#3:TR FF:Kahin Pyar Na Ho Jaye epilogue ipdated on pg 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: ..vanshika..
Omg Am I dreaming? That was marvellous!!

D3 Won thats nice!

While reading TR romance, I was blushing soo much! I skipped half of the part because of their romance only. D'uh

TaaReyUg scene ke upar am fida.

Update sooon. Waiting!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ..Neha..PM
Great part!
Love tarey romance!
Yug is so naughty!
Wow! Tarey won!
Continue soon..

thanks neha ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Sswachi
Rey is so much caring but for doctor irritating LOL
LOl when doctor said " Lo aap hi kar lo" it was just my🤣halat
Good Rey told to Swayum about him nd Taani
Rey is just so caring love him man😳
Rey making soup for Taani so sweet
Yug is just to naughty😆
Huh gang disturb our TaaRey kiss
Best couple dance winner nd group dance winner to banna hi tha
Taani blushing seeing scrapbook
TaaRey romance was☺️
Precap is superb
Update asap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: babydolll
finally done wd reading all the chapters in one go
amazing writing

loved yug the most

taarey are cute

thank u ruchi...m glad u liked my work...

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#105

Originally posted by: kriti094
Firstly sry for being late
now coming to d updt it was simply awesome
i loved d way rey panicked in front of d doctor
i loved d reyug part in d kitchen
n taarey romance in d end was awww
n yipeee d3 team n taarey won
updt nxt part soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: arshima
finally taarey ek saath
feeling happy
and 1 month leap
you are really a good writer
awesome update
pm me regularly
I CAN ONLY COMMENT WHEN I USE LAPTOP
SOOO TRUST ME,,,I WILL COMMENT WHEN I GOT TIME,,

its ok dear..cmnt whenever u r able to...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: zulfinazi
awsm updt
rey's care for taani soo cute it was
Aww rey made soup for taani
yug is naughty so swt
wow taarey n d3 won dance trophy
superb
taarey kiss was superb
taarey sleeping together luvly
precap is interesting
rey's mom entry
updt sn

thank u so much for this lovely comment...

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CHAPTER 23

-After a month-

Now college was finished. All were gradguated. They all run a dance accadamy.

Rey was now handling business as his mom told him to do. And he also wanted to do the same.

Taani was handling house and also running acadamy too.

Taarey wanted to tell the truth to rey's mom but they are affraid about her reaction.

~*~

Sunrays enter in the house through the window of the room and disturb the love birds who were sleeping peacefully.

As the sunrays fall on rey's face her turn his face in another direction and tighten his grip around her back.

Taani was sleeping peacefully completely on him...resting her head on his chest so that she can hear his heart beats. Her hands were around his chest. Their legs were intwined.

Rey open his eyes and find taani completly on him. He was surprised first...but then he remember how taani slept like this.

-Flashback-

Yesterday night was a success party of first event in D3 acadamy.

All were present there. Taarey swaron nimmi nharat aashi Rimar.

"cant believe hamara first event was so awesome.." said sharon.

"ya sharon...socha nahi tha hume itna achha responce miega." said taani...

"milta kyu nahi...after all we r best." said reyam..

"yes...so now...its tym for..." said nil and vicky.

"partyyy..."all shout together.

Sharon turn on the music player and all started to move their body on the music beats.

Nil and vicky were up to something. They planning to spike a drink...

"nil...make sure girls ye drink le.." said vicky...

"ya...but agar swayam aur rey ko pata chala to??" asked nil

"are kuch pata nahi chalega...tu tension mat le...hum taani aur sharon ko nahi denge..." said vicky and they spike only four drinks.

"ok thik hai...ye chaar...aur ye do taani aur sharon ke liye.." said nil changing the positions of glass.

"are nahi ye do shani ke liye..aur ye...uffo...sab gadbad ho gayi...ab..??" said vicky..

"are kuch nahi...dekh ye do simple drink hai...aur ye chaar spiked..." said nil...

Both brought a tray of drinks in front of girls and girls took their drink.

As all were swaying their body sharon collide with rinni and her drink fell down from the glass. And that was the spiked drink.

"m sorry sharon...vo.." rinni said putting her drink on a table. And that was another spiked drink.

"its ok rinni...no need to say sorry.." said sharon..

Other girls drink their drink.

Nil and vicky were waiting kisne spiked drink pi li.

After few minutes taani and simmi started to behave wierdly.

"mar gaye nil...agar rey ko pata chala ki humne drink me kuch milaya tha to hum to gaye.." said vicky..."ye taani ne kese pi li??"

"mujhe kya pata yaar..." said nil..

"are nil...simmi ko sambhal ja.." said vicky and he ran to simmi.

Here taani came beside rey.

"rey...chalo na dance karte hai..." said taani..but then she made a confused face...

"rey...aap ki naak itni lambi kyu ho gayi??" ask taani and she try to touch his nose but she couldnt bcoz she was not in her sense.

