Smitar's: Recalling Arnav-II Parts 1~9 Link to #2 on Pg 1 (4/5)

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Oh what a tortured soul! Loved how you portrayed his misery and how he remembered each and every single time,he hurt her and how she stayed with him throughout it all. I don't feel good with the ending of the chapter as I hope this foolish foolish man has learned his lesson and will stop making decision for her. Hope he talks to Kushi, explains everything to her and together decide what they want to do. She deserves as much!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Awesome I do feel for Arnav but he did bring this on himself. Hopefully he is able to repent and allow Khushi to decide whats right for her

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

No! He shouldn't leave! She needs him now more than ever! Even if he does leave will Khushi go after him now that he went after her in part 1? I can't wait to read more!

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Such a pain filled update. Beautifully written.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

There is one saying which is so apt for Arnav, "Act in haste and repent in leisure."

why does he do the same mistakes again and again. Why cant he take decisions with some thought so that he wont have to repent his actions later.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

awesome update emotional I feel sorry for arnav hope he doesn't leave n let her decide what she wants thanks for the email

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tmowla

@tmowla

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

awesome update!!! i cant even assume what you will write next! thnx for posting this chapter as mentioned, as in posted by friday😃

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

hmm.. painful.. good that he decided to do what she wants..

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

firstly thank thanks thanks fr posting it again widout pics
i broke into a mental jig

d update was just fantastic
wait d worth totally
i can damn very easily connect wid d emotions of d stry
arnav, he makes me cry
u very well know how to showcase his pain in such a way dat readers r connectd to d stry

and its completely her decision to have him in her life or not

thankd again 🤗