KR SS 'Meant to be Together' Part 7 on page 19 17/5/2015 - Page 3

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Part 2: will you be my Girl Friend??



Krisha were returning from her couching classes when she found Rey standing at the road side.

Kriya: Hi... Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Rey: kisika intzaar...

Kriya: intazaar?? Kiska?

Rey: kisi khas ka...

Kriya: aap ka ghar iss taraf hai?

Rey: nahi... kisiko kuch kehne jaa raha hun.

Kriya: oh...

Rey: suno... tum meri Girlfriend banogi?

Kriya: kya? Kya bak rahe ho aap? R u crazy??

Rey: of course I m... just for u only!

Kriya: stop this nonsense! Sharon, let's go.

Rey: are... Kriya suno toh. I know tum kya soch rahi ho... par Kriya yahi sach hai that I love u... I really love u Kriya...

Kriya: I don't like jokes!

Rey: its not a joke! It's the truth... think about it han...!

Kriya: aap...

Suddenly they saw their skul teacher and they proceeded in opposite way.

Next Day (School Bus)

Rey: principal ne agar kal k bare me pucha toh kya bologi?

Kriya: yahi... k khali rasta tha, hum akele aa rahe the toh bhaiya ne saath diya.

Rey: wow! Superb! But don't say bhaiya... I think u care for me.

Kriya: bhaiya nahi toh kya saiyan bolun?

Rey: han wo chalega...!

Kriya makes an O face and Rey winks smiling.

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Days passed. Reyaansh tried his best to make Kriya fall for him. But it wasn't too easy.

One day (school canteen)

Kriya and Sharon are sitting as usual. Rey comes with a pack of chocolates.

Sharon: dekh Kriya... tere liye kya mast chocolates aa rahe hain yaar...

Kriya; shut up Sharon, bakwas band kar... mujhe nahi chahiye chocolate woclate.

Rey comes to them.

Rey: Hi girls!

Sharon: hi!

Kriya tries to avoid him.

Rey takes the chocolate and gives it to Sharon.

Rey: lo Sharon.. yeh tumhare liye.

Sharon: mere liye? Thnx!

Kriya looks at them surprised. Rey watches her expression.

Rey: Sharon... tumhe nahi lagta kuch zal raha hai???

Sharon: jal raha hai? kya?

She then sees Rey looking at Kriya.

Sharon: I think u r right! Smell toh mujhe b aa rahi hai. kyun Kriya???

She stands up.

Kriya: mujhe koi smell nahi aa rahi hai... main jaa rahi hun. Tu chocolate kha.

She leaves. ShaRey laughs and have a high-five.

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Kriya is sitting in the park.

Kriya: khud ko samajhte kya hain? Honge wo smart... par main b kacchi khiladi nahi hun. Itni jaldi haath nahi aane wali. Bade aaye zal raha hai kuch... main nahi jalti kisise.!

Rey: toh mene kab kaha k tum zal rahi thi?

Kriya looks aside and shocks seeing Rey sitting beside her.

Kriya: aap... Yahan kya kar rahe ho???

Rey: oh hello! Yeh tumhari private property nahi hai k main nahi aa sakta.

Kriya: mujhe aapse baat nahi karni.

Rey: mujhe karni hai.

Kriya: par mujhe nahi karni na...

She stood up and about to go when Rey hold her hand and drag her. She was exactly oh his lap!

Kriya: Reyaansh... Reyaansh kya kar rahe ho chodo mujhe... koi dekh lega.

Rey: dekhne do.

Kriya: Reyaansh plz leave me koi aa jayega.

Rey: aane do... waise bhi, tum toh bahana banane me expert ho na...

Kriya tries her best to be free but she was in a strong hold. Rey smiled mischievously and left her. She looks into his eyes and gets lost in it, Rey smiled.

Rey: ab hume koi nahi dekhega??

Kriya gets her senses back and stands straight.

Rey: waise... kal picnic par toh aa rahi ho na???

Kriya: picnic?

Rey: han..

Kriya: dekhungi.

She was about to go.

Rey: Kriya!

She stops.

Rey: I Love You!

She smiles unknowingly and leaves.

Rey: kab tak Kriya? Kabtak dabaogi apni feelings? Kabhi na kabhi toh... bologi hi.

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PICNIC

Sharon: Kriya jaldi kar... late ho jayenge.

Kriya: han tu chal main aati hun.

Sharon leaves.

Kriya: acha khasa picnic pea aye the, patanahi ye museum dekhne ka idea kise sujh gya... sara mazaa kirkira...!

After sometimes bus leaves. Kriya comes running out of tent.

Kriya: hi! Stop ruko mere liye!

Then Rey comes.

Rey: shit! Main phirse late ho gaya!

Both look at each other.

Rey: bus toh chut gayi!

Kriya: nahi.. hum chut gaye hain!

Rey: ab kya Karen?

Kriya: rasta dhunte hain.

Rey: han chalo.

Kriya: alag alag dhunde jaldi mil jayega.

Rey: lekin agar hum kho gaye toh?

Kriya: ek sec...

She takes out wool from her bag.

Rey: yeh kya hai?

