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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Ek do teen chaar

band karo ye atyachaar
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You were worried over not getting the flow..And after reading Id say kudos for it was just sooper fine for me! What a narration of his first sight! I am all smiles.😃
And I loved mahadev s' name.. Tarang! <3
Khushi ko kya bana diya Arnav ne. She actually believes it seems whatever venom she had been fed by that stupid man. But good she said that..those last lines..where Tarang was wanting to know what's in her , her pain , this is a good break for now. He is a psychiatrist. It wouldn't take him long to decipher the emotions behind those words. And his persona..its a perfect foil for Khushi right now. I am already very happy for Khushi.

Unresd.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope the good doctor is able to help her. Hearing her say the last line, it broke my heart. 💔Her actually using the "w" word to describe herself.😭 I really want her to heal.

Excellent update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
One thing I'd really like to read about, if it's not too demanding (again this word) - Tarang's specific reaction to her last sentence: I want to see how his therapist mind takes this haunting, morbid piece of information in and his reply, IF he is not stunned into silence.

Thanks :)
Edited by Petrichorlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Leaving no self respect in a person is the worst destruction one can do...
and arnav has done that...
i love this Tarang... seems like a nice guy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm
wanna know what future had stored for khushi

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Posted: 11 years ago






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Posted: 11 years ago
its really a beautiful update
maybe he can fix khushi but i think she need more help then we think
bcz its not only arnav whom had destroy her
it also her mom and buaji whom have never seen real khushi and also
her sister payal for whom she had given away everything but didnt got much in return
i know payal need to please her mother in law but she cant forget her familiy just over night
and her sister was in the same house for god sake
didnt she asked her did not she see her sister not smiling and
what would khushi have felt to live in the same house where their is shyame a man who destry so much
and then
arnav with whom she thought to have found love
he nipd her when she could have bloom to a beautiful flower
he crush the wings of butterfly
he cut the wings of a golden bird
just to cage her
if arnav would have been smart in that 6 monthes he would have taken detective help what shyam does
bcz tali eek haat se to nahi bajti
is not arnva destroying anjalis house to feed the snake in his own house
i dont know why did arnav never took action against shyame

what i really found bad about ipkknd is that buaji and garima never told truth to raizads about shyame before marraing payal to akash
and realation basied on lies or half truth are not going to stand against storm
payal never told akash truth is she right ?
i hate people who lie

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg he is psychricat hayyeee lol!! I really hope he helps khushi and make her lives again! Great part and continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zee, Don't do this ..SHe is actually saying those horrible words to herself ...Arnav needs to pay big time.Love this new Tarang ji...Where the hell you came up with this name ...😆
Liked him a lot though...Straight forward and sweet😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are simply an amazing writer

Your chapters are too short but they always pack a punch. I have to tell you this, there are writers who would take great pains just to describe the weather, room ceiling, flick of an eye, a gulp etc...but you are somehow able to compress everything in such an impact full way that we are genuinely moved and want to kick Arnav where it hurts the most, pat Shashi's back, shake up Khushi that she realises there is nothing wrong with her, open our arms and welcome the gentle doctor.

PS: Even if you wrote a 10 page long chapter, I would still find it short.

PPS: Hope Tarang brings ' Khushi ki Tarang' in Khushi's life... Cheesy I know

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