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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: chavvi16

ansika wow what a name
haiyye that was just perfect for sure
the way she calmly told her water broke
and how he was frozen for a while
but snapped outta it
that was just perfect
hmmm must say she was pretty calm when her contractions hit her
and arnie not being able to see her like that
gosh that was heart wrenching for him
but she pulled through
for their baby
awww a baby girl they had
finally the baby is here
what can be better
but of course ansika growing years to follow
and more moments
perfect picture they made with their little one in the end
all happy with their child granchild being born
cheers for pm




Awww
Thank god you picked a girl
Yes
Khushi's amazing
she just calmly said her water broke and endured 12 hours of labour pain
Mothers are just amazing
This is going to be fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Congratulations on the new thread Manreet...🥳
And what an alluring precious moment captures so eloquently by you.
Arnav, khushi and their precious little bundle of joy.
I am sure it must have been quite a beautiful sight. 😊

P.S: We can always have a little rogue sometime in the future. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
I'm sorry for being gone for so long! I will be catching up later tonight and will comment then :)
Also a big congrats for thread 2!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Firstly, I love each and every one of these banners! They are beautiful :)
Now onto the story...

Reading Khushi's journey towards motherhood all in one go was amazing. The small moments that become big moments are so wonderfully written! :)

I loved reading about Abhinav and Gauri as much as I loved reading about Arnav and Khushi, they are such adorable parents and in-laws. I sensed a collective journey here and it was a beautiful one. :D

All the small moments that make up a pregnancy dictated most of a chapter and I loved that! Each moment having it's own importance and beauty, especially as it was shared by this adorable couple! :)

You really live up to the title of this series... Moments of a Lifetime. And you've shown us some of the most precious moments. Each moment has been so detailed and magnificent that it reminds us in our ordinary lives that through all the pain, boring or whatever it is these moments that are worth it in the end :)

Amazing job! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awww...
its such a sweeet update dear...
loved the little happy family...
enjoyed every bit of it...
plxxx continue soon...
n
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Congratulations on the second thread!! 😃
This chapter was beautiful!! Everything about it was so nice and perfect!
The way you described Khushi through the delivery and Arnav's concern was so good! The way you write is so expressive!
The name and its meaning is so nice!
Awesome job Manreet!
Thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kondhili

Congratulations on the new thread Manreet...🥳

And what an alluring precious moment captures so eloquently by you.
Arnav, khushi and their precious little bundle of joy.
I am sure it must have been quite a beautiful sight. 😊

P.S: We can always have a little rogue sometime in the future. 😆

Haha, agreed!
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Welcum Ansika! Cute lil sunflower :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
So finally the baby is here... It's beautifully written... And the name is perfect...Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60


- Poem -


Arnav and his sunflower have their baby
As new parents they are proud as can be
Smiling to himself & making plans quietly
Imagining them together as happy family
Unprepared for Khushi's suffering to see
Supporting her emotionally & physically
Traumatised by her pain & ordeal was he
Helpless & wanting it to end desperately
Ansika decided to grace them eventually
A replica of her mom he hopes she will be


The grandparents beaming affectionately
Blessing and gifts bestowed generously
On their little guydiya, pyaari and choti si
An ecstatic Arnav holding on protectively
Kissing her on her head characteristically
Proud and grateful for this opportunity
At the miracle in their arms peacefully
Content, calm and now smiling lovingly
Completing the picture so very perfectly
Were the new born, Mumma and Daddy


Thank You so much Vandana Di, for this utterly perfect poem for baby Ansika, it is beautiful thank you :)
Edited by manreet_gill - 11 years ago

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