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Wow!! Nice concept..

awesome & diff concept
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An excerpt from the diary of Swayam Shekhawat:

24.12.2014

And now i want to collect everything that man has.

All the things he values above human life---above everything else.

Gautam Raiprakash used to be my father's best friend, once. He used to be my gautam uncle once.

Until he became a murderer.

I will punish him.

I went to his house today. As i have every single day since i came to know he murdered Dad. I have sworn revenge everyday since then standing at his backgate...knowing his wealth had bribed and effectively erased any hopes of convicting him of orphaning me.

Huge. Sprawling across the most posh neighbourhood you will find anywhere.

When i was little i used to come here with my parents.Dad, mom, taani and me.

Priya aunty, was always so good to us. She was childless, so she saw us as her own babies.

Then she died.

I remember that day. vividly. I don't know but i think gautam raiprakash sort of lost his mental balance after that. Or maybe he is evil without any help.

I really don't know. I just know that he has got to go. i can't live while he lives.

He did not recognize me after so many years. He knows me from several auctions...auctions where i send agents to outbid him---and i always win.

Thats how i became a collector. i collected to make sure he did not get what he wanted.

And then i became a collector.

His secretary had called me up today, scheduling a meeting. He wants the antique Dresden clock i bagged at the jonas auction 3 days ago. I do sometimes first outbid him and bag things he hankers after---and then resell them to him...believe me i make quite a fortune from him. I have fun exploiting him, knowing he will have it at even double the price.

He is addicted enough to commit murder after all.

I have never really known how to end him. But this seems like a good way. Eating away at his riches so that he becomes a pauper. And then someday he will have to give up all he treasures, to me, just to ensure survival. i will use his addiction against him. I am not impatient. I will slowly and surely make him hollow until he crumbles.

Today i went to his house and by and by he got to showing me around his house and his display of priceless items.

His collection of clocks is breathtaking. Its one of India's biggest. But somehow till date i have not seen my dad's clock, the clock for which he was murdered.

But its his books that really interest me.

I told you diary, that i have become a collector. so sometimes when i sell him any antique i bargain for something he has to surrender to me in exchange from his own collection. Mostly books.

And today roaming around that library of his

I heard someone humming a tune softly. It surprised me because till date gautam raiprakash had not remarried...and he was childless .and no servant would dare to hum while cleaning the library.

I followed the tune and ...i saw something that made me realise...that the man had never shown me his greatest treasure.

He had collected an angel.

I could only stand there like an idiot...staring at her while she hummed as she read.

Then... he came in the room...and barked out her name.

"Sharon!" and the spell was broken. The angel looked up with terrified eyes---and fled.

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Awesome update

aswom update...

sharon ka raz jaldi kholo..

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Hey Medha,

I am glad to see u back in writing,The concept is really different as starting is just beautifull,where u started with game of chess to showing a person's POV,The name "collector" looking damm interesting to read ahead..But before that,i must say the update was awesome,Specially in case of Swayam character,His pov was written brilliantly..And the whole plot is just amazed me to read and ask u for further update..I like that small portion of SwaRon,so i am just looking forward to read this..

Keep update soon
Thanx for the PM




Prateek