this.
Swayam in his mind- Waah. Miss ne khud hi ideas de diye. Ab kaha bachke jaogi miss Sharon.
Next day Sharon's parents were coming.
Next day morning. Sharon was ready early. She was to meet her parents after 2 weeks. She missed them so much. And her wait was over.
Sharon parents entered. Sharon hugged them both.
Sharon- Hey mama papa kaise ho ? I missed you big vala.
Swayam saw all this melo drama.
Swayam- Ye Indians kabi nai badlenge.
Well i am also an Indian. To mai b shuru hota hu na.
Swayam- Namste Uncle. Namaste Aunty. *Touching their feet*
S Mom- Beta tum kon.? Maine pehchana nahi.
Sharon was fakely smiling at this action of him. She thought *Ye ise kya ho gya ekdam se. Kya ye sachi aisa hai ya he is pretending. Ise pta b hai ye mere parents hai*
Swayam- Aunty kaise pehchanoge. We are meeting for the first time. I am Swayam Frm US.. Piya ka cousin.
S Fathr- Oh acha.! Kaise ho beta.?
Swayam-Arre ap log khade hi rahoge kya. Ayiye na andar. Baithiye ap log. Mai ap dono k liye breakfast leke ata hu.
Sharon was seeing all this without any word.
Sharon- Swayam ap rehne do mai le aungi. Koi zarurt nahi hai mere mama papa hai. Mai inke liye sab krlungi. Ap jaiye..
Swayam- Aunty Uncle ap log must be tired. Ap log room mei jaiye Shaon wil bring the breakfast there only.
Sharon parents while leaving the drawing room.
S Mom- Kitna acha ladka hai na.
S Fathr- Han. US jakar b apne sanskar nahi bhula.
This was overheard by Swayam *Naughty Swayam ;)*
Swayam to himself- Plan 1 succesful. With this he winked at Sharon.
Kria was confused and doubted what all had happened was really true.
Two days passed. In these two days he had accomplished 3 of his plans successively. And now it was the time for his last try. It was sangeet ceremony to be held at night.
Swayam was working from the morning to make this night special for her.

At Night. Sangeet Ceremony.

Swayam who was still busy in making the arrangements for the guests and was fully drentched with sweat.
He didnt even noticed Sharon coming towards him in a beautiful white saree.. She was losted in him. Piya saw this and came to Sharon. Sharon who was still in Swayam's thoughts didnt noticed Piya standing near him. Swayam was also wearing white Kurta Pyjama said to herself *Aj kitne smart lag rahe hai. Hayee.!! 😳
It was heard by Piya.
Piya- Kon Sharon.?
Sharon- Swayam.!! *In her thoughts*
Piya- Kya boli tu ?
Sharon was astonished to see Piya beside her.
Sharon- Mai.! Mai.! Kya boli. Kuch b nai. Tune kuch suna kya.?
Piya- Maine nahi to. Tune kuch bola tha kya? *EvilSmile*
Sharon- Na.!
Meanwhile Swayam called Piya and she went to Swayam.
Piya- Swayam. Bhabhi aa rahi hai. Thoda apna hulliya sudhar lo. Gai vo kaam se. Hogi tere par lattu.!
Swayam- Challenge kisne kia tha. Acha chal ja and let me enjoy my moment. Sun maine tere ko bola tha mera room decorate krne ko krva dia tha na.?
Piya- Bhai fikar not. Sab set hai. Lekin Swayu dekhke kuch galat nai.
Swayam- Han. Trust me mai kabi b Sharon ko use nai krunga. I really love her. Immensely.
Piya- I knw yar. Lekin she is my bestie. Isliye thoda tensed.
Piya left and he looked at Sharon. She was looking an angel. So gorgeous.
Swayam to himself * Ise koi haq nai hai yar mujh par aise var krne ka*
Swayam went to Kria and held her by her waist. Sharon. was loving that moment. But there were so many people so she was a bit terrified. Swayam immediately pecked Sharon.
Sharon- *With 😲 expresions. Swayam apne ye kya kia.
Swayam- Dubara krke dikhau kya. *Winks*
With this he took Kria outside the house.
Swayam- Kitna aur tadpaogi mere ko.
Sharon- Matlb.?
Swayam- Dont you like me ?
Sharon *Blushing*
Swayam- Aye haye mai marja teri bulshing te. 😆
Sharon- Bohat jyda karti hu.
And she hugged Swayam. But Swayan who was having some naughty intentions broke the hug and kissed her fiercely. And picked her up in his lap and landed in his room.
Sharon- Sangeet function ka kya.?
Swayam- Vo jaye bhaad mei.


*The End*

Mannu di and Ani di this is for you..
See i kept my promise..
Acha laga btaiyo plzz..
This is my frst try ovr Swaron..
Koi concpt nai tha fir b jaise taise likhdia..


