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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
part 4
awesome dear...
nice one...
Arnav is too much...
Khushi has no idea in fact no had any idea that twas all Arnav's planning...
kisne socha tha that Arnav right from the start was doing this...
and Khushi darling is gonna blow a fuse after this confession of Arnav's...
hes gonna stay away?
impossible...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: chavvi16

satak gayi hai inki
lagta toh yahi hai
dude you are ASR right not a clone


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he is being anything but that
chalo acha hi hai
waise stalking fighting with khushi you seem to be less like LG and more like lover boy
wow she sure changed him
but of course he doesnt like that
did he call her silly
haila teri toh


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acha huya yeh sab nahin bata rahe aap apni patni ko
warna aap ki khair nahin
hey DM kya karrein inka
he was stalking her and he is blaming her for that too
hawww aisa koi karta hai kya
wait what kissing khushi
wow he really has lost it
no wonder he wants to run away from her
but dont you know the more you run away from someone the more you dont
nahin aisa maine suna hai
so he was waiting to crash into her
which he never did for anyone before
dude does that not tell you anything
and he didnt even mind waiting for her
even till eternity
kya baat hai
well this sure is new for him
no wonder he is panicking the way he did
uff aru this was bound to happen too
so he doesnt want to get sexy khushi mad again
well lets see shall we
but he does console her so thats okay
now he is bound to think about all this in detail
well now we know why not another crash
and i cant believe he was sad no crashing
wow so he wants to check out khushi and not pay attention to his brothers wedding
bade khush ho rahe the ki she is fighting with him naa
dude mind is really going to places aint it like her lips
i was like hain well so was he right
jab dekho tab inhe kyun blame karte hain
hadd hai yaar
this should be good him and staying away
that will be fun to watch if he can
cheers for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
m so loving this side of arnav... well done!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
damn his running away from her isnt gonna work out
but doesnt matter in the end
they are married
and happily too right
well lets see then
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: chavvi16

damn his running away from her isnt gonna work out

but doesnt matter in the end
they are married
and happily too right
well lets see then

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86


PART 5. DHOOM DHADAKKA ARNAV STYLE! FINAL PART

Arnav Singh Raizada was a happy fellow right now. He had planned to not follow Khushi and his plan was turning into a success. From the time the Saat Phere ended to now, he did not seek out Khushi, he did not stalk her and he did not think of her once. So he was happy. But he was happy due to another reason too. Just right now the Bidaai had ended and soon Khushi and Arnav would go separate ways. Arnav was sure that once that happened, the attraction he felt for Khushi would go away and he could go back to his normal lifestyle. Hence, Arnav was happy and promised himself that he would make sure that he stayed away from Khushi Kumari Gupta till she went back to her town.

Of course, all promises made by Arnav to himself flew right out of the window the moment he saw Khushi sitting under a table crying her heart out. Arnav felt pain well up in his heart and he subconsciously promised bodily harm to the person who made her cry. Arnav sat down beside Khushi waiting for her to acknowledge him. After a while, Arnav offered her his kerchief which she clutched in her hand but continued to cry out.

Arnav's heart clenched at her sobs and he could not stop himself from speaking to her, "Khushi! Please calm down! Rone se kuch nahi hoga!"

Khushi glared at him and spoke between his sobs, "Aapko kaise pata hai ki rone se kuch nahi hoga? Kya pata? Humaare rone se humaara dard thoda kam ho jaaye!"

"Dard?", outwardly Arnav frowned but inwardly he was seething. Who dared to give Khushi pain? How could they! He would tear them to pieces with his bare hands. He looked at Khushi who was sniffling and crying and Arnav wondered how could someone look so cute and innocent while crying her heart out?

Khushi spoke up bringing Arnav out of his thoughts, "Haan! Dard! Humaare Jiji se alag hone ka dard! Jiji ki aaj bidaai hui na? Lekin yeh dard aap ladke waale kya jaane! Yeh dard toh sirf ladki waalon ko pata hota hai!"

Arnav rolled his eyes. That's it? That was the reason behind his crying? And here he thought something bad happened to her! He tried to tell her about his sister who he gave away just two years ago but then his mind reminded him about his promise to stay away from her. He instinctively leaned back a bit; forget it! You are done with her Arnav, remember?

