SUPER MODEL (AR ff) part 30(LAST) dated 11/10/2015 - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres


really nice it is dil
loved it
res
Edited by panamaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

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unres kab hoga..???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

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unres

haye haahahaha
i luved it... RIdhima sab aarrange karegi yo yooo...
And mast part diks... Ridhima ne sab ko aacha kam diya n muskan puri pagal h hahaha...




thank u ayyuu...!!!
Muski kabhi sudhar sakti hai kya... 😆 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm update dear. .
Love all their bonding. .
Specially the way they all obey ridhima. .
Outstanding update dear. .
Thanks alot for pm dea.
Try to update soon.
Keep rocking



Thank you soo much dear...!!!
😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks dear...



Thank u dear...!!!



thank uu dear..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa

Unres


really nice it is dil
loved it
res



Thank u soo much anu...


thanks di...!!!

Originally posted by: Prizi

Haha superb update..
Ridhima ne sbko kaam di hai



Thank u...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 18



Recape : anji atul niki rahul n muski comoleted their shoping list given by ridhima..

Same day
AR

A : ridhima yaar ye kahan lele ja rahi ho..??
R : oh god armann kina bolte ho tum.. Jst keep quite... N let me drive...

Ridhima stops infront of a smal market ( kind of redi market..)
A : ye..!!
r : ofo armaan kitne ques krte ho tum.. acha ye btao hm market kyu aye hai..??
A : thtas not fair oegle ques maine kia tha...
R : i know bt pehle mere ques ka ans do...
A : shoping krne... For designing...
R : nooo
A : fir...
R : cheapest way main best buy krne... Sabse sasta sabse acha types... ( n winks ar armaan..)
A : ohh.. Like that hai.. Bt ek baat btao..
R : abhi nahi baad main...
N ridhima leaves from there. N armaan runs behind her...

In a shop..
R : nahi bhaiya.. Ye bhahut mehga hai kuch toh km kro...
Shopkeler..: nahi madam ji.. 45 ka hi milega..
R :.dekhiye bhaiya 40 rs ka ek doge toh hi lungi vrna nahi...
A :(in ridhima's ear..) le bhi lo na.. Kyu is tarah bargen krrahi ho.. Ek toh pta ni konsi marlet main agi.. Itni grmi hai... Fan thak ki hwa nahi arahi.. Itna rush.. Tumhe bargain ki pdi hai.. Maine kaha tha na sath wale mall main chalte hai...
R : shut up armaan let me do my wirk... Chup chap mere piche chalo n bags pkdo..
Arman just nods his head..!!!

Ridhima runs from one shop to the other buying different fabrics dress accseroies...
N armaan folowing her quitly n admiring a new ridhima...!!!

After 3 hrs...
In car..
A : ridhima wil u explain.. Pichle 3 ghnte tumhare piche piche ghumraha hn ye bags uthakr...
R : oh god... Tum aise ni mnoge... Ruko tumnhe demo deti hn...

Ridhima pics up a shoping bags . N takes out a dres material...
R : isko achese examine lro... I mean is ka clr texture fabric...n pkdo bil.. Or chup chap bethe raho...

Ridhima starts the car engine..
N after a drive of about 5 nins.. Stops in front of the mal.. Where arman asked her to go for shoping...

R : chaloo..
Arman folows ridhima in confusion...

Ridhima sttops in a shop n takes a fabrik n ask arman to chek that out...!!! N then shows the price tag to armaan..!

Armaan get into stage of shock.. Price is near to triple of that what ridhima bought...!!!

R : ab aya kuch smj...!! Im waiting in car jldi ana...
N leaves feom there.. Bt armaan is stil in his tgoughts ...

Salesman : sir may i pack tgis for u..
A : no response..
Salesman : sir..
Armaan comes out of this dream world..
A : sory wat u said..??
N loos aroud for ridhima...
A : ridhima kahan gyi..??
Sales man.. : maam jst left.. May i get it packed..
A : wat.. No thnaku..