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Kriyansh Version

Wedding preprations are going on. There was great hustle and bustle. Evryone was busy in his/her work.
A girl standing in pink salwar suit was guiding all the workers how the work was to be done. She was the one responsible for all the arrangements. It was her friends marriage. Oh.! Sorry best friends marriage.
A girl calls from behind Kria
Kria- Han bol Piya.
Piya- Itni tensn na le. Ho jaega sab. Araam se kar. Tu ta aise kaam kar rahi hai jaise teri apni shaadi ho.
Kria- Acha. Tujhe kya pata mai ye sara work kyu kar rahi hu.
Piya- Mere liye aur kiske liye.
Kria- Kar to tere liye hi rahi hu lekin tere jaane ki khushi mei.
Piya with shocked expressions- Kya boli tu..!
Kria- Jo tune suna meri jaan. Dekh kitni der jhela maine tujhe ab finally tere se peecha chutega.
Piya- Haww ja ab i wont talk to u. Ja jake ready hoja evening k liye. Huh.!!
Kria in Piya's room. They both were sharing the room. Kria was here for two weeks. Wedding was after 4 days.
She came out of the washroom with wet hairs and back against the door.
A guy enters and excitedly hugged Kria from behind and pecked her on cheek and picked her up rolling over the bed. Kria was hell terrified. She screamed.
Kria- Kon hai. Chodo mujhe. Tumhari himmat kaise hue mujhe hath b lagane ki.
Guy- Its me Piya. Me Reyansh. Your cousin brother from US. I know we are meating after a long time. Iska matlb ye nahi tum mujhe pehchanogi nahi.
Reyansh is Piya's Uncle's son. They shifted to US 10 years back.
Kria- I am not Piya. Chodo mujhe ab.
Rey left her after listening this.
Rey- Oh Sory. I am really sorry miss...
Kria- Kria.!
Rey- Miss Kria. I thought you are Piya. Its her room na. Aunt told me Piya would be here. I am really sorry.
Kria- Mujhe sab pata hai tum jaise ladko ka. Mauka dhundhte ho. Bahar se aye ho lekin yahn ki ladkio ko kam mat samjhana. Samjhe.!!
Kria asked him to leave the room. Rey left from there. While going in the corridor.
Rey in his mind- Yar what was that. Maine to kuch kaha b nai usne mujhe itna kuch boldia. She was cute. Whats new in that every girl is cute. Nahi uska attitude is different. Lekin pehli hi meeting mei misunderstanding.
While Rey was busy in his thoughts Piya saw him and called him.
Piya- Rey..!! Tu.?
Rey- Yes mai Piya. Kyu vishvas nai hua.
Piya- Tu itna bada ho gya.?
Rey- Tu khud ko dekh shadi krne ja rahi hai to mai vahi thodi atka rahuga.
Piya- Tu ni badlega sachi.Kaisa hai ? Bhabhi kaisi hai.?
Rey- Oye konsi bhabhi. Koini hai abi.
Piya- Matlb jaldi ban jaegi.
Rey- Han (Thinking about Kria)
Piya- Kya.!!
Rey- Yar whos Kria.?
Piya- My best friend. Meri marriage ki prepartns krvane k liye pehle aa gayi.
Rey- Oh acha. Badi sec-c bandi hai.
Piya- Rey kya boli ja raha. Dhyan se. She is not that easy to handle. Bohay khatarnak hai.
Rey- Acha aisa kya. Dekhi ja. Teri shadi se pehle pehle maine use apna na bana lia.
Piya- Tujhe kya kabi US mei koi pasnd ni ayi kya.?
Rey- Ayi na lekin iske jaise attitude vali koi nai mili..
Piya- All the best. Vaise to i know aisa kabi ho nahi paega fir b try karne mei kya jata hai.
After this Rey left from there.
He saw Kria walking backward. He got an idea. He too started walking backward but in opposite direction. As a result they both strike with each other. Rey asked for forgivenes and pretended that it happened by chance. Kria ignored it and was back to her back of assisting workers. Rey again thought of trying the same trick. He again started walking in the same manner. But this time Kria was aware and she went to some other place from where she was standing. Rey landed sitting on a sack. 😆 He heard a laughter. It was Kria. Rey was fida on that smile too. 😃 With this Kria left from there.
Rey in his mind- Hassi to Phassi. Kya yar why the hell i am liking her every ADA. Is it Love At First Sight..!! Stop thinking Rey. He got up from where he was sitting and went inside home.
Kria was sitting with Piya' friends. They all were chatting and giggling happily.
Rey stood a few meters away from her where he could listen everything they were discussing clearly. So that she might not notice him.
Girl- Tumhe apne liye kaisa ladka chahiye.?
Kria- Mujhe. Sochne do.
*Thinking* Han to suno. Mujhe aisa ladka chahiye jo mere khatir kuch b kar sake. Gundo se lad sake apni life ki parwah kiye bina. Mere mama papa ki bohat respect kare. Mere kuch kehne se pehle mere parents se baat kare. And vo jo mujhe love kare Till The End. 😳
Rey heared all this.
Rey in his mind- Waah. Miss ne khud hi ideas de diye. Ab kaha bachke jaogi miss Kria.
Next day Kria's parents were coming.
Next day morning. Kria was ready early. She was to meet her parents after 2 weeks. She missed them so much. And her wait was over.
Kria parents entered. Kria hugged them both.
Kria- Hey mama papa kaise ho ? I missed you big vala.
Rey saw all this melo drama.
Rey- Ye Indians kabi nai badlenge.
Well i am also an Indian. To mai b shuru hota hu na.
Rey- Namste Uncle. Namaste Aunty. *Touching their feet*
K Mom- Beta tum kon.? Maine pehchana nahi.
Kria was fakely smiling at this action of him. She thought *Ye ise kya ho gya ekdam se. Kya ye sachi aisa hai ya he is pretending. Ise pta b hai ye mere parents hai*
Rey- Aunty kaise pehchanoge. We are meeting for the first time. I am Reyansh. Frm US.. Piya ka cousin.
K Fathr- Oh acha.! Kaise ho beta.?
Rey- Arre ap log khade hi rahoge kya. Ayiye na andar. Baithiye ap log. Mai ap dono k liye breakfast leke ata hu.
Kria was seeing all this without any word.
Kria- Rey ap rehne do mai le aungi. Koi zarurt nahi hai mere mama papa hai. Mai inke liye sab krlungi. Ap jaiye..
Rey- Aunty Uncle ap log must be tired. Ap log room mei jaiye Kria will bring the breakfast there only.
Kria parents while leaving the drawing room.
K Mom- Kitna acha ladka hai na.
K Fathr- Han. US jakar b apne sanskar nahi bhula.
This was overheard by Rey *Naughty Rey ;)*
Rey to himself- Plan 1 succesful. With this he winked at Kria.
Kria was confused and doubted what all had happened was really true.
Two days passed. In these two days he had accomplished 3 of his plans successively. And now it was the time for his last try. It was sangeet ceremony to be held at night.
Rey was working from the morning to make this night special for her.

