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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

A very beautiful OS...

I would love seeing this happen but sure ki aisa kuch nahii hoga :v

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-VJ.ReyManiac-

@-VJ.ReyManiac-

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

awesome thot re... Really hope show Mai aisa ho😉 Luved it

Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

👏 👏 👏
Epsss
Deeth
Tu na word nhi h mere pass tere liye
😊
Hayeee kya os tha yr
so Superb love it so much
Mere Subhe ki itni Achi Suruwat
😊
KriYansh Epsss Hayeee
Mar gayi
(Pata nhi kitni bar marti hu me 😆 )
Bt yr So so Amezing it i was like
"O"
lots of love to u Deeth
Nd kissi bhi tere liye 😳 😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I loved this!
imagining all this.. i don't know.. it brought tears to my eyes! :c
I loved the fact that Rey was so nervous and the way he confessed his feelings out.. by touching her..
i always love it when Rey digs his head in the crook of her neck.. that moment it just feels so.. i don't knw..
it feels so.. whatever
So intimate.. i mean.
And that ReYam conversation!! Lol.. hahahahaha..
Uske baad that Airport scene!!!! Ishhh...
Ab aur me kya bolu.. aapko toh pata hi ha..
Someday i wanna be like u! 😊 ❤️

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sun_flower60

@sun_flower60

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

this was so good...

loved it...amazing... ^_^

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was such a beautiful piece to read...

The emotions were beautifully expressed...

This was awesome!!😊

P.S. aisa kuch d3 mein dekhno ko mil jaye toh maza aa jaye...

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Deeths Di...🤗

My heart in already running a Marathon...☺️

Agar iska 50% bhi show mei mila na toh I will be ... 🤢

N apki ek aur prediction will cum true...😉

N I pray ki aisa kuch Ho...

Do I need to say Hw Awesum it is...

No words to express wat I felt while reading dis...

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

OMG..!! This was super cute...
Hayee i loved it..
Sachi mei spcly d cnfesion part..
You are seriously a brilliant writr..
Your all stories are just woow..
And here is one more.. :))

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Ahh... I liked it... <3

This was something minus all jhol Jhamela. and Written on purely real instincts of a Boy in Love..

I was grinning like a fool all the way through it because of Rey's cute. stupid, nervous verses..

and this time you have done a splendid job with his Me-Dialogues Deetha... (A hug from me on that part.)

I always loved it when You show some close close moments of Rey and Kriya that seat belt wala scene was to good.. you explained it well..

And then his confession-sweet-little and yet heart melting one.. its nice to read something minus drama and straightforward and when it comes to u.. you have a knack of writing things beautifully deetha.

over all I loved it...

PS: thanks for tag...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 11 years ago