"taani...r u ok??" ask rey holding her from her shoulder. She was not able to stand properly.

Here simmi's condition was also same.

"ha rey...me thik hu...but aap mujhe do do dikh rahe ho..." said taani in her cute voice..

"taani...i think u r drunk...lets go home..."..

"guys we r going home..." said rey...

"rey...do u need any help??" ask swayam..

"no...i'll manage...but mujhe lagta hai kisine drink me kuch milaya tha ..tu pata kar ke kal bata dena mujhe..." said rey and he left from there with taani. Nil and vicky were scared now. Swayam look at their scared faces and understood everything.

~*~

Acadamy was just 5 minutes away from rey's home.

"taani...chalo get in the car.." said rey..

"uhuu..." taani denide to get in.

"taani...sweetheart...tum apne rey ki baat nahi manogi??" ask rey..

"pehle tum meri baat suno...phir me bhi tumhari baat sunugi..!!! " said taani. She was trying hard to stand properly.

"achha batao kya baat sunu me??" ask rey while holding her from her waist and saving her from falling.

"tum pakka meri baat manoge??" ask taani , pouting like a kid.

"ha baba pakka..." said rey...

"yaayyy..." taani screamed in joy..."thik hai...to piggyback me...aur mujhe vese hi ghar le jao.." said taani..

"what??but abhi bahot raat ho gayi hai taani..." said rey..

"no...mujhe ese hi jana hai varna me kahin nahi jaungi.." said taani and she sat on the road.

"achha achha thik hai...chalo aa jao.." said rey. He sat on his knees. His back facing her.

"yipee.." said taani and she put her arms around his neck.

Rey stand up and taani wrap her legs around his waist. Rey hold her both legs with his hands and started walking toward their house.

Taarey clothes:

"rey..." said taani. Her head was resting on his shoulder. Her hot breath was tickling his ear and neck.

"hmmm..."

"kuch kahu me tumse?? Ask taani..

"ha kaho..."

"thik hai..idhar dekho.."said taani. But rey didnt.

"rey...dekhona idhar..." she made him look at her.

"bolo kya kehna rey..." rey said. He stop walking.

Taani smile shyly and kissed his nose. "i love you."

Rey smiled at her cute antict.

"i love you too." he slightly hit his forehead with her and again start walking.

"rey kuch kahu me tumse??" again taani asked the same...

"ha bolo..." said rey...

"i love you..." said taani kissing his cheek. Rey was smilling in his mind like an idiot but he didnt show this on his face.

Taani put her head in crook of his neck and started to cry fakely.

"what happen taani??" ask rey worriedly.

"tum mujhse pyar nahi karte ho..." said taani.

"no esa nahi hai...i love you.." said rey.

"to phir tumne i love you too kyu nahi bola??" ask taani.

"taani...u know what...me tumse i love you kahu ya na kahu...but my heart belongs to you only." said rey.

"sachhi..." taani asked ...

"muchhi..." rey said...

Meanwhile they reach to their house. Rey open the door with the key and they enter in the house.

Yug was sleeping. When taarey asked him to come with them he denied to come saying he was feeling sleepy. Rey looked at the wall clock. It was showing 11:30 PM.

They went in their room and rey put taani on the bed.

"nai mujhe sona nahi hai.." said taani and she stand up from the bed.

"taani...dekho tum abhi nashe me ho...plz so jao..." said rey..

"nahi...nahi...nahi..." said taani..she stand up from the bed and went closer to rey.Taani came extremmly close to rey.

"taani tum..-"

"sshh..." taani sushed rey. She look in to his eyes. Rey started to take back steps. Taani also started to take steps toward him.

At last his back collide with the cup board. And taani locked him in between her hands.

"taani...tum ye ...kya kar rahi ho.." ask rey..

"ha ha ha ha...ab tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta.." said taani..

"taani...u r not in your sense...plz so jao.." said rey trying to hold her both hands.

"nahi...ab to samjho tumhari izzat lut gayi.." said taani...

"izzat lut gayi...???" said confused rey then it strike to him. Meanwhile taani put her hands around his neck.

Slowly slowly she decrease the distance between their lips. Rey know that taani was drunk. He didnt want to kiss her now. But he was not able to stop taani.

Taani kissed his lips softly , making him shock. She was planting soft kisses on his lips.

Rey, who was enjoying her kisses , stopped her , controlling himself hard.

"taani dekho tum abhi -"

Rey was not able to complete his sentense because taani again sealed his lips. Rey who was controlling himself till now forgot everything and hold her from her waist and started to pull her closer.