N runs to the parking lot..!! Ridhima was about to sit in the car.. Armaan holds her hand..
A : ridhima..!!
R : finally u are here...
A : pehle kyu nahi btya tumne.. Ki shooing vahan se kyu..
R : armaan i tried bt i thout ki tumnhe real main dikhun thats a btr option..
A : ridhima.. Tumhe kaise pta un shops ka i mean..
R :(citing armaan..) ki india ki super model un shops main...
Armaan main supermodel toh 3 sal oehle bni.. Bt i was born n midle cls family.. Jahan pr how to get best cheapest mujhe bachpan se hi sikhaya gya...
N in shops se hi maine mere designer carer ki shutuwat ki thi...!!
A : hmmm...!! Bt ridhima
R : kya hua ... Abhi lets go kafi late hogya hai sb wait kr rahen honge.. Is bare main we wil talk later...
A : ok...!!!

In car...
Rodhima is driving smothly.. N armaam is lost in his thoughts...

Armaan pov .!!

Aj ridhima ka ek lag ho.rup samne aya.. Jise main shuru makn ek arogent super model smjta tha.. Har roz vo aisa kuch na kuch na kuch krti hai that leaves me dumbfolded.. Mere pas words nahi hote main tumse kuch keh paun ridhima.. Kl jos tarah tmne sab handle kia sab ko duties di... N aj toh im shopcked.. Jis tarah tumne itni sari or achi shoping ki.. That to in ur worfs sabse sasta sabse acha... (Big bazar ka tag aj churalia..:-P)
Tumhqri ye sabhi qualites mqke me fal in love with u all over again... Yes ridhima i love from day one.. Jb maine tumhe pehle bar dekha tha... N har mulakat ke bad... My love for u got depen n deepen...!!!

Pov ends...!!!

That was it guys.. Hope u al like it ..


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Posted: 11 years ago
i m the first dil
nd love these super model
poor armaan ,...in thought process
love the way ridhima is
update soon dil
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 19

Ridhima pov

A new day a new begining... Aj humare fasion house ki neave rakhi jayegi.. Choti si sahi bt inaugration party..!! Muma sachi hi krhte the mera spna zarur sach hoga.. Armaan tum meri life main ek angel ki tarah aye.. U changed me.. Jis ridhima ko main pehle hi mar chuki thi.. Tumne us ridhima ko jinda kia.. N i fel so gud.. So free.. Pehle meri life bs kat rahi thi.. Bt now im living it.. Its all because u armaan...!! Tum nahi jnte fasion house ka spna sirf mera nahi meri mom or dad ka bhi hai.. Bachpan se spna dekha hai maine ki aisa hoga main ye lgungi main ofice.. Aisa design sab kuch.. Thank u soo much armaan.. Pta nahi wil i ever be able pay ur debt..

Pov ends...!!!

Muskan pov..!!
Armaan tu sachi wala hero hai meri life hai.. Aisa nahi hai mujhe meri joy psnd nahi thi.. Ridhima ka pa thi main bt ridz ne hamesha mujhe apni choti sis ki tarah treat kia.. Har mushkil main mera sath dia.. Har desision main guide kia.. Bt armaan tumhare is atepmt se vo umeed jagi hai hum sab ke ander apna spna pura krne ki..
Baba ji plz hum sab ke dreams ko ek bar fir mt todna.. Dubara himat nahi kr layenge hm... Plz baba ji...

Pov ends..!!

Rahul's pov
Bahut umed or spne leke aya tha apne ghar ye yahan mumbai.. The city of dreams..!! Aj bhi yaad hai vo din kitni mushkil.se mnaya tha maa papa ko.. DK ki compny join ki so that thode paise kma sakun jb tk proper job nahi milti.. Bt itne sal hogye.. Har din mera dream mere se dur gya hai.. Tut chuka tha main.. Fir muskan ayi meri life main.. Apne name ki yarah meri life life main bhi miskan bhar di.. Mere ander kuch krne ki himat jagai.. Kuch krna tha mujhe uske lie humare future ke lie.. Bahut try kia bt no use.. Then jb armaan ne btya apne new idea ke vare main.. It was like umm.. Hann dubte to tinke ka sahara..!! Bina kich soche mere mind or heart ne is oprtubity ko grap krme ko kaha n i did it..!! Plz god humre is atepmt ko sucsesful krna..!!

