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DhivyaMurali

@dhivyamurali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Wow..you just blew my mind off by tht twist at the end!...such a romantic update.I was surprised to read tht u had mentioned Nusrat saahab's qawwali (such a soul stirring experience listening to his music) while Arnav was waiting. pls update soon Jenny.

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Ohhh crappp
I hd a feelin arnav ws married..bt im.sure theres a solid reason behind their seperation..bt i doubt khushis gonna understnd this..

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Oh Jenny, I was also thinking of a dead wife..but one right there makes it so complicated!..I hope Arnav has a good reason for behaving this way!..I wish there was no such complications, their reaction and the way you have written was so good..

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Oh no...
Lavanya is his wife?
Now what is gonna happen?
I thought Arnav had a girlfriend...
Didn't expect this twist...
Anyway I enjoyed reading the chapter...
You described their emotions very beautifuly...
Now looking forward to Khushi's reaction...
Don't make it more complicated... 😆

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Ouch !!!!

Pandora's Box...

Nothing good ever comes out of it.

Cliffhanger

After Astha's words Khushi has to be feeling awful...initiating a kiss with Arnav...married man.

Arnav feeling equally bad about not saying what he wanted to before the kiss.

Hope they both talk it out instead of retreating.

Arnav and Lavanya have not been together for more than a year, so either divorced or separated!!

Hoping Khushi does not falter on her decision about Aman. Fix him up with the sister. 😊

It was a lovely chapter. They shared a beautiful kiss.

I have a feeling this Khushi will be a stable, composed and strong person.

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

oh no please jenny ...

this is not how it should have been revealed.

while khushi released herself from her shackles before taking the next step, arnav is still caught in his mesh. lavanya - his wife;

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Awesome !!!!!!!!!! u have written Arnav & khushi's emotions perfectly ... their longingness for each other is beautifully portrayed ... Arnav wants to tell about his marriage to khushi on the other hand khushi is waiting for Arnav to propose her , that is a terrible situation ... the kiss they shared is electrifying , passionate , beautiful , Astha's interference is a rude awakening to Arnav ... khushi might feel like a impulsive teenager for initiating the kiss ... lavanya is Arnav's wife - What the

Arnav is a mystery ...

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

nice upate..⭐️

the way you build up and put their thought, both of them want each other... everytime Arnav wants to share but some or other distraction came..

The way he took care of her lens broke the barrier.. the kiss by conveying their feeling😳.. but what the hell on the earth WIFE?😕😕..

But as u said there is something interesting in it.. i trust your writing and looking forward for ..

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famiya

@famiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

arnav is married😲😲

awesome update

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Auchi

@Auchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Thanks for the PM. wow their first KISS. but than Arnav is married so sad. Here Kushi told Aman abt her feeling for Arnav as she wants to give chance for her feelings. But seems Arnav is already married. Poor Kushi her dreams is shattered within few steps. 😭

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