At Night. Sangeet Ceremony.

Rey who was still busy in making the arrangements for the guests and was fully drentched with sweat.
He didnt even noticed Kria coming towards him in a beautiful white saree.. She was losted in him. Piya saw this and came to Kria. Kria who was still in Rey's thoughts didnt noticed Piya standing near him. Rey was also wearing white Kurta Pyjama said to herself *Aj kitne smart lag rahe hai. Hayee.!! 😳
It was heard by Piya.
Piya- Kon Kria.?
Kria- Rey.!! *In her thoughts*
Piya- Kya boli tu ?
Kria was astonished to see Piya beside her.
Kria- Mai.! Mai.! Kya boli. Kuch b nai. Tune kuch suna kya.?
Piya- Maine nahi to. Tune kuch bola tha kya? *EvilSmile*
Kria- Na.!
Meanwhile Rey called Piya and she went to Rey.
Piya- Rey. Bhabhi aa rahi hai. Thoda apna hulliya sudhar lo. Gai vo kaam se. Hogi tere par lattu.!
Rey- Challenge kisne kia tha. Acha chal ja and let me enjoy my moment. Sun maine tere ko bola tha mera room decorate krne ko krva dia tha na.?
Piya- Bhai fikar not. Sab set hai. Lekin Rey dekhke kuch galat nai.
Rey- Han. Trust me mai kabi b Kria ko use nai
Isliye thoda tensed.
Piya left and he looked at Kria. She was looking an angel. So gorgeous. Rey to himself * Ise koi haq nai hai yar mujh par aise var krne ka*
Rey went to Kria and held her by her waist. Kria was loving that moment. But there were so many people so she was a bit terrified. Rey immediately pecked Kria.
Kria- *With 😲 expresions. Rey apne ye kya kia.
Rey- Dubara krke dikhau kya. *Winks*
With this he took Kria outside the house.
Rey- Kitna aur tadpaogi mere ko.
Kria- Matlb.?
Rey- Dont you like me ?
Kria *Blushing*
Rey- Aye haye mai marja teri bulshing te. 😆
Kria- Bohat jyda karti hu.
And she hugged Rey. But Rey who was having some naughty intentions broke the hug and kissed her fiercely. And picked her up in his lap and landed in his room.
Kria- Sangeet function ka kya.?
Rey- Vo jaye bhaad mei.


*The End*

Baki ka apne ap soch lena sare..
M very bad in shwng d romacne thng..

This is for Piya di. Di ab na gussa hoiyo mere se.. Ye maine apke liye likha..
It isnt good i knw but also bt tht bad.. 😆

Do review with bada vale cmntss.

If you people have not read my first OS..
DO READ IT ON PAGE 1.

res...

ok.. ab mai unres krne jaa rhi hu..

really amazing os..

superb..

outstanding..

perfect..

simple yet very cute nd sweet os...

rey ka mission successful ho gya...

yuss.. ye to hona hi tha...

rey or kriya to bahut hi chalu nikle..

kisi aur ki shadi mein apna chakkar chla liya..

rey is very naughty.. i must say ..

kya plan bnaya hai hero ne...

haye loved it..

do write more...

waiting..

mera lalach badhta jaa rha hai... :P