Taani's hands moved to his back neck and settle there. Taani was the one who was kissing rey and rey was just enjoying her kiss. She took his lower lip in between her lips and start nibling it. Rey was feeling like he is in heaven. He dont want to finish this moment ever. Taani first time kissed him first. His hand , which were rested on waist started to move up and down on her curves. Soon rey took the charge of kiss. He hold her waist tight and turn around making taani lock between him and the cupboard.He started to explore every corner of her juicey lips. He can guess that her lip gloss flavour was orange. He took her upper lip and started to nibble it and caress it with his tounge. His hands which were on her stomach , started to move upward feeling her soft curves , and it rested near her breast. He softly caress her breast and that moment taani gasped. Rey immidiately took his hand away and broke the kiss. He mentally cursed himself for doing this now. He look in to her eyes..yes she was shocked but her eyes didnt show any regret feelings.

"umm...taani...tum betho..." said rey..."me tumhare liye nimbupaani lata hu."

Taani nodded and rey went to bring nimbupaani for her.

When he came back with a glass of nimbu paani...he saw taani was still sitting on the same place.

"ye lo taani...nimbupaani..." said rey and taani gulped down the whole glass.

"chalo tum so jao." said rey...he made her lay on the bed and was about to go when taani stop him.

"tum bhi yahi so jao plz.." said taani..

"nahi taani...me couch.."

"nahi tum yahi so rahe ho...varna me bhi nahi so rahi.." said taani...

"achha thik hai...me bhi yahi so jata hu...tum bhi so jao.." said rey and he lay down beside her. She hug him. He too hug her back and both close their eyes.

After few minutes rey felt some wait on himself. He open his eyes and found taani completly on him. Her head was restin on his chest and her hands arond his chest.

"taani .."

"rey...let me sleep...dont disturb me.." said taani. She take his hands and put them around her back. Rey smiled and hold her and both drifted off to sleep.

-Flashback end-

Rey smilled remembering the drunk taani. She was still sleeping like a baby on him. He inhalled her hair fragrence and plant a kiss on her head.

Taani's sleep disturbed when rey tighten his grip on her. She can feel him kissing her on the head. She open her eyes lazily...and found herself on a hard muscular chest. She put her chin on his chest and look at him...

"rey...me yaha kese aayi??" ask taani..

"me tumhe yaha laya...tum nashe me thi kal raat." said rey...

Taani came down and lay beside him..

"aahhh...rey mera sar dard kar raha hai.." said taani.

"thik hai...me abhi chai banake lata hu..." said rey and he went to make tea for taani.

Here taani went in washroom and splash water on her face. She felt nice when she feel water on her eyes.

She came back and saw rey standing there with a cup of tea.

Taani sat on the bed and start sipping her tea.

"rey...mene aap ko kal zyada pareshan to nahi kiya na??" ask taani..

"aap?? Taani tum mujhe tum bola karo...jese kal bol rahi thi...achha lagta hai..." said rey..

"what?? Nahi nahi...me aap ko aap hi bulaungi.." said taani...

Rey sat near her. "tumhe pata hai tumne kal kya kya bola aur kya kya kiya??" said rey..

"kya stupid harkat ki mene rey??" ask taani..

"tum ne bola ki ab meri izzat ko lootne se koi nahi bacha sakta...aur phir tumne.."

"aur phir mene kya kiya rey??..boliye na.." taani littarally shook him holding his shoulder.

"and then u kissed me..." said rey cutely.

"huh...kiss?? Ohhh...mujhe to kuch aur hi laga.." said taani...

"achha?? Kya laga tumhe??" ask rey coming closer to her.

"kuch nahi..." said taani and she pushed him. He fell on his back.

Taani stand up to go and freshen up but rey pull her and she fell on him.

"rey. ..kya kar rahe ho?? " said taani...

"kal raat to bade maze se so rahi thi mere upar aur abhi itne nakhre.." said rey pulling her closer to him by her waist.

"rey...yug aa jayega chodo mujhe..." said taani...

Just then they heard door bell.

"itni subah subah kon aa gaya??" said rey..

"hmm...jake dekhte hai.." said taani getting up.

"ya chalo..." said rey and they went in the hall.

When rey open the door he saw his mom standing there.

He was happy seeing his mom. After falling in love with taani he was no more angry with his mom dad.

"mom. ...aap achanak??" ask eey hugging her.

"ha...socha tum logo ko surpise de du.." said his mom and she came in.

"kaisi ho taani??" ask his mom.

"me thik hu ma..." said taani. Both hug eachother.

"ma aap fresh ho jaiye...me breakfast bana deti hu." said taani.

"ok thik hai." said na and she went upstair.

"taani...ab tumhara sar thik hai??" ask rey..

"ha rey...ab thik hai...vese ek baat kahu??" ask taani.

"ha bolo na.."

"i think hume ma ko sach bata dena chahiye.." said taani..

"ha me bhi yahi soch raha hu..." said rey..

"hmm...me breakfast bana deti hu...aap yug ko utha do.." said taani. Rey went to wake yug up and taani started to make breakfast.