Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25)

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Yellow.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

awesome update... ahhhwhy cant he trust little bit on khushi after they had their beautiful day... poor khushi

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

tht was brilliant one

arnav is insecure of himself

it would be interesting to see wat khushi does now to make things right

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mamidis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Very well written... sad to know way their day ended...

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sugandha mishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

i like this khushi ..very much .. do responsible !!!
everyone would want a life partner likr her !!! ;)

but u stopped again giving us a cliff hanger .. and i am feeling like crying now ... !!
try to update soon please !

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keyboard123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Great update! Can't wait for the next one!

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Once again , another absolutely brilliant chapter.

Loved it to bits !!

It was so intense...but really sad at the same time.

After such a beautiful day and afternoon of course ☺️ , their evening went downhill totally. The unexpected presence of Rohan in the restaurant soured the mood of our Birthday Boy.

Arnav really needs to learn communicating with Khushi. He expected Khushi to come after him when he left abruptly , but poor Khushi couldn't do so even after wanting to do so because it would have looked rude. Such a little thing turned into a bigger issue...why ? Because Arnav can at times be a total Ass ! I I do understand that he had a sad past and he has gt a bunch of...no...tons of insecurity in his heart , but even after Khushi gave her everything to him , he still couldn't manage to trust her.

He loves her doesn't he ?? Even after Khushi told him that she had no idea about Rohan's presence there , he chose to believe that she knew.

I understand his reasons...but then i'm really pissed off with him after reading the chapter.

So now Khushi has decided to confess her feelings to him...Hmmm...i don't know how i feel about that.

I really hope the consequences of her action will be positive. I'm actually quite nervous lol :p

I just can't wait for the next chapter !!

Update soon hun !

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: sphobic

to be honest ...i didnt felt an ounce of emotion for him...their are people who themselves make their life complicated and for now...for me, he is being one...so i didnt felt bad for him...

and i told that already that Khushi's part wasnt written emotional...just "I" felt bad for her..

and about the truth...if khushi had not picked that topic ...then I would have made peace with that...but SHE thinks that it was about trusting her...but it wasnt...so I really want her to know the real reason...not what SHE has concluded...

i can understand y u feel tht way... htt he has md a mess of his own life...

bt i wud disagree... i feel he has never had any control over wht he wud shape into... bt then this is too cmplicated to understand without hving witnessed it first hand.

n abt her knwing... i still feel... tht nt knwing wudnt b bad.. .bt still if she has to knw.. it shud come at the rt time..

fr tht matter, i hd the same opinion whn we were talking abt her getting to knw tht arnav held her responsible fr his loneliness fr years. tht if she has to knw.. it shud b in a appropriate time n manner... there is no pt, mking every truth razor sharp... it wud not solve any purpose.

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..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Finally Khushi realized he is insecure

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Writer ji,

I am really sorry if I sound rude here...but can't help it..

The reason for me not commenting on the last chapter was...that I felt something amiss...but was unable to point what??...but I think I found today...it was the trust from Arnav's side...even after consummating their marriage he isnt trusting her...so i think there was just that...pleasure, need...because love comes with trust...no trust no love

And now I think I have come to a point where ...if Arnav will completely change himself and start trusting Khushi...still I cant put myself to like him...

And a big round of applause for you 👏 👏 👏 ...really ..you can make me hate a male protagonist of some story ...which is really commendable... because our mentally is that ...if a person is a hero of show/movie...then we support him in everything he does and even love him for that...but you can make me hate the hero here... ..thats the magic of your writing...really great work...👏 👏 👏 👏

And by putting my thoughts here I dont mean to hurt anyone...and so dont get offended ...i dont mean to offend anyone...

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: sphobic
what confuses me here is...when after being married, after telling him, she can never even think of cheating onhim, after telling she is only his, after taking their relationship to the next level...still he cant trust her and accuse her of inviting her "friend" then how can Khushi think that her confessing her feelings for him will change him,,,,put the insecurities to rest???? ... He can again throw her confession straight on her face as everytime he had done in past...

if i hv any understanding of arnav... n if khushi decides to confess rt away... he wud...

though again.. i wud love to b proven wrong.. atleast this once.. i wud give away anythg to b proven wrong.

bt rt nw, arnav is nt in a frame of mind to handle the love confession.

so i agree to ur pt.. hw can she think tht it wud solve his insecurity issues.

i still think tht following him in the restaurant, n similar few incidents before a formal confession wud do her much better, than a direct confession.