SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 18

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

~Unres~

So a new beginning ha? Samaira meets Anuradha (No Formality,No Di..Only Apnapan)xP

Chlo isi baat pe have a bite of dairy milk:-

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(See, brains use karke banaya bhi hain)xD

With this dairy milk, shubh aarambh has been done!!!

So now ANU,

Coming to the update:-

First of title hi itta mast che!!

"The fall"

Thankfully this time I knew the meaning of both the words used in title "the" & "fall". Hahahaha!!xP. Smart enough na?xD

What an amusing update it was!

"If there is an upside to free-falling, It's the chance you give your friends to catch you!" Beautiful lines Anu!! Deep thoughts ha!! Your own lines??

Starting hi itni fantastic thi. <3

Sanyukta fainted en Randhir held her (spcl mention - by her waist) Awww... I was missing this scene in first update.

Lemme *Droool*

Ohk back to update~

This update was hysterical!! I was LMAO with those DHAANSU dialogues of RandhirC-A-D-A-V-E-R hahahaha!!xD

Even I didn't know dead bodies are called cadavers.

Then the Kaustuki's confession of her being Sanyukta's Roomie hahahaha!!xP

Kya mast dialogues likhe Anu!!

Todays Show Stopper(here I'm confused b/w the show stoppers en show stealers. Both means the same kya? Please share your valuable info.hahaha!!xP) were these DIALOGUES.

I love the way how you show us a person's Anima and Persona (talking about Randhir) the way you wrote about him being cold hearted in front of others but an aching heart when all alone is commendable!!

I'm a dumbo and generally don't understand such minute details but yours ART clarifies it very well.

But still my brain is churning a lot thinking and guessing how are all these mysteries related to Sanyukta?? I know you'll first make us tadapte jhadapte readers. Hahaha!xP

When are you planning to unravel a few covert mysteries? Huh? You'll derange me with so many mysteries. Hahahaha!!xD

These mystery kinda stories are your forte. Isn't it?

So you've successfully enthralled us all with "Along Came She" just like "Meant to be".

I managed to envisage every character of the story. How? Of course the credit goes to the story teller. <3 *Takes a bow*

Honestly telling you, YOU ARE A NOVELIST (This isn't a hyperbole). I mean it!!

Waiting for next part(needless to say EAGERLY)

Love ya

Samaira

Originally posted by: anki08

Hey Anuradha,, Offended,,not at all sweets...Its been more than just a pleasure,,infact,,it has been bliss to be a reader of this fiction... You just took me back to my first year memories,,indeed,,its the most memorable one..That D- hall with filthy smell of formalin staunching your nose!!!

Infact,,a boy fainted in our class on day when we were first shown the cadavers,,,...

You have beautifully picked out every intricacy and have done absolute justice to it...You,,my sweets,,are an epitome of sagacity...What a mind blowing execution of a super-se-uparr concept,,you have it in you yaar...

You are just amazing to the core,you just give people goosebumps with your writing...👏👏

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

I'm so glad I decided to read this story!

I'm loving this story already and it's only the second part!

I can understand Randhir's rudeness but Ishita! Ugh! I hate her!

Randhir's pain makes my heart hurt! :(

But you're doing an amazing job with the story!

Keep up the fantastic work!

--Kiret :)

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

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The update was indeed amazing!! 👏

I am happy that Randhir is not a 'loner'

He at least has his friends, Ramu Chacha, his uncle and others with him who does not make him feel alone.

The character you have described of Randhir is mind blowing

You have shown him to be calm, composed, intelligent, smart, confident yet a bit rude (I don't know if it is the right word to describe him)

And no wonder he is rude after what he has suffered in his childhood.

He is unlike his friends (except Parth) who are arrogant rich brats

His friends (except Parth) insulted Sanyukta just because she was from a poor family but thankfully Randhir was not like this.

Sanyukta is so impressed by him 😳

rather fallen in love with him

I am happy with the bonding Kaustuki and Sanyukta share.

Sanyukta Agarwal became the first student that year to become victim to the infamous 'dissection hall'.

This was hilarious 😆

Without another word, he shoved a limp sanyukta into Kaustuki's awaiting hands and brushed his lab-coat where it had developed 'crease' from Sanyukta's 'fall'.

This was again hilarious. 😆

Moreover, the fall was not at all made up. It appeared to be happening in real.

Randhir saved her from falling but did not take her to the clinic but instead brushed off the crease. 😆

You made Kaustuki and Jignesh help her and then they became friends.

This was all so real.

I loved the scene when Sanyukta went to talk with Randhir.

I just loved the dialogues of Randhir (totally Randhir style). 😳

Witnessing a twin murder at the mere age of 10 and that too of the most important people in his life, took a toll on his psyche. He became cold and detached. There was a burning desire buried deep within him to avenge his parents. 😭

"The world thinks it was an accident. They covered it up. They killed my parents. They shattered my life...And i'm not resting until i find out who this 'they' are..."

😲😲

But what if there was more to their murder than what meets the eye? What if his childhood disaster comes to haunt Randhir in his youth? And what if a poor innocent girl with big dreams falls in love with this rich guy and in turn gets caught in his mess?

(lines from prologue)

This mystery is killing me.

What you have in store for us? 😕

I know the mystery will unfold after a very long time but I will be eagerly waiting for the mystery to unfold.

Thnx for the PM

Do update soon

Love,

Shefali

P.S. I f you are gonna write some novel in the future. I will be the first to grab a copy of it. 😊

Anu

Originally posted by: forevermine

Any!!

Gosh do u noe u create miracle??

Ur writing is so utterly perfect...

I am in luv wid the eva before the story proceeds...

Thats jzz the fabulous start definitely that's made me feel so..

The way u nailed sanyus fears...for blood...hw is she becumin a doctor with it...:P god nly knows...hope she gets over it soon... I cannot wait for more of this...

Oh my Ishita seems a jerk...so rude n mean..already insecure is she.. Randhir brkup wid her!! Bt lovely writing...

I could feel the entire scenario happen write in front of my eyes and dats saying something isn't it!!:P

Thanku so much for the PM...keep doing so.

Regards

Safrena