Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: pooja102
Interesting

Thanks loads pooja⭐️

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ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Res

Unres Thread 2 - till date

Wiwy, firstly thanks for the PMs. I have been logging in posting my update and bolting, hence could not read or comment. Nevertheless, you kept up your PMing - my sincere thanks for that.

Wow! smoking hot chemistry, great updates from Holi to the party scenes. The scene in the hall - Ufff! - kya yeh ek shabd khafi hoga, ya kitne shabd kam padjayenge, humari feelings bayan karne mein?

Loved the descriptions, loved the comic relief prior to the party scene, although I did have a vivid vision of Khushi applying medication to you know who and you know where☺️ Loved the dance and the dare after

Now with this latest twist of marriage proposal, what will happen to the hot air balloon contest? Ah! clever girl you are going to first create angst and then leave them in a balloon up in the sky to thadpafy and then tussle😉

Or may be while they are in the midst of a 'koyi faraq nahi padta' battle, you will maroon them on a sparsely populated island where they can learn to make a lot of 'faraq' in each other's life...

Great story, waiting for the update.👏

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Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Ohhh no e kaa interruption !!!!!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

omg a twist in the tale...awesome update...keep it up

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

So will Arnav know that something is happening behind his back? will he stop Khushi's marriage with the other guy?

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nmaharaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Oh wait till ASR hears about this match for Khushi, he'll go bonkers...lol Great update.

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sudhareddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Wiwy excellent update

So many things happened in this update

Loved Arnav's care and concern for Khushi. Khushi was shocked realising that she would have submitted herself to Arnav if he wouldn't have stopped and she ran to her room and Arnav followed her and tried to talk with her but she asked him to go away and he thought to her later.

Arnav is so intelligent. Its good that Arnav suspected Sheetal and investigated about her with help of Aman and also he got to know that his drinks were all spiked before which made loose his control over his senses and he also wanted to know who is behind all this and why. Loved Aman. He is true friend more than a loyal employee to Arnav.

Shyam advised Khushi stay away from Arnav and talked about him unrespectful manner and Khushi was angry hearing against Arnav and loved the way she answered back him.

Loved how Khushi wanted to meet him before she goes from there and how she went to his room and how Arnav mumbled Khushi's name in his sleep and Khushi went from there with tears in her eyes ... Loved this whole part and its beautiful.

Khushi got a proposal from Pankaj. Pankaj came with her father to take her from there. So Khushi might accept to marry Pankaj for her jeeji.

Loved how Anjali said "Any guy who marry Khushi will be very lucky" and "If my Chhottey was not so much against marriage I would have chosen you as my Chhottey's bride. Maa would have loved the match too."

All this happened while Arnav's sleeping. Waiting to see Arnav's reaction knowing about Khushi's marriage proposal.

Waiting for next update

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: fffan123
Brilliant... Looking forward to the unfolding of events...

Thanks for your comment.😃 Do continue reading. 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update as usual R!!! Loved it 👏

Arnav indeed is using his shatir dimaag and putting his ever loyal guy to work, he did make progress good that they found out about Sheela but I am sure you are not going to make it easy on him and tell him the plot right???? Lol!!!

Poor Khushi felt bad for her, not only she has to leave Arnav and go home but she is pushed with a new proposal from this panchi guy yup I have changed the silly haddi's name lol!!! 😛 So happy that she showed snake his place but I am afraid about the retaliation!!!

I always love to read about jealous Arnav but I am not sure if that will lead to their separation here!!!l please as you are going to separate them can please don't keep it long reunite them like in one update please!!!!!!!

Cannot wait for the next update!!!! 😊

Thank you very much A !!

No I am not going to make it easy for Arnav. He will have to play hard on his shaatir dimag to find out about the plot!😃

Panchi! Nice name for a haddi! 😆

Separation...hmmm...how do you read my mind😲 😆 And reunification in one update😲😆 uFF! mere upar kitna pressure dalogi meri maa!

Keep smiling