A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON) - Page 83

hey very nyss update ... juz a correction that pregnant ladies are not allowed to watch horror movies for their health...otherwise it was superb...waiying for ur next chapter... upload soon

You updated after years! But have to say that it was worth it.
it was emotional and funny at the same time. The part of that fashback is sad. Both of them are right from where they stand so Its hard to take a side.
movie part was funny! This is what I like about your ff.. even in the emotional situations you put somr cutr and fun elements.
the last part during thr diner was upsetting. I hate seeing these two fightd. Loved sanyu's outburst. Itd better shr let out everything before it could eat from inside. Try putting r a ndhid's pov here too if you can. I want to know what was going on in his heas when sanyu said all this. He was hurt. We can easily see from his expression.
I just hope these two will sort out everything doon.
Your writing style is just beautiful mahuri. Itd beyond any adjectives.

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Hey mayyy

wow yaar... just superb... i mean amazing... plzz one request.. dont take too much time to update the next part... i thought u will now never update.. its such a beautiful story that i cant wait for the next chapter... plzz update as soon as possible and thx for the pm

too good!! i was waiting for sanyu to let it all out and tell randhir how selfish he was being...sure it came out a bit too harsh...but i think that can happen.

Yo fellas!

So are u changing the plot and incidences..??
Also tell me wud u be frequent with the updates??

You mean changing the entire plot

Answering you both..