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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Chapter 11-19

Beautiful that's what khushi really in and out but arnav would never understand that would he

And whats with that meena kapoor

I would be so happy if arnav would be caged with meena in marriage

Meena was the woman Khushi could never dream of becoming in this lifetime-- a woman exuding confidence and power. While she herself was so completely pathetic and shameful, her own husband deemed her a home wrecker. Khushi bit back the small gasp of hurt as Meena leaned to whisper something into Arnav's ear, her body pressed ludicrously against his own and her long fingers wrapping tightly around the overgrown hair at his nape. Yet as much as the pain of proving to be a pitiful wife distressed her, she was pleased that Arnav was dancing in the arms of a woman who would make him content. He deserved to be happy once she disappeared from his life.---inferior complex that's what khushi is devolping

Wonderfull update love it

So khushi and arnav did consume their marriage

Arnav was in sence but khushi was not

Arnav did take advantage of her don't u think

"Khushi... I hate that I could never love you"

so arnav forget everything however khushi didn't forgot it

this was khushis first time to drik but arnavs not I don't understand how he can forget it ---or does he know what happen and just don't want to think about it

I thought Chotte had chosen right. But I guess he wasn't worth your efforts, Khushi Ji. Anyways, what is done is done. You will need to return Amma's bangles... and the note she left for her rightful bahu" ---hypocrite that what they really are and I hope meena would become arnav wife and would destroy him

Now I a really wanting more when you gona update pm mee and plz buddy me

Love y

Edited by bewuster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Congrats.

I work in a women's shelter where I interact with abused women on a daily basis. Arnav is an abuser...he has abused khushi in every form possible...physical, emotional and psychological. The physical scars erase eventually...sometimes they fade and sometimes they don't. But what stays along with the abused is the emotional scars.

Arnav needs to be punished severely. There cannot be a happily ever after for Arnav in any possible circumstances...please don't give him one. A man like him doesn't deserve any.

Khushi needs to move on because when any relationship experiences physical abuse in any form...there cannot be a lovestory or a relationship. In reality a woman hardly gets pregnant in one attempt...I hope you wouldn't go through the very cliched Indian cinema way.

I hope to see khushi moving on...getting financially independent. Arnav and his beloved sister seriously needs to go to hell. I just hate this man...more than Shyam.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Bookmarked and waiting eagerly for chapter 20 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
very well emoted the feeling of khushi...looking forward for arnav's repentance...as usual waiting eagerly for ur updates dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
We are in new thread !!!!!!!!!
it is celebration time 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Please update please please please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Zee, just read the comments in the last 9 pages and I agree to most of them...!
No pregnancy track please, this story is so unique and i want it that way...UNIQUE not typical indian serial stories, please😳

PS.. I know I have to unres my comment on Chapter 19, I haven't done it yet cos of a reason which you will come to know sooon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rupunzale

Congrats.

I work in a women's shelter where I interact with abused women on a daily basis. Arnav is an abuser...he has abused khushi in every form possible...physical, emotional and psychological. The physical scars erase eventually...sometimes they fade and sometimes they don't. But what stays along with the abused is the emotional scars.

Arnav needs to be punished severely. There cannot be a happily ever after for Arnav in any possible circumstances...please don't give him one. A man like him doesn't deserve any.

Khushi needs to move on because when any relationship experiences physical abuse in any form...there cannot be a lovestory or a relationship. In reality a woman hardly gets pregnant in one attempt...I hope you wouldn't go through the very cliched Indian cinema way.

I hope to see khushi moving on...getting financially independent. Arnav and his beloved sister seriously needs to go to hell. I just hate this man...more than Shyam.




i agree with u but i know his sister hell all of the family memebers are just dom they are ignorant about what khushi is going through but even her sister(payal) could not see though facade that khushi is showing to world ---payal grew up with her she should know better but hell
arnavs sister anjali i can tell she is just blind not only in love with her hubby surpent but also never see through the facade of her chote and never see the inncocent girl crumble between the raizadas
and nani i never expect her to be such a artifical woman i thought being a older person having seen her daughter who cruble before her eyes because of her son in law she should know better
but no
and then their are gupta i am bitting my nails off how would guptas reacte on divorced khushi --i knwo firstly they will taunt her and then maybe force her to marry some person who would be uneducated or pure never could value khushi ---khushi hell all women need education to be their self to find them self and i think khushi should study or something however its my concltion lets just wait on Zee whats she gona make about this story
love y comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Arnav is so much delusioned after the way he treated her, he was hoping that Khushi would react would fight with him or go against him to save the sham of this marriage. Gone are the days of his satisfaction now Khushi fears him too much to even show any kind of response. Congrats on the new thread waiting for the 20nd chapter. Update soon.
Edited by enlightenme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N: Thank you SO much to my wonderful readers for their congratulations on the beginning of this thread! I'm touched beyond words <3 I would like to dedicate this update to bewuster, who has so kindly taken the time to comment so considerately on the writing! Thank you, dear! Again, please let me know if this is moving too fast.

Also, the song on the first page is a great insight to where this story is headed.

Today, I recommend a fantastic FF and actually my favorite of all time, Mirage

This has not been proofread.

~Serendipity~
"an accidental discovery"


Chapter Twenty: Deride
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When Arnav pulled into Shantivan's driveway that slightly chilly, slightly cloudy morning, he instantly felt something was... off. The weather? Hari Prakash's shy smile at the new sweater knit by his wife? Purvi's grasp on his finger when he gently kissed her hello? Uncomfortable by the strange sensation, he loosened his tie and sulked to his bedroom, desperately craving a warm cup of that spicy ginger tea. Preferably, the kind made by Khushi.