Pov ends..!!

In arrm gasion house..
Niki : ( shouts) bhaiii.. RB.. AB..
( niki armaans pamperd lil sis is pampered even by all armaan freinds.. Every one got atched to niki in just 2 days.. Now she have 3 elder brothers by her side n 3 frnds who are like her elder sis..)
( ab atul bhai n rb rahul bhai.. Niki now cal them like that..)

Rahul : niku kya hua y are u shouting..
Niki : dekho na RB ye mere cabin main kaisa color ho raha hai.. Maine toh purple bola tha.. (with a cute pout..)

Ridhima : are niki.. U jst wait n watch sham wat i wil do.. Tb tk apna kam kro...
N rahul maine mna kia tha niki is cabin main nahi ani chahie..
Rahul : sory ridz pta nahi kb ayi vo..

Mukan : oye rahul ke bache lahan gya tu.. Dikhna nahi kya main paint kr rahi thi.. Paint bucket ku nicje ralhi..

( rhey are them selves painting the ofice with the other hired men..)

Rahul : main jta hn nahi toh muskan hyper ho jayegi..

Armaam : kitna drta hai ye muski se.. Vaise bhi sherni hai.. Nachati hai pura isko..
Ridhima : hogya tumhara ab kam kren nahi toh sham tk tum lgoge bechare bhai agar kam pura nahi hua toh..

Arman : thank u ridhima..
Ridhima : kyu...
Armaan : tum niki ka rum personaly design kr rahi ho.. U know wat bachpan se maine niki ke lie sab kuch perfect lene ki koshish ki hai.. Uski jar wish puri ki hai...
Ridhima : armaan main ye sab apni mrzi se niki ke lie kr rahi hn.. Soo dont thank me..!!
Abhi kam kro..

Ridhima n armaan again resumed their painitng work..
Armaam brush slips from his hand n the pain splits pn his face n shirt...
Armann : shit...
Ridhima turned towards armaan n started laughing jolding her stomtch n while laughing she take the suprt of stool n a bangg...!!!

Pait bucket falls on ridhima's head...

That leaves a chance for armaan to laugh at her...

With lots of masti n fun finaly they compete the inteior decoration of thier new fasion house..!!
Every one loved their place of work n comolimented ridhima' effort.. Sply niki..!!

After completing their work everyone decided to take some rest n freshen up for the opening cermony..
They all went to atul-anji place as it was nearest to thier new ofice..!!

After an hour..

Boys dresed in tradition india atire waiting in living rum for girls...
Rahul : jldi kro yaar litna time..
Mushan ( shouts from inside ) : bs 5 min or..
Atul : yaar kb se bs 5 min 5 min.. Aise toh muhurat nikl jayega..

Niki : ofo AB chill we girls are very responsible.. Aise hi muhurat nahi niklne denge..
Boys are lost in beauty of their girls..!!!

Anji muski n ridhima wore saris.. N niki an anarkali..
All four were loking jst perfect...

Niki : ab late nahi ho raha hai...
With niki ' s voise boys came back from thier dream land..!!

Armaan : lets leave..!!

They all petformed a smaal puja at their ofice n now all of them are siting n enjoying their eving with yummy food..

Bt dreams ko pura krne ke lie bahit mehnat lgti hai boss...

Ridhima' s phone bused..
N on seing the name flashing on screen she is shocked..!! N her her beautiful smile dis apears from her lips...!!!

PS -I wrote it in a hury.. Plz ignore speeling mistakes.

ENJOY READING N KEEP COMENTING..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa

i m the first dil

nd love these super model
poor armaan ,...in thought process
love the way ridhima is
update soon dil



THANKU SOO MUCH ANNUU...!!
YEAHH CONGO ON BEING THE FIRST ONE...!!!👏

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