KriYaansh OS: Saibo |By Deetha (_Blind.Dance_)|

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deeth's net isn't working. Hence, I am posting on her behalf. xD
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So people here I am back with a OS. Just couldn't stop myself from writing this.

Note : Galti se bhi ye aapki kahi dekhne mila toh I am not at all responsible -_-

Special thanks to my Jaanu for posting this!! :* Muaahhh me lubs you!! 🤗

So enjoy!! Yippee kal Kriya aajayegi !!
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" Good luck dude!! " Swayam grinnned at Rey and hugged him .
"Thanks yaar!! acha uska flight ki aane mei kitna time hai ?? " a jumpy Rey asked Swayam. Finally he would see her. Like he would see her with his own eyes, he would feel her fragrance, her presence, he will hear that melodious voice , he would get to see into her eyes after so long. And then let her know his feelings. He is so excited to see the happiness in her eyes. That big cute hearty grin of hers. God he is missing her so much right now!!

"90 minutes more!! But tu abhi nikal !! Okay?? "Swayam grinned at Rey. He is more happy than Rey to know both will finally overcome all the misunderstandings, fights and will confess their love to each other. Rey gave a excited nod and left when Swayam with a smile left for college.

" Guys Rey kaha hai? " Sharon asked as soon as entering the Rehearsal hall. They are supposed to gather to inform Amar about the Mobile Food cart.

"Wo Kriya ko pick karne gaya " Swayam said and everyone suppressed their smiles. After all they need to save them till the time Rey and Kriya would come and then they will happily do the teasing.

"Toh Amar bhi abhi nahi aaya!! Mai canteen jaa raha hun, agar wo aaye toh message kardena . " Saying this Swayam left to canteen. He was so engrossed in his phone that he bumped into someone.

"Sorry .. tu?? tu yaha kya kar raha hai ? " Swayam asked seeing Rey grinning stupidly in front of him.

"tu gaya nahi?? " he frowned.

" Wo actually tu bhi chalna chahta hai toh chal sakta hai " Rey asked hesitant.

"Kaha??? " swayam was absolutely clueless.

"arey Kriya ko pick karne ?? " Rey smiled at him . Another stupid smile.

" Nahi toh!! tu akele jaa raha tha na .. wait wait .. kahi tu nervous toh nahi?? "swayam teased understanding the situation.

"Ner...nervous?? Koun?? Mai?? Na...nahi toh!! Rey..Reyaansh Singhania kabhi nervous nahi hota "he stammered.

"Yeah yeah!! Reyaansh Singhania kabhi nervous nahi hota, except when its about Kriya Ghai? " Swayam smiled teasingly.

Rey sighed . No use in acting in front of Swayam!!

"haan dude!! agar wo mujhe dekhke hi chillake cab leke chaligayi toh?? waise bhi baat bhi nahi karna chahti hai wo mujhse "he looked away sad.

"Arey !! Rey stop it!! Dekh agar wo jaati hai toh tu usse rokh bhi toh sakta hai!! Come on yaar, you know better how to handle Kriya, right? " Swayam gave some moral support .

"And I don't think wo jayegi!! Teri pakka sunegi "

" Sach mei sunegi?? " Rey asked with eyes full of hope.

"Ofcourse Rey ab jaa jaldi time ho raha hai " he smiled wide.

"Thanks dude!! bye !! "and with that Rey vanished into thin air in seconds.

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" I hope wo mujhse baat kare, atleast meri baat sune "he said to himself and again looked at his hands.

"yaar why am I sweating this much!! " he rubbed his hands once again and waited shifting his weight from one leg to other.

Suddenly he held his breathe when he heard that her flight is gonna land in few seconds. His eyes stuck to the pathway and his eyes pained to see her as soon as they can.

" kya wo mujhe pehchanegi?? " he spoke to himself but face palmed himself in the next instant.

