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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai dear,...I'm new to this story..
started reading this story few days before & completed reading all 25 parts today...
don't know what to say...where to start...
after reading prologue 1 I felt this is interesting...after reading all arguments btn them thought it was some misunderstanding...and don't get much clue abt story from prologue 2...
when I started reading the chapters, started loving the story more and more ...
loved each characters very much.. all have their own place in this story and u portrayed their emotions too well. hearts of to u for that...really fantastic way of writing...
As the story starts to proceed, the way Arnav & khushi's relationship progressed I started thinking that Is this the same story of the prologue???
b'se the way they started understanding each other, their pain, their feelings, the way they start to trust each other, there is no way for a misunderstanding...
if there is one, then I'll say their relationship is all fake from both sides...
But after reading last two chapters, thought that happy days r going to start in their lives...till I read the last part...
after reading that don 't know wat to say...
I was really shocked like Arnav...can't digest the fact for few moments...felt like it happened with me...
last update was awesome...every scene is superb...
excellent piece of writing... congratz for touching no shaking everyone's heart who read that update...
can't believe it happened with them... I know u told that in the first prologue itself. but don't thought it'll be like this...that too this soon...
can' able to think properly after reading this.
I really wish all this is a MU. so i read the prologue again to get some clue.
but after reading that my fear of no MU increased...
if this is not a mu from Arnav'side but khushi's...
then i really feel scared ...not b'se of Arnav but b'se of khushi...
she can't able to tolerate the truth...
I know she's a strong person in this story... but I still doubt her reaction...
I really wish i completed reading this story after one more update... b'se can't able to think properly after reading this. Too shocked to think anything other than the last part...mind is searching for reasons to believe that it's MU from Arnav's side.
don't know how i'm going to wait till next update...
don't know wat's going to happen from now onwards... but have full faith in u.
know U'll do justice to UR each creations...
thanks again for such a wonderful & different story...
sorry if i hurt u in any way but can't stop writing this after reading the story...
waiting for next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nandakrishna

Hai dear,...I'm new to this story..
started reading this story few days before & completed reading all 25 parts today...
don't know what to say...where to start...
after reading prologue 1 I felt this is interesting...after reading all arguments btn them thought it was some misunderstanding...and don't get much clue abt story from prologue 2...
when I started reading the chapters, started loving the story more and more ...
loved each characters very much.. all have their own place in this story and u portrayed their emotions too well. hearts of to u for that...really fantastic way of writing...
As the story starts to proceed, the way Arnav & khushi's relationship progressed I started thinking that Is this the same story of the prologue???
b'se the way they started understanding each other, their pain, their feelings, the way they start to trust each other, there is no way for a misunderstanding...
if there is one, then I'll say their relationship is all fake from both sides...
But after reading last two chapters, thought that happy days r going to start in their lives...till I read the last part...
after reading that don 't know wat to say...
I was really shocked like Arnav...can't digest the fact for few moments...felt like it happened with me...
last update was awesome...every scene is superb...
excellent piece of writing... congratz for touching no shaking everyone's heart who read that update...
can't believe it happened with them... I know u told that in the first prologue itself. but don't thought it'll be like this...that too this soon...
can' able to think properly after reading this.
I really wish all this is a MU. so i read the prologue again to get some clue.
but after reading that my fear of no MU increased...
if this is not a mu from Arnav'side but khushi's...
then i really feel scared ...not b'se of Arnav but b'se of khushi...
she can't able to tolerate the truth...
I know she's a strong person in this story... but I still doubt her reaction...
I really wish i completed reading this story after one more update... b'se can't able to think properly after reading this. Too shocked to think anything other than the last part...mind is searching for reasons to believe that it's MU from Arnav's side.
don't know how i'm going to wait till next update...
don't know wat's going to happen from now onwards... but have full faith in u.
know U'll do justice to UR each creations...
thanks again for such a wonderful & different story...
sorry if i hurt u in any way but can't stop writing this after reading the story...
waiting for next part soon...


Welcome dear...Thank you for your amazing words..Means alot and hope to see more of you on my thread...Next update will be up in next 20hrs...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HEAVEN-

i ll love that!!! i m sooo excited!!!

btw i have another qustin...how many chaps left to reach the prologue?😳


You are not getting answer for that...Hahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
I jst cant sleep...i am weaving stories of mie own dat Kushi was not victimised...hoping t Arnv has seen Khuhi wid tht vil man on bed...hoping dt she was not raped..she was fully clothed..coz u said Arnav sa her f only...d not seen dat rascal fce..but prlgue is making my versions blah...

