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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Oops!
What the hell Arnav did?
poor Khushi!
hope she teaches hik a good lesson!
Continue soon!

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45678

@45678

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

read all the updates today, its simply amazing. loved it. fab. plz pm the next part

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Smita Gogoi

@Gogoismita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Omg Arnav can reallly play dirtyy...
Waiting for the next...

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sarrahyusuf

@sarrahyusuf

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Different story with a differnt concept.. Very well written.. Read all the chapters in one go..

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

its a nice update ... and i can't believe that arnav did that ... khushi should get back at him ... and Rohan seems like a really nice guy... waiting g=for the next soon ...

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hello87_11

@hello87_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

just started reading this and totally love it! :)

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Just started reading the story. Have just read till Chapter 4, you write well & it makes for interesting reading, but honestly I can't understand how Khushi can go all mushy eyed over a man who clearly violated her privacy by coming into her room. I'm quite aggressive & fierce about my privacy :/) so a little puzzled :-(

Khushi comes across as a hormonal, desperate to get laid teenager instead of a smart sharp college student which she clearly is.

But I like the fact that you are portraying both of them finding each other attractive physically ( and not just Arnav) which is normal, I guess it just bothers me that Khushi is willing to let him walk over her and instead of raging at him for walking into her room uninvited is all coy & apologetic in turns :-(

And what's with Arnav? Who walks into their biggest client's daughter's room uninvited? And actually employs his BIGGEST client's daughter as his PA?

And Khushi is right, what is this experience going to count for on her CV.? Acquiring coffee making, appointment & file managing skills :-) as they say, you shouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth :/) she had the opportunity to work in her dad's office, chose not to, didn't bother to ask Arnav what she would be doing, and look where it has landed her :-)

I would love to see a feisty Khushi giving Arnav as good as she gets!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 11 years ago

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

That was a hell thing to do:) feeling bad for Khushi

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Just finishd Chap 6. Now I am even more puzzled so as to why Khushi wants to stay and work with Arnav or does not complain to her father.

Arnav is really disgusting - not for the incident with Ananya - but for his behaviour with Khushi and commenting on her character...

And I must say I am surprised at Shashi - a father of a girl. Every girl's father is twice as careful about where his daughter goes, what she does, whom she meets with etc.. he has happily sent her to work for a man, no two men, who have a reputation as womanisers, he is willing to let her work as a PA rather than get proper experience and now he is ok with her going with a man (with a terrific reputation) to Greece. Is he so confident of his importance financially to Arnav that he would trust his most precious daughter to him?

I hope Rohan helps Khushi get back her sense of self respect. But I am so glad to see her yell at Arnav.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Read Chapter 7. Arnav is an a*****e.. after this it would be a shame if Khushi fell in love with him! But after this, if she still continues to work for him and go to Greece with him, she is asking for all the trouble that she gets into. If you cant respect yourself, how can you expect someone else to respect you?