Don't confess! (Sandhir fanfic)Index: Pg1 *Last part updated-pg 41* - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
this comment is not valid... see below!
Edited by sniggybabes - 11 years ago
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Res
waiting for you to update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
unres...
Ri, tussi ne toh mera dil aaj khush kar ditta..😎now for sure..u wrote it in the most amazingly splendid way..😛
the last part was worth it for our century wait..😉
starting wid the line..
"Every action- from his hands going down, fingers curling around the handle of the tea-cup, cup being brought to his slip, the sip he took, his Adam's apple bobbing with the drink to the cup being brought back to its initial position."
is some kind of slow motion action going on..every word written like, it would take a millennium jst to complete that one action😲
"A part of him was already singing and dancing about it. And the other part was suffering from post trauma disorder."
a very complicated situation expressed so simply..hats off😎
the father-son duo drive was cool n heart touching..😛
everything is fine nd normal now..fit n fine..
reunion ki baddhaiyaan😉

"See? How it irks him when he doesn't get attention?" he spoke to Sanyukta. "Reminds me of how you used to be in our college days. Genes!"
this line won my heart..flashback mein bhej diya🤣
overall, u did a grt job...😛
loved it..
u finished it with an unfinished ending..
thats what i lyk bout u!😎
so apna dusra ff kab update kar rahi hai 😲 😡and any plans to write sumthing new..😎i m waiting like always..

riya😉
Edited by anyania - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for my comment! length depends on when u update!
the sooner u update the longer the comment

unres

rini thune kitna late kiya!

moi is sad!

hwevr coming to updat!
loved it!
an amazing end!
i liked the father son ride the most!

thnx for pm!
keep writing more

love
snigdha.
Edited by sniggybabes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all parts in one go... they r really amazing...😊
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed!
Firstly let me start of my saying how much i respect Khaled Hosseini! I have never cried as I had in 'A Thousand Splendid Suns'

I mean I am one of those people that hardly ever cries in movies and books, but his writing just opens though voltage gated channels! Lol! That aside!

The way you started of Vardhaan and Niharika, was just fabulous! Those unspoken feelings and emotions were so aptly portrayed! I love how your foreshadowed Parth-Vardhaan-Niharika with Aarav-Randhir-Sanyukta!

I mean your inclusion of the line, "no will never know" during those intercourse scenes was just brilliant! the first made me blush and the second I smiled sadly at how cruel life can be (Well you can say I got attached to the story and its characters!)

Sameer and his deed was atrocious! But when in nation where a stranger does things worse to innocent victims and still get away with, this has to happen sometime nah! The ugly truth that society tries to hush up, but such scars cannot be hidden by mask!

That chapter was soo traumatic yet touching at the same time! Traumatic and touching since this happens in real life as well! Hats off for penning maturely penning down such a sensitive issue!

Coming to Aarav, he is such a cutaaay! Completely like his father! Now I know why you said how freakishly alike our fics are! Hahahah! I see you have resed for the next part but not yet uploaded😆

Update sooon! In fact update today itself!

Love
Pari

PS: I planned to write a longer comment, but I kind feel like sleeping now😆
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res, I know bohot baki hai abhi :D
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Kriti. -_- Tujhey aur kya bolun. UNRES nahi toh katti. >.<
Sniggy, kar rahi hun ASAP xD
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Donewa!😃
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Originally posted by: gujjupari

Unresed!

Firstly let me start of my saying how much i respect Khaled Hosseini! I have never cried as I had in 'A Thousand Splendid Suns'

Yes. The first sequence in that book which made me cry was little Mariyam waiting outside her father's mansion. Damn! T_T

I mean I am one of those people that hardly ever cries in movies and books, but his writing just opens though voltage gated channels! Lol! That aside!

Khaled Hosseini is a brilliant story teller. I'm reading Mountains Echoed currently. But A Thousand Splendid Suns shall remain my favourite for a long long time now. :)

The way you started of Vardhaan and Niharika, was just fabulous! Those unspoken feelings and emotions were so aptly portrayed! I love how your foreshadowed Parth-Vardhaan-Niharika with Aarav-Randhir-Sanyukta!

Pari! You understand me!! :") I'm glad you could comprehend what I have tried to depict! *dances*

I mean your inclusion of the line, "no will never know" during those intercourse scenes was just brilliant! the first made me blush and the second I smiled sadly at how cruel life can be

That, coming from an amazing writer like you, means a LOT. Thank you so much for understanding my work! :D

(Well you can say I got attached to the story and its characters!)

^This kind of a comment surely does mean a lot to writers. Thank you. :)

Sameer and his deed was atrocious! But when in nation where a stranger does things worse to innocent victims and still get away with, this has to happen sometime nah! The ugly truth that society tries to hush up, but such scars cannot be hidden by mask!

Exactly! There are people who don't just understand this. There's a comment on Page 41 to which I have replied on that page itself. You might as well check. Disgraced. :/

That chapter was soo traumatic yet touching at the same time! Traumatic and touching since this happens in real life as well! Hats off for penning maturely penning down such a sensitive issue!

Yayy! Thanks Pari!

Coming to Aarav, he is such a cutaaay! Completely like his father! Now I know why you said how freakishly alike our fics are! Hahahah! I see you have resed for the next part but not yet uploaded😆

Yes I have. Thank you for your encouraging comment! I'm typing the last part. I'll update aaj ya kal pakka se. :D

Update sooon! In fact update today itself!
That just reminds of how you have left your fic dangling as well. Plan to update, maybe? :D

Love Evermore,
Pari Rini.

PS: I planned to write a longer comment, but I kind feel like sleeping now😆
This length is enough for me. xD

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