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Posted: 11 years ago
great update.loved how arnav came bck to their room but arnav really has a bad timing.i doubt khushi would ever trust rishab again.feel terrible for khushi,please keep her safe.arnav is surely going to feel guilty,nd would need loads of support in the tough times.continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

That's it from now on am gonna divide my comments into two or three posts

This way what ever I have written that day can post at least

This delay in posting comments is bad naa

So this is it

More like things getting worse

But will they be getting better

Lets see what happens here

Wow she is waiting for her phone to ring

Pray tell me why is that dear

Whats got her in such twist

Well I can guess what could have gotten her this anxious

And that's what it was

Her travel tickets and going away from her hubby

Maybe they do need the time out

Or will that make things worse

Isnt that kinda running for her too

Why arnav office oh wait he will pay for them naa

If only he said why he doesn't want her to go

Communication between them is no good

And with him not being able to say what he feels

Of course her not understanding his feeling well how is she supposed to

Aint no mind reader is she

Things are getting outta hand

So she is waiting for him to blast her

What if he isn't gonna do that

Wait he wont call today

Hmmm has her and us on edge what arnav will do now

Hmmm sometimes his demands can be unresoanbale

But did she try and ask why

I know she knows the reason why

But shouldn't she ask her hubby too

This way he could get it off his chest

But the thing is he wont

Doesn't trust her yet

And she hasn't given him enough reasons to trust her

What with things to do with her best friend

But in all this khushi sure is being pulled in two directions

At least you include him in your decision

He doesn't cause well he is he man

But this is am sure gonna create more problems for her

And of course for him too

Waise if you see it neither are any less stubborn from the other

At this rate their marriage is bound to go down hill

This time neither will give in

Why did she say about the break

That man I mean arnav as it is he is unpredictable and with her saying that god knows what he is thinking

And knowing him nothing good

Will they really be able to think things through when apart

Or will they grow more apart

That's what am worried about

Him and his ultimatums

Agreed his past is horrible what a number they did to him

But if he keeps ordering her things are not gonna get any better

And she too gives in to his ultimatums and his tactics

He doesn't love her

Then pray tell me why he is with her still

Considering he thinks she is partial to rishu

Did he even think why he is with her

No I mean really think about it

Hope this time away from her will let him think

Or will it go in opposite direction

As if their marriage isn't already damaged

Not beyond repair of course but it is cracking for sure

Her temper her slip of tongues

Neither are helping out

What did she find out in middle of night now

Oh that's what she found out

Arnav you need her she needs you period

Please say it too

She is your anchor and so are you with her

Why is this little thing going out of hands

But till they talk about their marriage their problems how will anything be solved

Yes his ego can be bit of headache but this gesture of hugging you while asleep just goes to show that he is more into you than he cares to admit

If only she would give in

But then she does every time

Even asks him how to prove her love her trust

And still that isn't enough

He need you but of course wont let that be known to you and why because he doesn't wanna make himself vulnerable to others even when that person is the one he loves

He does love in his own way but still hasn't realised it

Pity that or else things would be so different

Yes they both run which isn't helping

They have to start take one step towards each other

And now away from one another

Yeah khushi you are doing the same as him after accusing him of running

Both are not ready to let the other know just how much the other is ruling over them