Kriya: iska end aap pakdo, ek main pakadti hun. Alag alag jaate hain, jise rastsa mila wo dusre ko pukarega, aur hum khoenge b nahi!

Rey; wow! What an idea! Lets do it.

They goes in opposite direction. After sometime, Kriya gets bump with an elephant and shouts. Rey hears it and runs to her direction. Both runs and gets bump to each other.

Rey: kya hua?

Kriya: kya? Kuch b toh nahi.

Rey: toh chikhi kyun?

Kriya: main??? Nahi toh!

Rey: Kriya, jhoot mat bolo.

Kriya: main jhoot nahi bol rahi hun. Sach yeh hai k aap akele darr rahe the issliye daudte hue chale aaye.

Rey: oh madam! Dar main nahi tum rahi thi!

Kriya: oye hello! Main kisise nahi darti. Apna khayal khud rakh sakti hun.

Rey: acha? Yeh baat? Toh thik hai. rakho apna khayal. Main jaa raha hun.

Kriya: haan toh jao na. mujhe b koi zarurat nahi hai aapki.

Rey: fine! I m going!

They go in different direction and throw the wool they were having. After a while it starts darkening and raining.

Kriya: pata nahi main itna akadti kyun hun! Reyaansh se jhagda kar ke apne pair par khud hi kulhadi maar di maine. Ab toh andhera hone laga hai, barish bhi badh rahi hai, aur dar bhi!

Then she hears some sounds of wild animals. She starts crying in fear. Suddenly she feels something on her shoulder. She turns and about to shout when he keeps his other hand on her mouth. And that's Rey!

Rey: ssshhh! Chillana mat! Main hun.

Kriya haves a breath of relief and hugs him tightly crying.

Kriya: acha hua Reyaansh, jo aap aa gaye... main bht dar gayi thi... mujhe laga main...

Rey: Kriya, Kriya relax! Main hun na... don't cry.

Kriya: par... (she looks at him) hum toh alag alag raste gaye the na? phir aap yaha kaise?

Rey: main janta tha k aisa hi kuch hone wala hai... isliye main tumhare piche piche hi aa raha tha.

Kriya: apko pata tha??? Kaise?

Rey: bus... aise hi!

Kriya: nahi Reyaansh! Aise hi nahi... batayiye aapko kaise pata tha? Kaise jante the aap? Kaise jante ho aap mujhe..., itni achi tarah se..?

Rey: Kriya...

Rey: come on Reyaansh! Tell me! Why???

Rey: because I love u!!! kyunki pyar karta hun main tumse! Sayad apni zaan se bhi jyada! I love u Kriya... I really love u very much!

They had a long eye lock, lost into each other's eyes.. Rey was looking into her eyes with love and care and Kriya was looking into his eyes with love and happiness. The rain made the moment more romantic!

Their eye lock was broken by the bus horn.

Kriya: lagta hai sab log aa gaye.

She was going when he hold her hand.

Rey: apna zawaab toh deti jao.

She tries to free her hand.

Rey comes close.

Rey: jabtak tum zawaab nahi deti, main haath nahi chodunga. (she looks at him) main chodunga nahi Kriya.

Kriya: wo... main...

Rey: tum kya??

Kriya: wo...

Rey: bolo...

Kriya: Reyaansh main...

Rey: Kriya tum???

Kriya: main b aapse pyar karti hun. I Love You Too!!!

He left her hand in happiness and she ran away!


to be continued...

15th May 2014

tried my best! hope u like it... waiting for your opinions guys!


sorry for typos!!

Love,

Shirisha.


Link to Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3983043/kr-ss-meant-to-be-together-part-7-on-page-19-17-5-2015?pn=9

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
nice update..loved reys concern for kriya..\
wow kriyaansh confession..
but i fear wat will happen when kriya gets to know abt rey-vicky thingy n the bet..
update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Neelambari-

nice update..loved reys concern for kriya..\
wow kriyaansh confession..
but i fear wat will happen when kriya gets to know abt rey-vicky thingy n the bet..
update the next part soon


thnx... i will try to do it soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
beautiful update
can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: don girls

beautiful update

can't wait for the next part


thnk u... i will try to update asap...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Shirisha amazing...
Loved it...
Sabse jyda vo Bhaiya and Saiyan vala part.. Haha..!! 🤣
Schi mei mast tha..!!
Kriya ne kehdia waah itni jaldi..!! :p
Very gud..
Is it ur frst time.??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: PunjabiKudi_17

Shirisha amazing...
Loved it...
Sabse jyda vo Bhaiya and Saiyan vala part.. Haha..!! 🤣
Schi mei mast tha..!!
Kriya ne kehdia waah itni jaldi..!! :p
Very gud..
Is it ur frst time.??


thnk u so much yaar Rupanshi!

ya of course! i m new to forum so its my first time na...

i will try my best to give lovely updates all the time!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Very kriyaanshilicious
Totally loved it
Waiting for next update
I just hope kriya doesnt get to know about the bet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm prt dr
lvd it
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really cute update!!

Rey and Kriya totally in love!!

Wonder what will happen when Kriya finds out abt the ReCky convo!

And I truly hope Rey's feelings are genuine!!

But really nyc one!Update soon! :D

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