ArSh SS - Stranded & Found. (On Hold) - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-

Heyy! ;D

I rarely come to I-F nowadays, and I don't read fan-fictions here any more but somehow I ended up opening your pm that lead me here (gladly). And my emotions are all over the place ;P

It's been so long I've read an OS/SS/FF, however yours caught me on the spot. I was wondering how it'd turn out, and you, managed to surprise me.

I loved your writing here. You've a narration talent in you and it's really good. Your writing here was awesome. Every word you wrote fell in an awe-inspiring sync as the story flowed. Your use of words was beautiful and it gave a thrilling quality to your narration, something that's very rare. So yes I loved your writing here. <33

Oh and your narration had this whole comical feel to it, which was the icing on the cake. The way you flew back from perspectives and the whole "This is how it started" in the beginning was such an added nice touch that made your story even more light-hearted and enjoyable.

Coming to the story, omg it was beautiful. Two parts, unexplainable emotions, what potrayal!
Armaan's feelings and SA's feelings were portrayed really amazingly. I could honestly picturize it all in my head. Their dilemmas, their inner battles, the whole confusion and sexual tension, man it was all stretched like a taut knot waiting to be undone. The gang was an added humorous delight. I almost forgot how amazing it could be to read Armaan-Sid, even the lightest of moments! AHH Took me back to DMG DAYS MAN!

Armaan and Shilpa's scenes were pure delight. The tension, the emotions, the display, the way you showed their gestures and love. WOW. It had this serene, innocent touch to it and made me smile so much. How I wish DMG's makers had brains in those empty nutshells. (sorry but i really am not fond of the show's writers. ;P)

All that said, I loved your work, and all I can ask you to do is keep writing more. You weave a mesmerizing spell with your words and the simple beauty of your stories. AS here are such soft but deep lovers ^^^^

Rida😳