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faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

At crossroads...what path will they choose...

Brilliantly portrayed!

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hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

My goodness. Everyone is in pain. I hope Arnav realizes that he is not like his father. Hopefully Khushi will help him. Wow. Waiting for the next update to see what Arnav will do.

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kamtokdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

The decision is entirely up to kushi

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Haaw I missed 2 parts!

I was a bit hesitant always about stories that had Arnav's rejection resulting in the death of their first child. Because then things have gone beyond repair. But now that you have brought it up, i am eager to see how would you handle things.

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Smita... wow!!! Read both the updates together and am still feeling the effects. I didn't have the heart to re-read them coz the first time itself made a very very lasting, haunting sad lingering effect.

Recalling Arnav-ii (part-1)

The whole chapter, from the first word itself it was well known that Khushi must have lost her baby, in fact it was guessed that this must have happened, and yet after i read the words u have written, the tears Khushi had shed became ice picks in my heart. This chapter was all about Khushi and all that she had gone through after she had come to Lucknow from Delhi. In fact it was a summation of the first part of the story and yet it pained me so much to read what she had gone through.

"I should have known. I should have known."

That last line in the chapter when Arnav comes to know the extent of Khushi's pain and suffering and him being responsible for it all was so well summed up in just one line... one line only those who knows Arnav, at least Your Arnav, and his love for Khushi, can understand.

Recalling Arnav-ii (part-2)

This chapter was about Arnav's realizations and the subsequent pain he suffers. He had already realized what he has done when he had swayed under Dadiji's influence and had not married Khushi so till now he had felt guilty, sad and has tried with all his heart to make amends, but this was a wholly different Arnav who stood with the realization of, to what extent he has failed Khushi, unable to change the time, unable to wipe the wound and make everything right in Khushi's life.

He has scarred Khushi's life, wounded her and his heart is bleeding this time and so is his soul.

He looked at the beautiful face of the sleeping girl who held his heart and soul in her hand, memorised her features, gazed at her one last time with moist, red eyes before turning to leave the room.

It seems U have more heartbreak in store for us!!!!!!!

But i do rest easy with the thought that however much Arnav might resolve to stay away from her, or he might try to do so he can't and there lies the solution. These are star crossed lovers, soul mates and so they may try to keep apart but they can never do so.

Anyway beautiful updates. I will be eagerly waiting for the next ones off course. I might be a little late to comment, but i will surely comment on what u write, hope u do know that by now.

Thanks Rashmi for being the medium for these wonderful stories reaching us again.

Bye

Take care both of u.

Swati.
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