Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 26)

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

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Unres...

What a stunning climax to a heartwrenching update. Damn girl, you made me cry!

I cried for her in the last update and I cried for her helplessness and her misery and for the accident she was pushed into, all for no fault of hers. I can certainly relate to her difficulty in making an extremely difficult man understand that she is innocent, that her love for him is pure and unselfish. But for Arnav, only his perogative, his take on the events matters. Everythingelse, including Khushi and their marriage, can go to hell instantly,so that it gives him the saisfaction of oneuppance.

Khushis relationship with Arnav,with this misustandings, have gone from bad to worse to complete disintigration of their relationship.

so he wants to end this marriage? over his suspicions? Well nothing, no declaration of love is ever going to seep through his rock like mind, except the most cruelest, horriifying, and gutwrenching of realities...death.

Khushi's death at his own hands, his own nightmare coming true right before his eyes. Yeah, thats what males like him with egos the size of Jupiter, deserve. Thats going to to wake him up real good bring him crashing back to planet earth. Sometimes men needto lose all that they have been blessed with by God, to realize what they had, what they took for granted.

I hope Karan, Rishabh,Bare Papa, AND Buaji learn the truth of the accident and give Arnav a peice of their minds. So what if he will be distraught and nearly sickly raving mad...he made an error in judgement that could cost Khushi her life...he needs to understand the depth of his mistakes and make amends.

One thing I am sure...His redemption will be really worth reading.

Bring it on!!!!!

Edited by siamesecat - 11 years ago

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rubikjules

@rubikjules

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

I'm numb with shock. .!!!!!

😲

I was like this for 5 min before I could recover. ..I did not see this oming..amazing twist..

You know strangely enough I feel bad for all 3 of them. ..

Earlier I used to not like rishabh..coz he was indirectly a hindrance in our arnav n khushi's relationship. ..but now I feel bad for him too. ..For his lost love...agreed that he didn't act on it sooner ..but if it weren't for our need to have arhi together I would want rishabh to have that second chance. ..

I feel bad for Arnav coz he is still clearly struggling to cope with the wounds of his past..although now it will be interesting to read if he moves on for khushi. .let go those negative emotions. .

Khushi ia trying so hard to keep everyone happy. ..she definitely doesn't deserve this. ..

Waiting for the next update is gonna b a torture. .

You r an amazing writer. ..

Thks for d email notification. ..

Jules

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

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After a long time I've got a place in first few pages.. Lucky day!!! 😆
But what happened here... 😭😭😭
They were both coming mid-way but they have some struggles in their destiny. How on earth Arnav's timing could be so wrong!!!
You know I was thinking about Arnav coming there. But I was hoping for a change that this time Arnav will listen to Khushi telling Rishabh that their marriage is not a vain cause, Arnavji is not a vain cause. But alas!! as his bad luck would have it, the conversation soon changed and at this particular point I'm very angry at Rishabh. Angry for doing this, for dragging their conversation to their friendship and his years of love. He may not have intentionally done this but the thing is that he himself knows that he has curbed his attraction for Khushi for years, that too not because of fear of rejection but because of his discomfort of her limp. He was her childhood friend and yet it affected him. How is he different from Shyam then? Shyam barely knew Khushi. May be he too would have fallen for her over the course of time. Yes I know I'm being unreasonable but I am damn angry at him. Because of him we can lose Khushi now. He can't think that he will get whatever whenever he wants. I know he is hurting but that doesn't mean he will hurt others too. Khushi chose Arnav over him, deal with it. She too dealt with her emotions when he was busy dating girls in the past and I must say she did it very gracefully without letting him wind of her soft corner for him. Just because Khushi always gave all her time to him and Lavanya and had no other friends as such doesn't mean this will continue for life. She is married and has her life and priorities too. Because of him things went downhill. Last time also it was his ill timing. When Khushi was asking him to be friends he was scowling but then decided to be friends and a scene was made in front of Arnav and now once again. Rishabh has too bad a timing for the luck of Arnav & Khushi.
There was only Arnav who didn't give a damn about her limp. Sumer, chachu, Rishabh, Shyam everyone treated her differently because she limped but for Arnav she was normal and natural. Their heart found their way to each other. Not when they were rarely talking and not when he started developing feelings for her. Arnav only cared for one thing that Khushi remains with him forever. He had no other wish. So I won't call him lucky, manipulative yes but not lucky. It was his mind and efforts which led Arnav & Khushi together.
I'm angry at Arnav also. Why he has to fight so much? Why can't he believe Khushi completely?
And I'm angry at Khushi too. If only she had told Arnav before about her first crush and now just friendship thing! It would have angered Arnav obviously but she could have handled it back then. I'm sure listening to her saying this to Rishabh has hurt him more. Now this seemed to him like cheating.
I guess I have ranted enough for the day.

