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The update was indeed amazing!! 👏
I am happy that Randhir is not a 'loner'
He at least has his friends, Ramu Chacha, his uncle and others with him who does not make him feel alone.
The character you have described of Randhir is mind blowing
You have shown him to be calm, composed, intelligent, smart, confident yet a bit rude (I don't know if it is the right word to describe him)
And no wonder he is rude after what he has suffered in his childhood.
He is unlike his friends (except Parth) who are arrogant rich brats
His friends (except Parth) insulted Sanyukta just because she was from a poor family but thankfully Randhir was not like this.
Sanyukta is so impressed by him 😳
rather fallen in love with him
I am happy with the bonding Kaustuki and Sanyukta share.
Sanyukta Agarwal became the first student that year to become victim to the infamous 'dissection hall'.
This was hilarious 😆
Without another word, he shoved a limp sanyukta into Kaustuki's awaiting hands and brushed his lab-coat where it had developed 'crease' from Sanyukta's 'fall'.
This was again hilarious. 😆
Moreover, the fall was not at all made up. It appeared to be happening in real.
Randhir saved her from falling but did not take her to the clinic but instead brushed off the crease. 😆
You made Kaustuki and Jignesh help her and then they became friends.
This was all so real.
I loved the scene when Sanyukta went to talk with Randhir.I just loved the dialogues of Randhir (totally Randhir style). 😳Witnessing a twin murder at the mere age of 10 and that too of the most important people in his life, took a toll on his psyche. He became cold and detached. There was a burning desire buried deep within him to avenge his parents. 😭
"The world thinks it was an accident. They covered it up. They killed my parents. They shattered my life...And i'm not resting until i find out who this 'they' are..."
😲😲
But what if there was more to their murder than what meets the eye? What if his childhood disaster comes to haunt Randhir in his youth? And what if a poor innocent girl with big dreams falls in love with this rich guy and in turn gets caught in his mess?
(lines from prologue)
This mystery is killing me.
What you have in store for us? 😕
I know the mystery will unfold after a very long time but I will be eagerly waiting for the mystery to unfold.
Thnx for the PM
Do update soon
Love,
Shefali
P.S. I f you are gonna write some novel in the future. I will be the first to grab a copy of it. 😊
Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
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