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Posted: 10 years ago

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Gift of love...

Truly a child is a gift of love, where 2 people become parents with their bundle of joy, blessed by God.

The feeling of Arnav and Rohan are understood too, as would be fathers always panic with the slightest of uncomfortable sound of the wife. ( men, I tell you are all the same. First hand experience hai. )

I truly sympathise with Ansika, poor girl she had 2 men to deal with, husband and father, who panicked and became hyper at every given second, only driving her insane. Thank god Khushi was there to keep her sane and calm all the time, letting Ansika rest as much as possible, handling the 2 men on her own.

The love between Arnav and Khushi grows with every given second. Even though they are going to become Grand-parents, they still have their cozy moments, not leaving a chance to tease the other nor has Khushi stopped her Shyness at small things said by Arnav. It's good to see, that even at this age and stage of their lives, Arnav and Khushi are still madly in love with each other.

Welcome Riya and Aashi into the world of the crazy family.

Manreet, this has just truly and completely revived what my situation was 11 years back. Husband and dad fussing over me. Mom trying to keep them away, sending them off to office for some peace in the house. Lol it was fun though. Well I had to deal with my brother too ! It was insane... Oh yah mine too was a c-section. Lol... Reading this was like reading my own experience/ story. The name part too... My daughter's name was kept by my mom.. Aashika.

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Nidhi Nevatia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

A father will always be a father, even though his daughter has grown up, married and has children. For them their daughters are still their small girl who did a lot of her ' first time ' in front of him. Well not all the first times *blush, grin, cheeky smile*.

Aashi and Riya obviously apples of Arnav's eyes, since they were his grand daughters, his little girl Ansika's daughters.

Loved Khushi and Rohan's conversation. Both looking at the father-daughter duo sitting on the swing lovingly. Memories.. Of the swing, loads of memories of the love of Arnav and Khushi.

It's amazing Manreet how you bring forth, pen down such emotions. Such that they touch the heart and they seem real. Amazing...

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Nidhi Nevatia

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi ! It's nearly a year now since you finished writing this series of OS. I had never written a single comment then. Today, after reading it fully twice, I'm commenting.

The whole thing is so sweet. Each and every segment has been penned down beautifully. Each OS describing a different story about the lives and stages of Arnav and Khushi... Though they all were connected.

Every movement, every action, every emotion, every reaction so subtlety and beautifully written. Nothing over the top. Serene, loving and calm, even during Excited Arnav and Khushi emotions. Or even during the hyper Arnav and Rohan moments regarding Ansika.

Obviously each OS has something or the other which can be commented upon, be it negative or positive, but in totality, a romantic, sweet, beautiful, caringly, aesthetically written series.

You know I can go on and on, making my comment look like a small OS, so don't want to right much but only say that this is by far one of the best series I have read and compelled me to read it again and again..

Thank you Manreet, for this beautiful series.. *proud and soft smile*