Arshi FF#2:THE SEED OF PASSION, Chapters 9 to 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: imrannc
Superb loved it

Thanks a tonne😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Alexandrite91
Loved it!!!
I don't want Khushi or Arnav denying ArShi. I hate seeing Arnav in pain but the aftermath sure made it worth it for me and Arnav 😉

Choom ke zakhmon ko, thoda malham lagane aayi 😉

Oh God!! 👏 I can't wait to see the rest of this. The next time they interact, Arnav's going to be smirking oh-so sexily!!

How long will they be able to deny "us"?😉

Zakhmon ko dawa to lagni hi hai!😛

Arnav's smirk coming up in the next update😃

Thanks for your lovely comment😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Congratulations for the new thread.👏

Quite interesting.Khushi and her innocence has no limit and he is getting amazed by that day by day.I am happy seeing his removing her insecurity but her dealing with it is a bit harsh...ouch ...that hurts.It was funny at the end though.😉

Thanks Mehreen.😃 I just realized before posting this update that I will have to make a new thread! So...😳

Sorry it hurt. Khushi is young and impulsive and not willing to take any nonsense from him. She does not want to be his conquest but something more I think😉😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: bewuster
new people in story aded lav , sheena ; god love the update
it was funny in end was he really having pain of faking it
khushu is sometime too innocent love the update
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Thanks for liking the update my dear friend😃

Yes he could be faking the pain, that is a possibility 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: flowers4u
hilarious update...kushi is too cute...continue soon...

I am delighted you liked it😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: honey-sweety
That was excellent update...

Arnav is too intelligent and wanted to prove Kushi that she is willing to participate in the kiss...

That is so true.👍🏼 Arnav is feeling something for Khushi and he wants to prove it to her that she does too or she would not have participated in the kiss

thanks for reading and for your sweet comment 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: dhanyac
awesome update...
loved it...
thanx 4 d pm...

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: indi52

He was looking so handsome in his black-blue silk shirt and a matching waistcoast. His wavy hair was gelled and brushed back neatly, though a lock fell on his forehead.

okay, wiwy, i need to see this right now, i think you understand exactly what i mean.
and that last bit. ingenious. 🤣 pilleejh tells the phatee sari to takes care aph the bitwa and puts the aaintmentiya... okayj? bhere it hurts... 😆hayee, i am meanings the dil aph courses...

Yes In di I understand alright😉 I need to feel the silk shirt under my fingertips and put my ear to the heart beating under it. And then to look up in those brown pools and twirl the lock on his forehead with my little finger! Omigosh! You are with me in this, are you not. And my sauten too though she has no idea what we are doing behind her back😆

I am thrilled you liked the aaintmentiya idea. It has been on my mind for a long time. and I decided to incorporate in the story! What the!😉To apply bhere it hurts? But of course! After all the way to a man's heart is through his...