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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome parts!!!!!

cant wait 4 the intro! 😉

Thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Rajeev fan

amazing parts
cant wait to know who mystery man is
hope its angad
👏

Thanks

you can find in the coming part

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey,
I just read this ff in the morning and i found it pretty interesting....... and especially Mr. Mystery Man. 😉 hmm....... what's his mystery?? anyways.. Kripa and Prithvi are cool too!! Kripa s funny.... she doesn't know hindi!! My cousin also doesn't know punjabi.... she understands a little, but when she talks she is damn hilarious! 😆 .... Nice ff. Looking forward to read it!! Good Luck and bye!!
Divjot 😃

Thank you

he will be mytery man to everyone but even more for kripa

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
😆 lol i can imagine prithviz face bichare ko dara diya 😆 oooo whos mystery man! continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

I am glad everyone liked kripa's and prithvi's relationship and kripa's character

THANKS TO EVERYONE

PART 4

k: tell me more about this guy

just then dadi calls them for dinner

k: kathy just continue the game

ka: are you sure , we already did so much

k: please kathy i don't know when i will get a chance again

ka: okay as you wish

in the dinning room

kathy comes and sits infront of prithvi , he feels really uncomfortable, he was about to get up to change the place

da: prithvi what happened

p: nothing dadi

da: then sit and have your dinner

prithvi has no other choice but to sit infront of kathy , kathy started rubbing her leg to his and kripa enjoying the scene. prithvi quickly moved his leg back.

kathy went back home saying good bye to dadi and kripa , but not prithvi has he got into his room as soon as he is done with the dinner and locked it.

next day kripa went to drop prithvi at the airport

before boarding the flight prithvi pulled kripa's ear

k: ouchhhh......... it hurts pihtvi , leave it

p:(leaving her ear) what do you think i will not know about the crap you played with me

k: did kathy told you

p: yes

k: how can she tell you , she promised me

p: because she is first my friend then yours, now give me a hug

kripa hugs prithvi

k: i miss you bhaaya(parting)

p: hey what did you call me

k:bhaya, did i prnounce it wrong

p: no its so perfect but when did you

k: last night i asked granny , what they call bro in hindi and she told me

p: why can't you learn totally

k: no noway, i just learned this to make you happy and t make up for yesterdays crap

p: then I am ready to have any sort of crap you want on me if say yes to learn hindi

k: noway bro , now go its time for your boarding

p: bye take care and do call me ok

k: ok bye

remaining day she unpacked her stuff and set them neatly in the cupboards , tomorrow is her first day at NYU

Next day morning

da: kripa wake up hun , its already 7

k: with a jerk , what? today is my first day and i need to be there at 8

she ran into the bathroom had a quick shower , she wears a nice white long skirt with a white sleeveless top , white dazzling earrings with lite make-up

kathy calls her on her way to university

k: hey kathy i am on my way

ka: sorry kripa, i can't come today

k: what?????? but why

ka: mom is sick and i need to take her to the hospital

k: oh thats ok but........

ka: don't worry i told my friends kristine and jessica that you are coming today and they will help you

k: thats great where can i find them

ka: in the library , hey make sre you have the map of the campus with you

k: ok, don't worry take care of aunty , bye

ka: bye kripa

kripa got the admission work done and started looking for the library, she is really confused , she sees someone and goes to ask him, his back is facing kripa

k: excuse me sir

he gives a sharp look to her

kripa gives a warm smile to him expecting him to smile ,but he doesn't he just stares at her

k: hi

pe(person): .......

k: where is library

person just points in front of her where she can see the library, kripa turns back to see the person disappear, she looks for him all over and finds him going in some different direction.

kripa enters where she finds kristine and jessica

kristine(kr): you must be kripa right?

k: yeah, and you are

kr: iam kristine and this is jessica

je: hi kripa

je: hi jessica

kr: did find any difficulty in finiding library

k: yeah but some guy helped me, but he is wierd

je: don't say that Mr. Mystery helped you

k: i don't that , but he don't spoke to me and before i can say thanks to him he disappeard

kr: oh then its for sure that he is Mr. Mystery

k: are you sure that he is him

je: okay to confirm he is him a few more questions,

kr: did he give you a serious look, even if you smile at him

k: yes

je: did he tell where the library is or just pointed it

k: pointed it

kr: so its confirmed that he is the mystery man

k: iam still not sure

kr: ok wait for 2 more hours you can see him in our class

k: ok

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thats for today

hope everyone likes it

please do wirte comments

sweety

Edited by sweety223 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
IT IS MY MYSTERY MAN!!!!!!!!!! 😛 😛

im soooooooo happyyy!!lolzzz...
gr8 part.. wonder how it goes with mystery man!! continue soooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
👏 lol she learnt bhaiyaa!!!! very good kripa 😆 😆 😆 very good....ooooo angads intro cooool jaldi update
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
great part. Mr Mystery...I love it! lol. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
wow!!!!!! just caught up wid this ff n its great!!! cant wait till mystery man falls in love......with me that is 😆 😆 neways i wonder what mystery man thinks of kripa... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
hi 😃
just read ur ff
i really dont want to lie 😕 😕
its ..........
its awesome something really different 😛
i love it
pls cont soon 😃

p.s- sorry if i scared u 😉

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