And this is whats causing so much problems

So she did change her tickets

Now just going for 15 days

But shouldn't she have told him instead of letting the tickets tell it for her

Middle ground with them two

Ahhh if only that were to happen

Its like my way for them

But yes have to find a middle ground for they will drift apart

And then all of this would be meaningless

She has to go for that amount of time

After all its her chachu wedding

She has to be there for him too naa

Really why didn't we just talk to him before coming

Or was he not there that we couldn't talk to him face to face

Instead of waiting for his call

As he even seen the tickets

Damn this waiting is killing her well be patient

Her adjacent desk ohhh you mean rishu

Oh yeah that's another person she has to think about

Dono ke beech mein kahin khushi dab naa jaaye

She has to find a balance between her love and hubby and best friend too

But how to do that I wonder

So rishu is leaving the NGO

Well guess that's best for her as well as him

This way arnav will be happy too

Well she wont see rishu that much so of course it shall make arnav happy

And it is getting awkward between the two friends

Thank god he let her be

As she had no idea how to leave

She wouldn't have been able to do it to him

Damn why is she so nice

But then of course she is

No wonder they both took her for granted

And I mean both of them

Khushi you can only do so much

Cant please them all you do know right

Ek ko manaya toh doosra rooth jaate hain

She cant patch it up with both the men in her life

Have they ever given a thought what this would do to her though

If they both claim to love her well one doesn't but he does love her

How can they not see what this is doing to her too

So it seems things are no good for khushi

One side her friend going far from her

And on the other her hubby not taking to her either

Wow her life has become one roller coaster

Damn she cant concentrate on her work either

So leaving huh

Well guess its for the best

Why make it worse for her and himself right

She wont be his anymore she is married though not happy right now but its for the best

Well thank god he is letting her be

No point in making it worse for her right

Though am sure this isn't easy for him

He does know doesn't he that she could have been his had he not wasted so much time

After all arnav only just came in her life

Rishu was there before him and he had more chances to make her his

Now whats the point lamenting it when its too late rishu

Hmmm arnav never calls her

Wohi toh problem hai naa

His lack of communication with his wife is making things that much harder

Poor rishu he cant get over the fact he lost her

And lost her to whom arnav of all people

Well you did lose out

Its your own doing

You left it late he got to her first and sorry to say she accepted him

Of course I know why he is thinking of all that

But all this if only isn't gonna get him anything

Though you cant blame him for wishing that it was different

He does love her after all

Wow bhooke maarne ka plan tha

Sorry just kidding

But yes it could have been his

Had he got enough courage to go and ask her before her wedding was fixed with shyam and even arnav was asked to be her groom

Then maybe it would have been him

But with arnav there of course she would end up with him only and not rishu

Oh so he did notice all that happened in dinner on his birthday

And yet he hasn't made it any easier for her

Well he is her hubby so of course she wouldn't feel like eating if he wasn't there

Plus it was his birthday too

Feels weird if birthday boy isn't enjoying his birthday dinner

Well am glad you could tell why he went away from there

She loves her hubby doesn't she

And even rishu could see that

Shame her hubby cant believe in that love

Story of her life that

The one she is hoping to acknowledge her love doesn't thinks its love

And rishu could get her love

Well yes he did

He too had refused to marry her when his dad asked him to

But to be fair he didn't know her then

And also didn't like her back then

But when he did he made sure she was his

Before rishu could make his move arnav made his

Yes he is one lucky guy

But does he realise that he is lucky

Somehow I doubt it

I know right rishu if only you had given it thought and proposed to her before

Well no point in think of if only's now

At least you accepted it that she cant be yours

It wasn't that fast not really

You had a full year to woo her

But you let your indecision rule you and hence arnav went and conquered his goal

Making khushi his

Of course you cant forget her soon

But you have to right

After all she cant be yours now

So no point in making it worse for yourself

It will be hard for you to see her not being yours

So best to start to distance yourself

See at least here arnav didn't give a damn to what other would think of him

He accepted her with her limp and all

And you who was her friend since so long couldn't

Cant say I blame him but yes his thinking sure is right

He was a fool to let her go just due to the fact she limps

If only you didn't see her limp but her

But you didn't and now is repenting that fact

It isn't easy when you are young and impressionable to think rationally naa

And this is what happened with rishu too

Well why did you wait that long

And distance yourself from her

If you had given her indication and I mean clear ones since the subtle flirting she doesn't get you would be in ASR place

Maybe not even then cause then it wouldn't be about arhi

Staying near her now will make it worse

Duh seeing the one you love with another can never soothe you dude

Well he sure found that out too

Distance from her now is the best solution to all this

Maybe that day will come that you wont feel so much for her

Only time can tell rishu

But till then distance yourself dude from her

Hmmm so la still doesn't know anything does she

Best she don't know right

Your absence does matter

But her hubby matter more to her

And for him it seems she didn't wanna ask

Not that she wont miss you or anything

But give her a break too man

Damn this is getting more and more complex now

Rishu you know things have changed

She is no longer single woman

Things are no longer same for you guys

So how can the old days come back now what with arnav hating your guts

And you hating his of course

She wont come back even if arnav doesn't want her in his life

She wouldn't do that no matter what

Am glad he got that

He has committed a lot of errors as has she

But yes she is pretty accommodating isn't she

Would anyone else in her place do what she did

Well if that's the case can someone please tell me what she as in khushi can do to make it easier for herself and him

