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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

UNresedd!!!

So as I was reading the update! I have to mention this, when Aarav was describiing Randhir's actions, at this line I was feeling a little hot under the collar: his father loosen his tie with great suave and fix his hair by running his fingers through them.

I really don't know why, but that was just hot in my opinion! Maybe bcos it's Randhir🤣☺️☺️

The father-son duo in the park though! Your mother is very dangerous! Haaw! How did you know??🤣🤣🤣

Rini that was gold!😆

"There wasn't any more of her left for him to hurt."

^^ That line was brilliant! I mean WOW!

Aarav is the cutest kid ever! I mean even though you have finished off your FF on such an endearing and realistic note, I can surely imagine the father-son duo ganging up against Sanyukta!

This fic has come to such a beautiful end Rini! But I want more re!!!!

Can we get an epilogue??? Pleaaassseee!!!!!!!

Me DEMANDS an epilogue! TODAY!

Love,

Pari

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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namya

@namya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Thanx for the pm

This was the best ending ever

Nice update

Awesome

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Happy endings, how I love those! *wipes off imaginary tear*

Yeah, now is when I (finally) comment. At the last part. But it was an amazing last part, you should know. Perfect is different for the writer and the reader, and I loved it. Especially Randhir purposefully arguing with Aarav, with wrong point. That part was just *sigh*

Perf 😃

Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Rini! You're mad! This was beautiful. I have nothing more to say. Keep writing, my friend :**

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

RES.

I read the last chappie now <3

Rini ur an awesome writer. That's all I can say xD

Someday I hope to write with you :*

I have some catching upto do...dont know how many chappies of this fic i missed. I guess not many. I had read the part till where Sameer finds out the truth about Aarav. Memories r rushing bakk to me xP I guess i read till part twelve or thirteen. Lemme read the two or three chappies i have missed and will then comment detail Mein.

pretty busy though so if i forget to unres, feel free to drop me a reminder. XD

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Angela Jacob

@Stana_Katic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Chorry!!!! But I have not commented on this ff for one time!!!

I am stupid idiot!!!!😭

But I have always read the ff from my mob!!!!

And I love your ff like hell!!!!

I was always waiting for update !!!!

Now coming to the story..

Can I hug and kiss tightly!!!!!👏👏 🤗❤️

Of course I wlll!!!

Oh My good ness!!!

Di, you know

I am crying because now

I will never read a next chap of this marvalous ff

I loved this ff to the core !!!!!

Why do always good things end!!!!!!!

Oh I hate endings!!!!!😭

But this ff's ending ROLLED AND ROCKED!!!!!!!!!

I love you fo writing the ff ..DONT CONFESS👏👏👏

Hats offfto you!!!!!🤗

I just loved the end..

I am ery happy and overjoyed that you are my sissy!!!!!!!!!

Anyway, now I may never can post a comment in this ff!!!!!!😭

Love you more and love you like helll❤️

Angela❤️

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: dixitciaaa
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!this part was truly one of the best!!!!
all of ur writings r amazing!!!👏

Thank YOUHH! :D

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: arshifan2012
"tune maari entryaan aur dil mei baji ghantiya re tang tang!" 🤣 it was an awsome part! Took a bit while to get into the story because of my studies -_- but then again , i love u for this! Sorry for the chotu comment...i love u! :* and this was awsome! Aarav is so much like Randhir! :v :v

Thanks Zoozoo! :*
P.S GET A CELL PHONE

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Thanks Zoozoo! :*
P.S GET A CELL PHONE

I have been telling her to get one too 😆 WA pe bulaayi jaa rhi hu usse.😆

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: anyania
Res..
unres...
Ri, tussi ne toh mera dil aaj khush kar ditta..😎now for sure..u wrote it in the most amazingly splendid way..😛
the last part was worth it for our century wait..😉
starting wid the line..
"Every action- from his hands going down, fingers curling around the handle of the tea-cup, cup being brought to his slip, the sip he took, his Adam's apple bobbing with the drink to the cup being brought back to its initial position."
is some kind of slow motion action going on..every word written like, it would take a millennium jst to complete that one action😲
"A part of him was already singing and dancing about it. And the other part was suffering from post trauma disorder."
a very complicated situation expressed so simply..hats off😎
the father-son duo drive was cool n heart touching..😛
everything is fine nd normal now..fit n fine..
reunion ki baddhaiyaan😉

"See? How it irks him when he doesn't get attention?" he spoke to Sanyukta. "Reminds me of how you used to be in our college days. Genes!"
this line won my heart..flashback mein bhej diya🤣
overall, u did a grt job...😛
loved it..
u finished it with an unfinished ending..
thats what i lyk bout u!😎
so apna dusra ff kab update kar rahi hai 😲 😡and any plans to write sumthing new..😎i m waiting like always..

riya😉