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Posted: 11 years ago
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so guys how is the story going 😊 do give feedback😊😊
Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4140603

My new ff plz give it a try ;) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey, girl the story is really going great yaar! I am very curious to know what happens next. Why is sanyukta acting like she doesn't know him, though he had said to her to do that in the past, but still, now that sanyu knows that randhir still loves her alot, that's why he left her for aarav. But lets see, it really very heart-breaking moment for randhir! I just can't wait for the next part! Please continue soon, thanks for pm'ing! Keep writing, lots of love! <3 jaldi se update dede please! *puppy face*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

I am on time 😃😃


Part 11

sanyu - Its sanyukta sir... mrs sanyukta suryawanshi...

I thought Hw can someone change so much.. i have 2 check... she is pretending or she has really changed...

I- ya maybe u r ri8... she was not that fat


sanyu's facial expression changed..she became red... her anger was clearly visible...


sanyu- excuse me !!! sir.. i think u r talking to a 6 month pregnant lady...u should have some shame..


I was relieved..she has not changed...she has just become a bit strict...


I- i am really srry mrs suryawanshi...but i speak what i feel.. u know im a bit muffat sanyu- (in anger) u have not changed randhir .. u r still the same jerk..

I was happyI- What did u just said.. RANDHIR.hw do u know my first name .. mrs suryawanshi..

She was speechless...I smirked...

Sanyu- so mr ...she was carefull this time.coz till now i didnt tell my name to her..

sanyu- wht is ur name sir..ran- some ppl know my first name.. but not second name.. I smirked.looking at her...

She was getting angry now... and i realized anger is not good for her.. as she is pregnant..

Randhir singh shekhawat.. i announced...

sanyu- so mr shekhawat.. hw can i help u And i started explaining my problem to her...which i was facing in my company...

I was shocked... no matter how many probs r going on.she is always sincere with her work...

And i concluded... so this is my problem...

sanyu- i see.. so u jst want a help or a complete merger..

i thought i jst needed help.. but if i completely merge with her company..then ill get more time to spend with her...

I-complete merger... that would be better..

She was doing her work and i was stealing glances at her..She looked damn pretty ..even now...I loved you sanyuI love u sanyui will always love u sanyu...

No matter.. u will get back to me or not... ...

She was doing her work she was not giving any attention to me... her old aashiq is sitting in front of her and she is interested in this bullshit office work...I badly wanted her to see me... ( randhir is randhir )... and at that time only one song was playing in my mind...

Dekha hai tujhko jabse

Haay main toh hil gaya

Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya

Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe

Arey jo bhi main kahun

tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat

PALAT...

Tera dhyan kidhar hai

Ye tera hero idhar hai

Tera dhyan kidhar hai

Ye tera hero idhar hai

Tera dhyaan kidhar hai

Yeh tera hero idhar hai

Toh Palat...

Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai ki

tera dhyan kidhar hai

Tera dhyan kidhar haiYe tera hero idhar hai

Ho kehta hai mujhse kyun zamaana.

.Arey haan, nahi aasaan hai tujhko paana

Aah.. tere nakhre uthaaun sanamMujhko teri kasam

Taang dun chand ko, teri kurti mein

Arey jo bhi main kahuntujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat

Arey PALAT...

and she looked at me...😳😳

my heart skipped a beat...

Office

var- yes doctor...vardhaan speaking

var- no doc this is not possible

doc- im srry mr vardhaan...but this is the truth

var- Doc ... plz dont tell anything abt this to sanyukta..

doc-but mr vardhaan it is very necessary for her to know.. it is her life also

var- plz doc plz... ill myself tell everything to her

doc- k.. but tell everything to her soon..

var- k doc ty...



She looked at him.. for the first time in these 2 years..she felt butterflies in her stomach for someone She again lost herself in those brown eyes...Rd smirked..


He waved his hand in front of her...mrs suryawanshi r u k.


She felt a pinch in her heart...She looked at the time 8:50...


sanyu- oh god.. we r working from so long...Her phn rang..( yes it was his deer hubby)

var- sanyu..dawai li tumney.

sanyu-oh shit main bhul gayi

..var- sanyu...wht is ths...tum kaise itni careless ho sakti ho..apney aap ko lekar ...baby ko lekar..( he literally scolded her)

sanyu- im sorry..main abhi karti hun...

rd could only hear..wht sanyu was speaking ...( guys till now he has no idea that who is her husband) ..

ran's pov

Oh god..yeh sanyu ka husband ussay daat raha hai...hw dare him.ki wo meri sanyu ko daatey...waise aisa expression to iska aisa tab hota tha..jab sanyu ko vardhaan sir se daat padti thi...vardhaan sir ke ilava aaj pehli baar dekh raha hun ki sanyu ne kisi ki daant suni hai...

She went inside and took her medicine... and called her hubby again...

sanyu- leli medicine maine...

var- good girl

sanyu- when r u coming back

var- it will take time..

.sanyu- k...come soon.

She came back..

sanyu- mr shekhawat ...i think nw its late

..ran- ya..we will continue tom it was great working with u mam.

He was abt to leave..but sanyu..she didnt wanted him to leave so early( dil ti bacha hai ji 😛😛)

sanyu - mr shekhawat ... dinner

ran- r u talking to me...he couldnt believe.what he jst heard..

sanyu- yes mr shekhawat...but if u...he cut her in between.

