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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Haw! Too damn adorable. I even thought the part where Kaustuki asked Sanyukta about Randhir being a good lover was cute. Awkward, but cute -b.t.w. I'm sure he was *winks* A chance you'll write a flashback about what happened? Err-... I mean we all know what happened, clearly, but how...-

And then Parth and Sanyukta I'm digging this friendship they share. The way she walked away after calling him 'dad' was supercute.

And Eeek! She going to tell him? I really wonder how their relationship in your story is. Can't wait for the next chapter. I am loving every bit of it.

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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Res
~Unres~
Ohhk...so when I first read the title "The one with the crazy talks"...I was like ohhk what sorta crazy talks it will be??
But when I started reading it...I was literally ROFL reading your update. It was hysterical!!!
Loved those blathers of kaustuki when she was again and again reminding them of RANDHIR...lol
It had some cute parts as well. Loved dem too.

Nd yeah I agree...it was just 2nd chap., it would have been too early if Randhir wud have come across the truth in this chap. So take your time nd m sure everything will fall at apt time nd place!!!
Once again telling you I absolutely loved the way you wrote the convo of trio--- "THE BEST PART" of chap.
You write amazingly.
Nd thanx for the pm.
Update ASAP
Love ya
Samaira
PS-your name??

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

"It's another Randhir inside her! There will be two of them! The humankind is coming to an end!"

tis line totallly cracked me up!!

I think its okay if it was parth not a big deal , even he's a major character

lovely update

I'm wondering how will Randhir react...

Update soon!!

And thanks for the PM

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daisydee425

@daisydee425

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

wondering how will Randhir react

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

superb update yaar...
eagerly waiting for their confrontation...

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kiru2992

@kiru2992

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

amazing..!!!

waiting for sandhir..:-)

plzz update asap..:-)

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purnima209

@purnima209

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awsme part yar nut randhir will accept it? i m getting so tensed by readg it ...

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Irij55

@Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Great try to upload next part soon

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yatup

@yatup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

crazy man ! You post it in such a short time of yours. I'll be happy to wait for your beautiful update. I think Randhir will not freake out at the pregnancy thing. Good in bed huh ! Two Randhirs, the end of humankind. Good humor though. Email and text him, she thinks he will be not serious about it

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Please let me say this... Your FF is hilarious!!! The whole sanyukta and kaustuki going through pregnancy books!!! Hahah!!! Amazing!!! And even telling Randhir about his baby through EMAIL or TEXT!! Really amusing! Please do pm me when you update the next part... Cannot wait! :)

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