I eont get y Arnav just closed d door n walkd away...just lik da...he trusted her rite?? Y dint he pulled that scumbg out of bed n smacked him??? Jo kuch usn dekh hon diya...arghhh...iam gng mad...

Nxt updte toh pakka heartbreaking ka baap hoa...chaae joh ho ending happy hon hain...i dont want a sequel which starts wer a sad TVK 1 ends...tumne kya kr diya yaar...was Khushi really victimised??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nimie207

I jst cant sleep...i am weaving stories of mie own dat Kushi was not victimised...hoping t Arnv has seen Khuhi wid tht vil man on bed...hoping dt she was not raped..she was fully clothed..coz u said Arnav sa her f only...d not seen dat rascal fce..but prlgue is making my versions blah...

I eont get y Arnav just closed d door n walkd away...just lik da...he trusted her rite?? Y dint he pulled that scumbg out of bed n smacked him??? Jo kuch usn dekh hon diya...arghhh...iam gng mad...

Nxt updte toh pakka heartbreaking ka baap hoa...chaae joh ho ending happy hon hain...i dont want a sequel which starts wer a sad TVK 1 ends...tumne kya kr diya yaar...was Khushi really victimised??


You will have all your questions answered next update which is coming up in 15 hrs 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am restless after reading the update
yesterday .plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Agla chapter TISSUE baa...nahi...mera haal waise bhi behaal hain..aur bhi bigdega...itna watt laganewala updte abtak nahi padi hoon mein...
Deepthiya...u hv weaven such a powrfull stuff..i am trying to tell my heart that its a story,but its not obeying...

Bhagwan..i cant thik of the moment wen Khushi cmes to know...

Was that bloody s** of b**** wearing Arnavs fac mask..??? Yeh toh nainsaafi hain...Arshi dont deserv these...bure log maz lete hain aur acheachon ko itni pain!!!!!! I am BHEJA Frying!!!!!

Chaar paanch updtes ek saath mil jye toh Iam s happy...acha hua ki u didnt posted on 15th...mea Vishu kharaab ho jathi...

In conflict within myself to decide whether i should read nxt update or readatr updating four or five chapters!!! U r So lucky...deepthy...coz u know the story na...i am terribly pathetic here..i cant cry more..

The last parts of part3 is ringing in my hed...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nimie207

Agla chapter TISSUE baa...nahi...mera haal waise bhi behaal hain..aur bhi bigdega...itna watt laganewala updte abtak nahi padi hoon mein...
Deepthiya...u hv weaven such a powrfull stuff..i am trying to tell my heart that its a story,but its not obeying...

Bhagwan..i cant thik of the moment wen Khushi cmes to know...

Was that bloody s** of b**** wearing Arnavs fac mask..??? Yeh toh nainsaafi hain...Arshi dont deserv these...bure log maz lete hain aur acheachon ko itni pain!!!!!! I am BHEJA Frying!!!!!

Chaar paanch updtes ek saath mil jye toh Iam s happy...acha hua ki u didnt posted on 15th...mea Vishu kharaab ho jathi...

In conflict within myself to decide whether i should read nxt update or readatr updating four or five chapters!!! U r So lucky...deepthy...coz u know the story na...i am terribly pathetic here..i cant cry more..

The last parts of part3 is ringing in my hed...


I wish I could be lucky..I knew the story..that part you got it right but when u pen down...u tend to read it so mnay times that it hurts esp the leads that I adore but I dont regret it as this is the FF I took to pass on social message..At the end of they day they will come out stronger and happier than ever
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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG...I cant sleep...I cant come out from the last chapter. why didn't Arnav do something, like pull tat guy off her, why didn't khushi realise her husband body smell..Adi did get that guy so that Arnav will be out off the house and spike khushi's drink and rape her. From the prologue, khushi mention "happen all nite" so Adi raped her few times..OMG...all this questions are killing me..Don't Arnav know what type of person khushi is by now...When Khushi finds out the truth, how will she handle it. i'm so scared for that. will she able to keep the baby after knowing the truth of her pregnancy. i'm very much interested to know how you gone write the next chapter.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


You will have all your questions answered next update which is coming up in 15 hrs 😊


I am starting to count the ticking right from this second, with my fingers crossed.
1.2..3...4...5... Oh man when these 15 hrs will complete...Dammit.
Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago

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