No Arnav. He shook his head in irritation at his warrant thoughts.

Arnav had refused to touch anything prepared by his wife these past six months, forthright in sharing his doubts that her food held the same poison present in her character. He thought back to their suhaag raat... when she had tentatively passed him a cold cup of almond milk, anxiously following the strict instructions directed by Anjali. He had flung the glass across the bedroom and smashed it against the corner of a nearby table at her audacity... exclaiming that he would rather die of thirst than drink even water offered by her hands.

Khushi never tried to serve him after that.

But what Arnav Singh Raizada did not confess, however, was how much he truly missed the taste of her delicious food - from her kachoris to her masala chai to the puris and halwa she served for Devi Maiyya's prasad.

Occupied in trying to recall the forgotten smell of the special methi aloo she used to prepare for Nani, he didn't think too much of the slightly wrinkled paper perched upon his nightstand. Unfolding it rather carelessly, guessing it to be simply Hari Prakash's notification of a missed phone call, his eyes lazily wandered over the sharp, clean and distinctly feminine penmanship.

He read it again. And again. And again. And one more time, for good measure.

And suddenly Arnav understood why he felt so peculiar today...why instinct had told him not to drive to work that morning and remain back at home.

He realized the taste of freedom was surely not as sweet as he had hoped... slightly shivering in the chill of the solitude.

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"Jiji. We should talk to the Raizadas. This is... intolerable"

"I was thinking the same, Garima. Things are getting worse by the day. It's getting out of hand"

Khushi's aunt and mother whispered in hushed voices on the patio of their small abode, oblivious to their conversation carrying to the frail woman standing behind the open kitchen window. Their daughter had been back home for two days now, and the only contact with the Raizada household had been through Payal's infrequent phone calls. Khushi was rarely, if ever, discussed.

However to accommodate for its absence in her home, the discussion of her broken marriage ran rampant around Laxmi Nagar. Some gossiped as the Guptas turned their backs, others probed through subtle inquiries and a few were blatant in their prying curiosity.

"I heard it is because they hid she is an orphan"

"She must have had an affair!"

"I have heard her husband was abusive"

"Well, a man is only abusive when the wife is unapt"

"Do you think she got part of his property? Hai, the benefits of marrying wealthy!"

"Will the Raizadas consider my Deepthi? She is highly eligible!"

"I have heard Madhumati is trying to convince the Raizada boy to take her niece back"

"No one else will have her. Who would choose something used and discarded?"

As her aunt and mother debilitated under the constant scrutiny, Khushi remained invincible... the gibes and the indictments bouncing off the steel cage Arnav had assembled so securely around her heart. Her six months in Shantivan had prepared her for this. What was Vimla Mausi and her kitty, compared to the wrath of Arnav Singh Raizada? Accustomed to feeling like human rubbish, Khushi poured herself a glass of water and retreated back to the seclusion of her bedroom, disinterested in confronting the qualms of her relatives.

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As days drew on, the news of her divorce continued to spread like wildfire through not only Laxmi Nagar, but also every neighborhood bordering its five-mile radius. Women would gather around their home and whisper obnoxiously whilst trying to peer inside the curtained windows, parting only when Bua Ji would open the front doors and menacingly cross her arms against her chest. The only one who remained unaffected by the rumormongers and more troubled about Khushi's frail condition was her Bau ji, who could not declare his support for his bitiya when she needed him most. Regardless, Khushi's happiest moments upon returning home were when she sat quietly alongside her father, finding comfort in his reassuring presence.

A week had now passed since Khushi had returned to Gupta house, and on this particularly humid morning, she was sitting quietly on the lounger towards the far corner of her living room... peeling apart pea pods to prepare tonight's supper. She stirred as the front doors crashed open with an unnerving thud.

"Khushi. Go inside. GO INSIDE NOW"

Peering up from the menial task, she almost choked at the palpable fear etched in her Bua ji's paling face. Garima also stumbled through the front door, gasping for breath and hoisting Khushi roughly from her seat... ignoring the plethora of fresh peas crashing to the floor.

"Get inside, bitiya. Now."

Khushi barely heard the click of the door closing behind her... when a deep, hoarse and guttural voice joined the sound of her mother's uneven and haggard breaths.

"Mummy Ji..."

A clenched fist instantly flew to Khushi mouth to silence the gasp that escaped her of its own accord. She could recognize that voice anywhere. The voice her mother commanded her to maintain distance from. The voice that triggered bile to rise up her throat in repulsion. The voice of Chetan Mistry. Chetan Mistry was standing inside her living room.

He was the most despicable, malicious and dreadful human being not only in Laxmi Nagar, but every middle class neighborhood in Delhi. Chetan was infamous for his dealings of cocaine and heroin...for offering poor, helpless women small sums of money in exchange for warm nights in their beds. He was a man who had mothers ushering their daughters back into the safety of their concealed homes when he trudged down the street... gun at his hip and cigarette between his yellowing teeth.

"Ch...Chetan Ji," Garima's voice pleadingly quivered... "Pl...please Chetan ji"

He responded with laughter sharpened in spite, his small ring of men following suit in his hysteria.

"Do not embarrass me, Mummy ji. Khushi se shaadi toh mein karke hi rahunga. But why so upset? Did you really have a better daamad in mind?"

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CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE: A B A N D O N E D


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DUN. DUN. DUN.
Don't throw chappals 😆 Please comment naa. 😳 Thanks!

NOTE: Okay, I'm sensing a lot of anger. But here's my reassurance that Chetan will NOT play a big role in this story. He just is simply playing catalyst of something which must happen for the story to progress. Breathe easy! And bring on the tomatoes! 😆 I do deserve them, don't I?

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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