Okay now coming to other things and emotions, once again you have proved how a third person perspective is totally different and makes realises what we miss out on. Arnav didn't pay attention to that Khushi didn't touch her food while he was pretending to be busy on a call. But Rishabh did. Human nature - We first notice things which are hurtful to us. Rishabh noticed Khushi not participating, Arnav noticed Khushi not coming after him to cajole him. Rishabh noticed Khushi defending Arnav, waiting for her call but Arnav noticed Khushi laughing with Rishabh, Khushi calling Rishabh her first crush & love.
Both men first absorbed the thing that had the potential to hurt them without completely understanding. Rishabh didn't understand that Khushi considers him a good friend and Arnav didn't realise that Khushi truly loves him.

I've only this one tiny hope that fear of losing her would make Arnav see some sense. It may make him realise that though Khushi told Rishabh that Rishabh is important for her but it was him whom she always referred to as CENTER OF HER EXISTENCE.

Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

That was one heck of a MU that is bound to have repercussions!

Khushi will she battle with her life now or just give up???

Lovely update.

Edited by rulama - 11 years ago

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clover

@clover

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

You are an amazing writer. Love you for this story.

When you write I can actually feel the emotions of the characters playing out in me. The way Khushi is restless for Arnav's phone call or Arnav's confusion over his feelings for Khushi and her trustworthiness. The only person I don't actually feel for is Rishab, though that might have more to do with my prejudice for Arnav.

I must say that I did not see this coming and I am not going to do any more guesses regarding the future track of this story. I only have one request - please wrap it up as soon as you can because the wait to know what happens next is killing me.😵

What I find cruel is that whenever Arnav decides to surprise Khushi at work, he ends up getting a shock instead. The last time it was a hug and this time a declaration of love. And these days, it seems like everything that Khushi tries is not giving her the desired result. Its like the fates have decided to prove her a liar in front of Arnav when she isn't one. I wonder what would have happened if she had told Arnav about her crush by herself before. This was certainly the worst way possible to let him know about it. Right when he was thinking of making amends.

What is with him, her and cruel timing

As much as I feel bad about what happened to Khushi I can't help feeling bad for Arnav either. I was feeling bad for Rishab before but by the end of the chapter I don't think I do anymore. Did he actually trap her in her own words when he knew that Arnav was watching? (Please confirm)

Khushi wants so bad to prioritise her husband over everyone else but she is such a person that she can't help but think about others as well. Can't really blame her for that. She is trying real hard. I only wish Arnav understood that Khushi wouldn't have married him if she wasn't over Rishab. The both are from the same strata of society and Rishab had the advantage of knowing her for 10 years as well as being her best friend. But then again when a mind is covered by the red haze of rage, nothing really comes into perspective expect the fact that you have been wronged.

The end has made me scared. You talked about second chances and Khushi's desperation to make Arnav believe in her love. Is the part of Khushi's song done in the last update when Arnav left her (chapter 41) or is it yet to come?

I'm sure the guilt is going to eat Arnav all the while because of what he said to her and because he pushed her just before the accident. Also wasn't this Arnav's dreaded nightmare?

She was lying in a pool of blood. Her glassy eyes accusing. And cursed as he was, he could only watch stunned as she slipped away from life.

I still won't worry that much about Khushi's safety because you have ensured a happy ending and that is not possible without her.😛

Right now I'm just biting my nails while I anxiously wait for what happens next.😳

Edited by clover - 11 years ago

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Sniggy24

@Sniggy24

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Omg...what a dramatic twist :(

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

ohhh...😭...hope nothing happens to her and he comes to his senses soon...the update was amazing

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

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Well, If not Shyam, it was probably Arnav himself or just fate that has put Khushi in danger now...
Though I had said I wouldn't mind something like this happening, now I feel really sad that this would be the only reason to make Arnav change 😭

Again, I can't blame him for the way he reacted... His anger was justified and like always I say "I'd do the same"! Even if Khushi is not Sujata Mathur, he has reasons to think of worse in every situation. If his own mom deceived him, he cannot trust anyone that easily. I am not defending his behavior over Khushi's situation, but the girl is just unlucky while trying to keep everyone happy. 😭 Both RIshabh and Arnav blame her, and she can't even talk about it to anyone.

As they say, it's very difficult to maintain pure friendship between a guy and a girl. No matter how much Khushi wanted to stay away from Rishabh she always thought of him as her best friend and could never be rude to him, and look where it's got her.. 😕

Just toady I was re-reading 'Forget Me Not' and since I was guessing a little bit on this line I was feeling a bit sad. Why in both stories Khushi has to go through some physical injury for Arnav to realize his love for her? Actually this one is more sad because not only Arnav doesn't want to acknowledge his love for her, but he also doubts her all the time..

Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 11 years ago