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Posted: 11 years ago
So much insecurity??? Can't he see that he is hurting her with it.
Great update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey, this is my honest opinion. After reading this update, I felt the story is going in the same loop again and again. Arnav is not able to digest Khushi's friendship with Rishabh... Khushi does not want to leave Rishabh's friendship at any cost... Arnav screaming at Khushi and his trust issues and blaming her at the drop the hat...

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Posted: 11 years ago
thnks for d update dear..
waiting for d nxt part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Rishabh relented, Arnavji's moodiness kicked in and her beautiful day rolled downhill. --- I wanted to laugh when I read this...Arnav was in his usual irrational and not at all understanding manner..I understand his insecurities but like Khushi mentioned he is behaving like 5 yr old. But his insecurities are driving him over the edge...its time for the man to take a mental check up. Her promise and her love is very evident yet he is blind to it. Khushi isn't Sujatha. He got to get it inside him..and how much will Khushi pamper Arnav...Like again she mentioned..she gave herself completely to him and yet he accuses her..thats bad. I felt really bad..

"But for the first time in her life she realized that the guy she had crushed on so hard and so long did not make her heart beat like her frowning yet lovable husband. While Rishabh made her feel cheery and safe, Arnavji makes her heart feel alive and had stir a strange feeling inside her. An edge, which she was missing in her cocooned existence. Has revamped her whole life by just being him and made her fall in love with this new version of herself. New her who felt like a woman responsible for her man. New her who was experiencing new things in the world in his guidance. New her who reveled in his possessives. Felt beautiful like never before when he looked at her. She was enlightened enough now to figure that life with him with all his trust issues will be no bed of roses, but it is the only life she wanted. It was only him that her heart wanted. It would beat for no one else"---- that was incredible scripting. I loved these lines while reading...Her emotions are on the plate here..and yet that fool fails to see like he missed the fact that she was waiting for him to return to the table to eat..

one of them would actually need to think before acting on impulses and Arnavji did not look like he was cut out for the job. She just prayed that he cools down by the time he comes back.And her prayers were answered. By mid main-course when Arnavji joined them back, he was exuding the warmth of an ice cube.--- again the sarcasm here and Khushi's wisdom was appreciation worthy...Arnav again missed the point...rudeness is what he knows and understands..

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And it was not like he has some unending stamina in him to go on fighting for every crumb of affection at each step of life either. He gets tired too. Gets disheartened to admit that she still prefers her friendship over his comfort. All he craves from her is exclusivity, but the person that she is, he might as well be asking the sun to shine exclusively on him. ----- lovely analogy here Anon but Arnav is getting all the affection he is needing but he fails to see it..why?

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It was her 33rd call in last 20 minutes. -----My god! If it was me, I would be waiting for him with a bat and wont do this 33 calls..its really too much

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It took Khushi 15 minutes to climb that one set of stairs. Her leg plus the soreness in her body being the culprits. Looking at his reaction she herself was tempted to believe that instead of just having an unplanned dinner with Rishabh, she had committed adultery with him. That is Arnavji for you. And then his refusal to talk things out almost always. Add to it his king sized royal temper. Her work is definitely cut out for her in this life.---- Poor Khushi...and he hurts her..I feel bad...I was touched by HP's concern for her..that part was really sweet

If she hadn't known better she would have accused him of behaving like a five year old on his 31st birthday. But she knew better. She knew that he was not a sulking five year old waiting for his mommy to come and mollify him. He was a simmering volcano which had the power to burn everything she holds so dear to her heart down to ashes. Including himself. And that was something she will never allow. She had climbed these stairs with the intent of fighting her way back into the fortress better known as his heart from which he had once again shut her out tonight. ---- How long will she fight? How much she will endure? That's my question..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Today I cried for Khushi...its a beautiful update and a sad one.Arnav is hurting Khushi both phisically(she had to go up and down the staircase which is a big and painful effort for her) and emotionally.Hariprakash's observasion and concern are touching.Arnav's insecurities run seriously deep.Only Khushi can be so strong and forgiving.Hatsoff to her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update!! It was fab!! I knew it that aftr such romantic happenings in arnav n khushi's life...kuch toh tehalka machne vala hai!! N same happened!!
I truly cud undrstand arnav..he wanted khushi to cm to him n muze bhi laga she cud hv excusd herself for sm moments n shud hv gone to him...but theek hai she didnt!!!
While reading muze laga..uff gayi bhais paani mein..ab kuch nahi ho sakta bechari khushi kpo abhi arnav ke emotional wall ko firse face karna padega!!
But atta girl khushi...i love her so much!! Love is not a fairy tale..it makes us mature, it doesnt blind us but make us focus on such thngs which r best for our partner n those thngs help us to strenghthn our love!! Khushi truly believs it!! I just love her for her courage n patience wid which she is trying to handle d situation!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update A!!! Poor Khushi she was already walking a tight rope and still she gets blamed for no fault of hers!!!!

When will Arnav get over his insecurities and trust her completely??? It was such a blissful birthday and ended with a crash...

Only good thing that came put of this is Khushi is more determined to not to give up on Arnav hopefully he will see that and come around!!!!!

Cannot wait for the next update 😊
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic part
liked it
feeling terrible for khushi
plz continue soon
thanks for the mail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Poor Khushi - Arnav is being unbelievably difficult . Hard to imagine he did all the manipulation to get married to Khushi for them to end up here . Beautifully written - it really seemed that taking to Arnav was like banging your wall on the head . Nothing seems to get in - he has so much baggage !

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh finally the much awaited update
that was really an altogether different from the lovely and romantic update last time.. it was an important chapter or i should say a major point in arnavs and khushis life!
The way arnav was highly irritated and furious with the fact that on his bday his khushi was even near to that rishab who he hates the most!
But poor khushi had to bear the consequence of it...
i know whatever arnav do he will never hurt khushi physically.. so hariprakashs concern was sweet towards his babyji..but he should worry.
as per now khushi believes that confessing her feelings towards arnav vocally will help him overcome his insecurity and jealousy..
hope everything will be fine soon!

P.s: plz update the next chapter soon..

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