She is wrapped around his finger or the other way around

It seems that she is wrapped but I think he too is

If only he would acknowledge the same

Is it wise going out to lunch with rishu

But he is going today naa

This much she can do for her bestie right

You know it wouldn't be this hard for her if rishu was a girl

Well then there wouldn't be so many problems right

Last time he is seeing her

What with her avoidance of him

Go on khushi you aren't gonna see him again maybe

Arnav well when has he made things easier for you and himself

But what has that gotta do with having lunch with rishu

What am I saying he has everything to do with her

And there again both are giving her a hard time

What are you guys children

Sulking if no one is ready to play with you

Seriously both are hell bent on giving her attitude

Just once I would like to see her doing the same to them

Then see how they like it

But she wont will she what with her personality

They are blooming lucky she is way too nice for her own good

If it was anyone else in her place she would have given them both a piece of her mind by now

This being nice to all will one day cost her

Really why are they after her

Spare her at least you understand her rishu

Are you sure he knows her from that long

And even then he cant tell how this is breaking her apart

Having to choose between her loved ones

What can she say and even if she did would that help

You are only gonna see it as his fault only

When they both need to work together in this relationship

Getting a third person isn't gonna help

In fact its gonna make it worse

And am glad she told him to not butt in

Of course she didn't say that but the meaning is same

That man happens to be her hubby

No he didn't do anything wohi toh rona hai boss

Peeche hi padh jaaye log

Rishu leave it please

Wow she finally snaps at him

Hope she does the same with hubby dearest

She is right which wife would tell her friend whats wrong when its best solved between them two only better that way

Not again am not gonna say anything here

Or might just cursing them both again

The hell with if only's

No don't end up hurting them only

They do it too did either of them think about you hell no

Both can see their suffering what about her

Damn why is she so nice and thinks that all are like her

When nothing could be further from the truth

Why is it she is always saying sorry when will they

Do you really understand rishu I doubt it

She is right he doesn't understand if he did well we wouldn't be having this convo

Oh boy this is not gonna be pleasant

Will you really be able to hear it mate

How could he do this to her

And he claims to love her

Don't you get on high ground there mate

When you couldn't tell her your feelings how is it her fault she chose him over you

These men in her life cant let her be can they

Well yes she has changed but not enough it seems

She is still nice to everyone even when they try to make her do things their way

Excuse me how dare you accuse her of not thinking about you

If she didn't she would have told you to shove off

And not to interfere in her life

But she didn't do that either

And you are trying to take advantage of that

Guess it needs to be out with him fully

Bahut ho gaya yaar only this much she cant take

She is a human too

Do not do this to her dude

Poor things as if hubby hasn't given her enough grief now him too

And she is right

Did you actually think about her when she was with you

Now that she has arnav then you realise your love

Where was this love when she needed it

When she fell for you

And you didn't give a damn due to her limp

No she doesn't love you she used to love you

There is a difference and very big one

Now she loves only her hubby

Wait what with him

Its over now get on with your life

And let her live too

Excuse me did you make the first move to her

No you didn't had you done what arnav did them maybe you guys could have had a chance

