Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

seriusly after seeing the ☺️emoticon i was thinking so much.

but you ended abruptly ,thats so so bad...!!! 'whining'

chalo khushi told wats going on her mind ,i thought sge will never speak!!

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nmaharaj

@nmaharaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Oh wow, how intense. Please continue fast.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: amfashionista
☺️Hot Update...!☺️

😛 Sorry! 😆 😃

Originally posted by: ammi22
omg this hotness of Arshi is amazing.😳 loved this update. hope they don't start to ignore each other. really hate this Shyam. waiting for the next part.thanx for the pm.👏🤗

Ha ha! !😃 After such passion oozing they will need time to think and realize they are in love. So I have to give them that space see. Thanks for enjoying the update. Thanks for your kind words⭐️😃

Originally posted by: arshirupa
Awesome update

Thanks a tonne😃

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382
Awe tht was awesome
Arnav is such a tease

Happy it was to your liking. Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: deepa.e
Nice update!!
I hope shyam and ajit will never succeed and arnav and kushi will come face to face with all these things soon!!

Thanks! Whatever the obstacles on the way, all well that ends well, right?😃 Thanks for the beautiful comment😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: luvbug
Nice update... Loved the way Arnav teases khushi... Poor khushi..haha... Oh n wat are these gud for nothing people upto?? Stupid ppl Arnav Anjali r surrounded by them all ...

Arnav teasing Khushi is my personal favourite too😃 Good for nothing people...ha ha...well said!👍🏼

Originally posted by: sudhareddy
Wiwy Amazing update
Whenever I read an intimate scene I never feel it had mature content but only I feel their marvellous chemistry in their romance.

Loved how Arnav's eyes were only on Khushi through out the party. Loved the way Arnav flirt and tease Khushi and put her in awkward situation and enjoyed and also helped her in that situation.

I guess Kiran saw something between Arnav and Khushi and that's way she sent them on dance floor and loved how Arnav said "Maine to badtameezi shuru hi nahi ki hai, Khushi" ... I loved this lines and loved their kiss and how she lost herself and ran to her room and cried because of her confused mind.

Glad because of Khushi, Shyam and Sheetal stopped their plan of digracing Arnav in front of all guests and Ajit is angry on Shyam for that.
Shyam desired Khushi and he was jealous on Arnav and want to separate Arnav and Khushi ... Hope he won't create misunderstanding between Arnav & Khushi.

Khushi taunted Arnav with name of other girls in his life and she don't want her to be added to that list.
I felt sad when Arnav said to Khushi with pain " If I am so sick then get out of my life. Leave me alone like you had so many years ago. Why were you not with me when I was disobeying Di, getting drunk, knowing not what I was doing in my drunken state, selling my soul ..." and "Everyone says this about me, but you ..."

Loved how Khushi kissed him and hugged him and consoled him and last part was so hot and sensual😳
But loved Arnav stopped from going further as he don't want Khushi to regret later👏

Waiting for next update

Thanks Sudha😃 I find your detailed comments very thoughtful. They inspire me greatly and I look forward to them.

I made a mature warning because many might be averse to reading it. But it is the chemistry, the romance, the external manifestation of their love that is important to me. What i wrote is how I see it. When desire for someone becomes uncontrollable this might happen. Yet he stopped when he did. Because it is important for them or any couple to confess their love for each other before making love in my POV.

Thank you so much for your constant support⭐️

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved the update, sizzling hot and the end

Thanks a lot.😃 It makes me happy to know you enjoyed my writing😃

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: zehr_akhan
Awee lovely update hate lavanya n sham

Thank you for liking and commenting. I am delighted😃

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divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

awesome story😛😛😛 read it in one go😊 enjoyed reading each and every part of the updates😊 eagerly waiting for the next update😛 thanks for the pm😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
great update...

Thank you so much😃

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Beautiful update wiwy,
My grabbers..

He is the best at flirt with Khushi but in a special way which only can be shared with her .Love that.They don't need words just eyes are enough to convey whatever.

Kiran caught some sparks in them,sharp eyes like Mamiji...

La is being office days La...

Anjali is sweet and naive as ever,Her Shyamji is raising snakes under his sleeves for her and she can't even hear the hiss.He is cupid as always.He is unaware of that Khushi is Arnav and Arnav is Khushi.

Last part is very much significant, She can't stay away from him"Dil pukarta hai" and just like their mehsoos she was there where he was.She is his right hand but doesn't acknowledge that and he loves her to his core but still exploring. Restless lovers😆

Faiqu thanks a lot for your lovely comment and beautiful gif! ⭐️ You always manage to see everything in a unique light. And that is why your grabbers are so important to me.😃 Arnav is a flirt only with Khushi. He gets most irritated only with Khushi. He makes passionate love only with Khushi.

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Awesome Di ,👏😊

Hot one but why he gets angry all the time.He is so much into her and feels for her and angry why did she leave him.He was so missing her.😭 and she some how knows it .

Don't like this Shyam.He is creepier than old one.

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