"Rey wo bas do hafte keliye gayi hai , 10 saal nahi ki tu badal gaya aur wo tujhe pehchaan na payegi !! Universe Ji please.. pagal ho raha hun mai , jaldi bhej do usse " He folded his hands quickly praying when people around him looked at him weird seeing him talk with himself from so long.

His eyes noted almost every single soul coming out with wide smiles and meeting their families, and that's when his eyes glued to a petty frame clad in a black shorts and a white T-shirt . He blinked wiping the pain of his eyes. Finally they are viewing her. She looked so beautiful. So serene, so gorgeous, so smooth and delicate , struggling with her trolley bag. All he did was getting glued to his place and looking at her as she crossed him and walked out.

" Taxi !! " he was bought out of his trance by her voice and he rushed to her immediately. She was so lost in herself to notice him standing behind her and fidgeting to call her.

"Taxii!! "she shouted more this time but almost jumped when she heard that voice after so many days.

"Kriya " he was surprised is an understatement. He was actually shocked how he sounded , totally hoarse whisper.

In a swift motion she turned back to just see him right behind her looking at her with those eyes which always made her weak. And she hated it. In these two weeks she prepared herself to face him back again and be normal when he is around and here goes all the preparation in gutter.

"Aa..aap?? " she stammered and frowned realizing she is already breathing hard because he is so close to her.

"Wo , actually , I mean.. pick... haan pick karne aaya tha tumhe " he stammered " Swayam busy tha na "he blurted and kicked himself hard in mind for saying that. She looked away and gave a sad smile.

Swayam busy tha. Isiliye. Par why I am sad?? Mujhe toh pata hona chahiye pehle hi ki ...

"kya soch rahi ho?? "he interrupted.

Oh God !!! Mai bhi kya bolta hun!!

"Kuch nahi!! " she looked everywhere but him.

"toh hume chalna chahiye " he said hoping she would look at him but she nodded her head and turned to grab her bag and move front and that's when she froze, sensing his hand on hers. For a second both were numb. Their first touch after so many days. But irony.

As soon as sensing the touch her insides broke again all over knowing the effect he still had on her and the amount of love she still has for him in her heart which almost bought tears in her eyes all over again and on the other hand his every single cell is getting charged up sensing her touch , more because of his newly realized love for her. Taking a deep breathe he spoke

" Mai leke aata hun "he almost whispered and she quickly pulled her hand away nodding and looking away. She was waiting for him to walk and to follow him when she felt his grip on her wrist and looked up at him who is already looking at her and frowned at him.

"Itni bheed mei mai tumhe akela nahi chodne wala hun " he said with so much intensity that she looked down immediately and with that he carefully walked her out of the airport and opened the door for her . She immediately got in to get rid of his grip but it seemed he is not at all interested in leaving her hand. She looked at him confused when he started leaning in . She dug herself into the seat as much as she can when her eyes went as wide as saucers . He looked into her eyes for a moment and moved further almost hiding his face in her curls while his hand left his and they worked upon the seatbelt. He nuzzled a bit more into her hair taking in her fragrance when she turned her hands into fists. Her body is all numb with this proximity after so many days. He slowly moved back with a smile at her and closed the door .

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She was so engrossed in looking out of the window that she never realized that they reached her guest house 10 minutes back and all he did was folding his arms and stare at her resting his head on the window. When she is out of trance she looked around and fidgeted seeing him stare at her like that.

"Kriya!! " his voice was full of emotions right now. All she managed to do was nod.

"chale?? " he said after few minutes of gap. This is not the right place. Once they are inside her apartment he called her.

"baat bhi nahi karogi mujhse ?? " he said with a heavy voice. It hurts so much that she is not comfortable to talk with him.

But she stood silent her back facing him. She knew if she will turn back of speak something she will break down. Totally!! And she doesn't want that.

He waited for her to respond. But getting no response he moved forward and slowly slipped his hands around her waist carefully and gently pulling her into his arms and rested her on his broad front frame.

Kriya gasped in shock and was about to move out when he gripped tight pulling her more into his grip .

"Rey "she started tensed but he interrupted.

