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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it do! plz continue sooN!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update! Whoa Arnav confessed he loved her! I'm actually really happy with the way khuhsi reacted. Glad in a way that she ddnt run into his arms. This shows the importance of marriage to her. Arnav is admant that he will get a divorce. Looks like Aman did nice on quite quickly. Good for him. I wonder when he will start falling for the younger sister. Waiting for Arnav and khuhsi to meet again.

Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good chapter!!
The story is progressing really well
It's a totally different concept than the other FFs so far I red in this form
Very mature subject!!
I like the way Khushi held her self when she was talking to Arnav!!
I can understand Astha's struggle and Arnav's anger towards his mom ..
Hopefully they sort these things out soon
Thank you Jenny dear for the PM!!
Can't wait to see how this story unfolds:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Loved it Arnav confessed his feelings to khushi Hope the divorce happens without any problem Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi ..
Arnav is trying to do the right thing by her😊
It's always tough for the "other" woman ...The titles of home-breaker are almost certainly reserved for them.
I liked Arnavji's declaration of love☺️
I'm waiting for his divorce to be finalised and watch how he sweeps Khushi off her feet😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am all caught up Jenny!! Once again I have fallen in love with another story by you. The twists and turns have interesting from Arnav confessing his love to finding out he is in the middle of a divorce. Can't blame Khushi for her reaction to finding out about Lavanya although I think she should give Arnav a chance to explain.
Love how your relationships have complexity yet you portray their emotions so well!

Now I am curious to see how long these two can deny their feelings for each other. Your updates got me reminiscing about songs from the 90's :)



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSyraGOD7-8&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 11 years ago




Loved the update!!! 👏

I wonder if Lavanya will divorce Arnav easily. I also wish to know Aman's feelings towards the annulment of the engagement with Khushi. Looking forward to see when Arnav & Khushi meet again.

Thanks for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...even though I badly want arshi together...I guess khushi has done the right thing by not gibing into her desires...can't wait for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful update it was. Jenny, after reading the update I feel just choked due to emotions.

Khushi took the right decision and I must say it takes great guts to take such decisions. She did not even listen to Arnav's side of the story and asked him to give his marriage a chance. Arnav loves Khushi so much. I dont know whats in store for them in the future but hope they become one in the end.

Also this story is taking a route which I had least expected, so I have decided to just flow with the story and feel for each update as and when you write instead of trying to predict whats going to happen next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey,

In Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth asked Darcy, when did he fell in love with her. He replied, ''I cannot fix on the hour, or the spot, or the look, or the words, which laid the foundation. It is too long ago. I was in the middle before I knew that Ihadbegun.''

I read the whole 10 chapters again to find that exact moment when Arnav fell in love with Khushi. I think it was that jalebi moment. How something so mundane can change your entire course. I love the simplicity with which he said "I love you". And above that that he was not even looking for a confirmation from other side. It was his truth and he was happy saying it aloud.

Being in love is one of the most beautiful feeling. Reliving the moments spent with your beloved is always mesmerising. The bitter coffee too starts tasting sugary...

Thanks for pm.
Happy writing!

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