ARSHI FF: Unlearning LoVe|| #NOTE# Pg 29 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Asvati

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amazing and mind blowin concept...

Originally posted by: pooja_arshi

beautifully written!!!
loved ur explanation towards love...n different view ppl have in case of love!!!!
n chap 1 was awesome man...u just nailed it!!!!

Originally posted by: raws

oh god...poor gal...

Originally posted by: aashi12

I was.. Shocked, yes.

I was stumped, yes.

I was raged, yes.

I was emotional, yes.

I was helpless, yes.

Heck.. So many emotions!

Its so so crazy, i feel i can empathise with Khushi. Has it something to do with be being an Indian girl? Because there can't be any other reason. I almost felt heartbroken, and the way Khushi couldn't believe it.. I was getting it. Of course, any bride that will be that way.
I didn't even feel this bad while watching Queen, because your words and description was beyong everything else.

A typical indian wedding.
But what i feel bad about is, the way someone else's decision holds so much power over lives.. Enough to drive us over to the knife of death. Shouldn't these guys be Criminals then?
They aren't because, somewhere we girls are weak or too dependeant or too loon, society does that.. I guess. That actually makes me sad.

Payal.. Committed suicide? Why? Just because a stupid dog didn't stood by his promise, she gave up her life! What crap, but i know it happens!

See Di, you made me all Bhagat singh, in a different context though!

Who's this guy?.. Better be someone good. Or the groom. Varna, to me, Saat Khoon Maaf!

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I love your asr :-) btw are we getting an update? :-D

Originally posted by: arnshi

Very nice start and gripping...let see how the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: DilLoveRomance

Can't wait for the next chapter

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

i have a question please...who is groom here...u did not mention name...hoping it is not arnav...at the end the man came is it arnav??????????????????/

feel really bad for payal...she is not that strong...
interesting interesting please update chapter 2 nd ASP please...

please if possible buddy me and give me an update alerts...

i have lot to catch up u r other stories...deal and symphonious saga...

cheers...

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

I love your asr :-) btw are we getting an update? :-D

Originally posted by: 1987Trisha

very interesting start...

Payal committed suicide 😭