Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: rajiarshian
Awesome update
Very interesting

Thank you for finding it interesting😃

Originally posted by: cute_sarun
its high time chote do something !! awesome update

Thats true. Chhotey needs to do something for sure😃

Originally posted by: hararnav
uh oh.. arnav pls stop khushi:-((

thanks for reading. arnav will surely stop Khushi. He'd better😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: suji5
i think Arnav heard this conversation
how can Arnav and Amav unaware of shyam's reality?

Just like Aranv and Aman were unaware in ipkknd 😉😆

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Really like this new twist👏
The moment I read the title , It occurred to me Khushi's wedding with some one which will create drama.Loved her trust level with him though unintentionally because she is still struggling with her brain.

Loved Arnav and his care for her and at the top of his quick brain to reach to the bottom of his things .always inspire me.😊
Shyam is darkness so why bother?

Thanks Mehreen! You caught the twist!👏

Thanks for reading. Your comments are always insightful

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: sohara
"haar mulaqat ka anjaam judai kyu hai?'
Why Khushi is leaving without even saying bye to Arnav. I know both will be devastated after this separation. They will certainly feel their love more for each other during their absence.
I told you, Anjali liked Khushi for Arnav.
I was so happy that Khushi retaliated shyam for telling ill about Arnav. but he sure planted seeds of confusion inside her.
Omg, Shyam was drugging Arnav surreptitiously by Sheetal. Good that he could find it out. Now he will teach shyam and his evil partners a lesson.
Can't wait to read how arnav reacts to hear about Khushi's marriage.

⭐️Beautiful lines these soha..."har mulaqat ka anjam..." Mirza Ghalib?

You can guess the parts I haven't even written! We seem to have a great connect hai na!😃

Thanks a tonne for your encouragement and support. Love you😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: surlin_chhabra
Nice update...continue soon
Thnx for pm

Thank you very much😃

Originally posted by: smilejans
Nice update

thanks dear and keep smiling 😃

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Read last two updates! Both were absolutely amazing. I love the way Arnav stopped at the correct time or else things would have turned bad, really bad!

Marriage proposal for Khushi? This is going to be fun, the moment Arnav would come to know about it, we can expect fireworks LOL

I hate Shyam bas!

Song for the last update: jadoo hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan! Tujhko bhula ke ab jaau kahan😳

Song for today's update, main pareshan pareshan pareshan pareshan! From Khushi's POV

Thanks Cheesy meri for enjoying the updates 😃

Thats well said Cheesy. Arnav stopped when he did or things could have taken a worse turn ⭐️

Love the songs😃 Thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: amfashionista
Awesome Update.
Loved it.

Thank you so much😃

Originally posted by: shruti46
oh they stopped on time..:(
but next time i want them to complete:P:P

khushi's marriage,
time for entry of some green monster...

Next time you want them to complete! what the!😉

green monster coming😃 look out!

Thanks for reading and liking shruti😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: sarozz
I can't believe they went this far!! What will happen now with khushi being in for marriage...will there be jealousy in the air??

They went very far did they? he he! Thanks for reading😃

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
awesome part

Thank you 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun
Res
Unres Thread 2 - till date

Wiwy, firstly thanks for the PMs. I have been logging in posting my update and bolting, hence could not read or comment. Nevertheless, you kept up your PMing - my sincere thanks for that.

Wow! smoking hot chemistry, great updates from Holi to the party scenes. The scene in the hall - Ufff! - kya yeh ek shabd khafi hoga, ya kitne shabd kam padjayenge, humari feelings bayan karne mein?

Loved the descriptions, loved the comic relief prior to the party scene, although I did have a vivid vision of Khushi applying medication to you know who and you know where☺️ Loved the dance and the dare after

Now with this latest twist of marriage proposal, what will happen to the hot air balloon contest? Ah! clever girl you are going to first create angst and then leave them in a balloon up in the sky to thadpafy and then tussle😉

Or may be while they are in the midst of a 'koyi faraq nahi padta' battle, you will maroon them on a sparsely populated island where they can learn to make a lot of 'faraq' in each other's life...

Great story, waiting for the update.👏

Thanks I 😃 Always love reading your comments. You had a vivid vision of Khushi applying medication!😆

Dance and dare! Good one!😃

Koyi farak nahi padta battle!😃 So true.

Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: Arilip
Ohhh no e kaa interruption !!!!!!

Sorry for the interruption.😉 I will try to do away with these obstacles. thanks for reading😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: flowers4u
omg a twist in the tale...awesome update...keep it up

Thank you so much for liking the twist in the tale😃

Originally posted by: toeditor
Awesome

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: canapoem
So will Arnav know that something is happening behind his back? will he stop Khushi's marriage with the other guy?

Yes he will surely , but when that is the question😃 Yes he must stop Khushi's marriage must he not?😃

Originally posted by: nmaharaj
Oh wait till ASR hears about this match for Khushi, he'll go bonkers...lol Great update.

😆 well said ⭐️ thanks a tonne

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
Awsum upd..
Very nyc

Thank you loads😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: sudhareddy
Wiwy excellent update
So many things happened in this update

Loved Arnav's care and concern for Khushi. Khushi was shocked realising that she would have submitted herself to Arnav if he wouldn't have stopped and she ran to her room and Arnav followed her and tried to talk with her but she asked him to go away and he thought to her later.

Arnav is so intelligent. Its good that Arnav suspected Sheetal and investigated about her with help of Aman and also he got to know that his drinks were all spiked before which made loose his control over his senses and he also wanted to know who is behind all this and why. Loved Aman. He is true friend more than a loyal employee to Arnav.

Shyam advised Khushi stay away from Arnav and talked about him unrespectful manner and Khushi was angry hearing against Arnav and loved the way she answered back him.

Loved how Khushi wanted to meet him before she goes from there and how she went to his room and how Arnav mumbled Khushi's name in his sleep and Khushi went from there with tears in her eyes ... Loved this whole part and its beautiful.

Khushi got a proposal from Pankaj. Pankaj came with her father to take her from there. So Khushi might accept to marry Pankaj for her jeeji.

Loved how Anjali said "Any guy who marry Khushi will be very lucky" and "If my Chhottey was not so much against marriage I would have chosen you as my Chhottey's bride. Maa would have loved the match too."

All this happened while Arnav's sleeping. Waiting to see Arnav's reaction knowing about Khushi's marriage proposal.

Waiting for next update