Not anymore rishu

She is right they aren't meant to be

Let it go rishu she is now married

Whats gotten into this boy all of a sudden

She said she loved you not anymore

Are you even listening to her

Why cant they just let her have one day ion peace

But no how can that be right

Did she just say that

Wait no it cant be

Her day is unlucky he didn't oh he did

And it is isn't it

He was there her hubby

No wonder that boy was saying all this

Thank you rishabh for doing this to her

Hope you loved it

Making her life even more miserable

Once again he only heard half of it and assumed things

Thanks for the confidence ion your wife

I cant believe he did that to her

And then he claims to be her best friend

If this is how her friends then she is best without them

Not again why them why her

He isn't gonna listen now dear

You know him by now

Yes he is a certified fool

And not for the reasons he is thinking himself to be

Because once again he is assuming things

I know it seems she has broken your trust

But did you really believe her arnav

You were waiting for something like this to happen

And don't you dare deny it

She did it for you

But rishabh had to go ruin that

Seems these two men will be the death of her

She has fallen in love with insensitive jerk for sure

And I mean not just him but that other dude too

If only you were the man she thinks you to be

When nothing can be further from the truth

So what you aren't her first love

She wasn't your first in other matter

But did she say anything about that no she didnt

But no he was to be her first everything

Why should you be that

Have you given her any reason for her to fall in love with you

If she hasn't he hasn't either

Kab tak khushi will you do this

Keep begging him to believe you when he never does dear

Ahhh but he doesn't give a damn

Now he wont believe her

Man I feel so bad for her

And also for him too

What the hell do you mean this is over

You mean your obsession for her

As that's all it was for you right arnav

He didn't just say that to her

Don't say such things which you will come to regret later on

And who gave you the right to throw her outta your life

It was you who wanted her with you

She wasn't the one who blackmailed her to marry you

And this is it mate

Why marry her then

Damn she knows and funny thing is not from you

As a hubby isn't it your duty to open up to your wife

But you didn't even give her that

Really you think pity is it

If she had pity on you she would never have married you

Why ruin her life for you

For someone so damaged as you

Oh man I am so gonna blast him off

Proposal arnav don't kid yourself

It wasn't a proposal but blackmail

Don't try to make yourself seem all damsel in distress

She isn't a deceiver like your mother

Don't let your rage get better of you or you will regret it

Well would have been better if he had hit her

No khushi that's it no more begging this man

Why is it always her who has to prove it

Why cant he prove to her that he will be a good hubby she deserves

Or does she not deserve to have someone love and cherish her

He didn't push her but he did

Oh no what did he do

He pushed khushi and she got hit by a car

Wow I never thought this day would come

That he would hurt her physically as well

No this is bad

Poor khushi oh god she has been hit badly

How could you do this arnav push her

Funny how she is always proving herself

Seems this time she paid with her life too

Hope he is happy now

Well he wanted her out of his life and now she is

Dammit stop wasting time and take her to hospital

To err is human I know

But this is taking it too far

Wow you do it beautifully

Thanx for the chapter

Cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nicely written its always feel good to read such a piece of work .The way you deals with such a difficult storyline is amazing .Regarding this update ,its brilliant the way u describe each and every character feelings and emotional dilemma .Hope now they both will understand how they using and mishandling Khushi for their own selfish reasons .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update.
Why Arnav's entry is always in a wrong time... I hate that Rishab.
He knew Arnav was there, that' why he provoked Khushi to said those things. Poor Khushi.
Do no ke beech faash gayee hai...
OMG...Accident😲
Waiting for more ...
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Now time for repentance Arnav Babu.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well, I am on the verge of crying and I really can't do that unless I want my colleagues to think that I am much insaner than they thought I was. What the hell just happened!!!!!!! So many times in our lives we are so wrapped up in our past that we never respect and cherish what we have and it is only the fear of losing it, or actually losing it that can make us realize it's importance. But unfortunately, many a times, by the time we do come to this realization, it is already gone and then we are left to mull over the past all over again. A vicious circle it is. Now, to talk about Arnav, I understand his feelings and his insecurities and everything else. But he supposed to be a mature person right? Whatever Khushi told Rishab was all in past tense, a fact that the great ASR chose to conveniently ignore. Now, what did he expect, that Khushi should have waited for him all her life, even if she didn't know that he existed. Is he freaking crazy!!!!!!! She is 21, right and we generally have our first crushes when we are 15, right. SO once again, is he freaking crazy.

Okay, now I know that you are not cruel and so I don't need to ask you or request you to not kill Khushi, becoz I know you won't, right? But, one request, this time please don't take so long to update, will be waiting very impatiently.
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Posted: 11 years ago
gosh
accident
interesting
pls update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
first very sorry for not being able to comment on previous update. simple reason 'busy' nowdays.
getting to this chapter.

An unexpected turn in the story. but then the matter of rishab needed to be sort out.
end of this chapter leave me with shock and expectation of next chapter.

a very nice update.
Edited by anjidesena6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg khushi met with an accident???
Why is arnav reacting this way
Now to the top of it is this rishabh clad
I really feel sorry for khushi
Hw much Wud that poor soul suffer
I just hate this arnav
I hope he regrets this very much
Hope someone puts some sense into this LGs brain
Cnt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just dont know whether to hate Arnav or understand him !! Poor Khushi. This is what happens when you try to be nice and take care of everyone's feelings.
I just hope she recovers soon and Arnav realises his feelings for her.

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