"Shhh!! " saying that he dug his face in her curls and sighed longingly. How much he craved to hold her frame in his, to inhale her fragrance and to feel her touch.

"I missed you so much!! " he breathed in her ears when she breathed hard .

"Rey "she tried to come out once again but all in vain.

"Shhh!! Don't !! Baat mat karo!! Let me do the talking today " he sighed moving more into her.

am so sorry Kriya " he said and kissed her in the crook of her neck and she shuddered at the touch of his lips on her skin. She could feel her skin burn under his lips.

" I am so sorry to hurt you, par mai kya karun, you know do baar dil toot chuka hai mera aur mai dargaya ki ek aur baar hua toh I can't handle myself. " he let his feelings in front of her closing his eyes and resting his face in the crook of her neck leaving her heaving.

" I loved you, always !! I still love you Kriya!! tumhare jaane ke baad I realized ki you mean so much to me and I need you to live my life normally!! To breathe properly. I love you so much Kriya " he kept on chanting those words never knowing those flowing tears of her eyes.


" I am a jerk to hurt you!! Maine ek baar aur tumhe hurt kiya!! iss baar knowingly . I am so sorry love " he confessed . Hearing his last word she sniffed hard and loud bringing him out of his thoughts . He immediately turned her towards him and cupped her face.

"Kriya please don't cry!! I am so sorry!! " he said as a tear rolled down his cheek seeing her that broken. He quickly pulled her into his arms when she held onto him life life depended on it and cried her heart out .

"Shhh!!! Bas!! I promise aage se kuch galat nahi hoga Kriya!! I promise " he pulled her back to seal his promise with a kiss which will wash out their pains forever and to start a new beginning.


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reviews please!!

For PM's add my PM ID : ..Oyster..

will be sending PM's later as my net is not working properly right now!! :)

with love...

-Deetha

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Posted: 11 years ago
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super excited rey.. n swayum as a best frnd support him... :-)
nervous rey.. :-P
i loved d confession part.. hope soo.. show me v kuch aisa hi dekhne ko mile.. n i ll bug u by saying teri ek aur predictn sacch ho gayi :-P

n update is awsum as alwaz.. well written.. :-* :-)
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Sooo Cute Love Confessiom...loved ittt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Diii *hugs*

Aww this is so damn awsum loved it..

Aww reyam part aww i loved that..

Then then the nervous rey aww..

Confession aww that was so awsum dii

kash ye bhi sach hojaye..then i will bug u..

Loved this OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS...!
i wish this happens in the show ..!
loved the way you did the confession...!
simply beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haiiyyeee...
Super awsmmm OS di...
I so loved d way u potrayed diff shades of rey..
The excited Rey..
The nervouse Rey..
The Rey who is waiting for his loves.. So damm cuteee..
N den dat Rey u behved as if finalli got his life back.. Haiyyee...
N d most beautiful n bested Rey who finally was getting His Love back ^_^
a very cute n simple OS with so much emotions.. Haiyyeee...
Me loved it di...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aawww :')

Deethu i loved it sooo muchhh :')

I loveddd how u showed Rey all excited like a small kid but nervous to the core...


woh mjhe pehchanegi ya nahi..that part really cracked me up.. xD


and then..both of them...feeling awkward... those small touches creating havocs... i just loved all that...


then they reaching guest house.. Rey confessing everything while hugging her... behen... is part ne dil le liya mera... especially when he said "i missed you soo much" & "let me talk today" ... haayyyeee...


I loved loved loveddd ittt :$



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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Vo mujhe pehchanegi na.." 🤣 🤣 Deeethaaa kya karti hai tu yaar!! 🤣


"Let ne do the talking today" :') Hayyyee THIS rey I want back. Who use to pull her in khopcha kabhi bhi that too full Haq se! ☺️


Kash ye OS bhi Sach ho jayee!! <33


Deeetthhaaahahaahahhaa ! :* :* :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Luv it
d confession part was written awesomely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os...
lovd d airport n confession wala part...
m excited to c d actual confession...
do pm me plss...ur works...

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