Arnav tried to get up when Khushi caught his hand. And then Arnav Singh Raizada got the shock of his life. Khushi, the girl he was attracted to, the girl who he stalked, the girl with whom he loved to fight, lunged forward and hugged him tightly. KHUSHI HUGGED HIM! Arnav was stupefied. This was dream come true; Khushi in his arms. His breath hitch as he felt her body melding into him and he had to take few deep breaths to calm his heart beat down. He slowly hugged her back and relished the feeling of her in his arms. He closed his eyes and tried to savor the feeling. He tried to memorize each and every breath and move of her while he held her tightly in his arms. After a while, Khushi pulled away and wiped her tears with the kerchief he gave. Arnav was still in shock at what had happened. It took him a while to get back into the real world. Stop fantasizing you idiot! She is crying! Kuch toh sharam kar! This is not the right time to fantasize about how awesome she felt in your... Arnav! STOP FANTASIZING!

Arnav tried to get up again wanting to get away from her before he crossed his limits like hug her again or worse; kiss her.

But Khushi stopped him again with her hand and smiled at him, "Dhanyawaad!"

Arnav frowned.

Khushi continued, "Hum aapke saath subah se lad rahe hain aur aap hain ki humein dilaasa dene pahunch gaye! Dhanyawaad!"

Arnav's heart melted at her words and he smiled back.

Its fine! After all kuch der ke liye hum log jhagde ko side mein rakh sakte hain, right?" Arnav said unable to resist from teasing her.

Khushi giggled and Arnav felt as if her giggles sounded like the tinkling of bells.

"Lekin sirf aaj ke liye truce! Next time phir se ladenge!", Khushi spoke.

Arnav was surprised at her friendliness and teasing tone and let out a laugh.

He nodded, "Good idea!"

Arnav walked out of the hiding space and walked a few paces. He did not know what made him turn and say the next words but he did say it.

"Miss. I-Love-To-Fight!", he called her and she looked up.

"Next jhagde pe milenge!", he told her and was rewarded with a bright smile from her.

Arnav walked away with a smile on his face, his heart beating in happiness and his whole body abuzz with feelings of more than attraction towards Khushi. And he knew! He knew that he could not get Khushi out of his system! Whatever method he would use to remove her out of his mind and heart, she would not go! Khushi had become a part and parcel of him and his life! And surprisingly he did not mind it! He may not know what he was feeling for Khushi right now, but he knew one thing; it would be a fun journey, discovering what was between him and Khushi! After all, if nothing then atleast this journey would provide him a chance to fight with Khushi daily, right?nfact, he was ready to fight with her daily all his life.

Hello my readers,

If you seriously think this story ends here, then you are definitely wrong!

Stay tuned for the next chapter where the aftermath of Dhoom Dhadakka will be shown!

See you with an update in few days!

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Awww thats really really nice n cute update!!😳
Edited by sarunsashasingh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
awww that was so cute
did he actually think he could get away from her
dream on dude
well he got that too
that he cant run from her
not really
am glad that he got that
and all because she cried
awww he was like why is she crying
who dared to hurt his khushi
that person who is your brother and your family even you indirectly would have had it
he was very very mad at them
well of course he was
no one makes his khushi cry and get away with it
when she said why she was crying he was like this is why she is crying
well what else did you expect mate
this is khushi we are talking about man
aise hi kuch kehti naa woh
and as if anyone would take panga with geet
not with you there or with her family there too
so they are back to their fight mode for next time
well before that their hug
haiyye kya baat hai
he was so stunned with it
the girl he stalked fought with and wanted to be with hugged him
that hug was like heaven right
of course it was
for them both
they needed it for sure
but mind outta gutter please
not really
that was funny where his thoughts were going
but dude all your running from geet is not gonna happen
not really
not when you realised that there is more to this attraction
so this is it for jab se right
or another one chapter after this
next series surely
ahhh in the end we will know all
shame khushi wont know it all
but she will make him suffer for sure
that am very excited about
so this is their new beginning right
he wanted to let geet be and let her cry
but she beat him to it right
hell yes she did by hugging him
awww that was so cute
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
tht was awesome one
loving his POV so mch
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awww that update was so cute!
I just love the way you described Arnav's feelings towards Khushi
Do update soon!
And please accept my buddy request

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