..ran- im ready.. no prob at all

she smiled at him...

both were happy... .


They both sat down to have dinner

Ran- mrs suryawanshi...if u dont mind..ek baat puchun

sanyu- ya .. u may

ran- wo.. can i be informal 1st..

sanyu hesitated 1st..but then she agreed..

she badly wanted to hear her name from his mouth..

she nodded

.ran- sanyu... tumney aarav se shaadi nahi ki... fir tumney kissey shaadi ki... i mean mughey shock hona chahiye tha..tumhey iss tarah dekhkar..btt main nahi hua..coz mughey pata chal gaya tha ki tumney shaadi karli hai..jab hum hospital ke bahar miley they...so hv u accepted him .as ur husband..

sanyu- randhir..see meri life mein bahut mushkil se stability aayi hai..plz dont ruin it...and yup i accepted him..and i love him

ran- sanyu mughey bata rahi ho ya khud ko..

sanyu was speechless...

sanyu- ran.. tab ek baar bolkey to dekhtey.

. ran- kya kehta sanyu... toh tumhari gadi abhi tak wahin ruki hai... u still love me (and he faked a laugh)

sanyu- tum abhi tak open hona nahi sikhey..

ths time he was speechless..

ran- wht do u mean.

sanyu- aarav tld everything to me

..ran- what!!!!

sanyu- its k.. randhir.. i dont need. any explanations...

ran- sanyu woh main...

sanyu- bas mr shekhawat.. infornal time khatam... from now onwards.. we r strangers nothing else..


ran- k... san.. he corrected himself..i mean mrs suryawanshi..

she smiled..and he left...



Then for sometime she was quiet..but was happy...

Var returned..she welcomed him smilingly

var- int very int...u look happy 2day

.sanyu- ummm ..want to tell u something

var- hmmm bolo bolo sanyu- wo merger..

var-haan .kya hua

sanyu- rd ki company ke saath hai.He was hell shocked..

var's pov

oh thats why she is happy 2day..chalo anything which makes her happy..will make me happy...

waise bhi acc to the doc..she should be happy..tabhi uski preg ki complications dur hongi..

with a heavy heart he said sanyu maine bola tha never mix ur personal and proff life ...

sanyu-hmm


k guys done plz tell me kaisa laga i know the story is getting boring but only few parts remaining..😃


For PMs plz buddy me😳

Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
it was awesome plz update the next part soon cant wait to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
what did doc say to vardhan about her pregnancy? And is vardhan going to find out about randhir and sanyukta's dil ka haal? Will he ever let sandhir fall in love with each other again, though they are already, but their ego doesn't let them express it! Can't wait for the next update! Continue soon! Thanks for pm'ing! Lots of love! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

PART 12

She smiled... she was happy reason was still unknown to her...

( bur we know the reason she was happy coz of randhir )

Days passed on.. her convo with vardhaan decreased day by day.. Her complications almost finished..doc said that she is PERFECTLY FINE now..and the baby is also fine now..

Whole day sandhir were togethere or on phn.. discussing abt the deal ...

R.d's company started growing... Not only coz of sanyu but now rd the rank no 1 was back... he got back his sanyu... ( he assumed) all ths while he never cared to know who is her husband.. and she never bothered to tell..


10 days later

She was now 7 mnths pregnant..

her phn rang.. it was rd's call sanyu- hello..yes mr shekhawat r.d- mrs suryawanshi..all probs are solved now..tysm.. sanyu- its k mr shekhawat... it was my work. ran- mrs suryawanshi..i have organised a party for my company's success..so plz come sanyu- im srry mr shekhawat i cant.. ran- why??? its jst a business party sanyu- ya u r ri8 ..but plz try to understand .. its a bit awkard ran-i got it... btt plz plz plz plz come.. or else i will postpone it.. sanyu- no no mr shekhawat plz ...i will try to come... ran- and plz bring ur husband also. sanyu froze.

on the other side R.d smirked... u r the same sanyu..tum bilkul change nahi hui ho..u r still the same...my sanyu.. and today i will meet the lucky man... who his he


venue

Randhir was eagerly waiting for sanyu and her better half...he wanted to meet him...

And there sanyu entered walking hand in hand ...and walking carefully with her ...

ran's pov


W*F...vardhaan sir...Hw could he...hw could she... i left her for aarav...and she married him...tears automatically started coming out of his eyes... he was hurt... he could have never imagined this...he was not able to tolerate to see sanyu with the person..who united sandhir...

He went towards the bar..and ordered a drink for himself

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drinks down ...nw he was full on drunk...tears were still coming...

var ws talking to someone..and sanyu's eyes were searching someone from the minute she entered..( we all know who)

ran got up and went outside...sanyu saw him and followed him...

Hw went and sat on a bench...Cold breeze was washing his face...sanyu came and sat next to him...


ran( full on talli) ran saw her...He touched his belly...

ran- hey baby..u up ??

sanyu-mr shekhawat...

ran-shut up sanyu ...jst shup up and listen to me

sanyu- randhir r u drunk????

ran- haan pee hui hai ... kya kar logi ...


bgAbhi mujhme kahin baaki thodi si hai zindagi

Jagi dhadkan nayi jaana zinda hun main toh abh

iKuch aisi lagan is lamhe main hai

Yeh lamha kahan tha meraa

Ab hai samne ise chu lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara

Khushiyaan choom lun ya ro lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara


ran- tunhey maine itna pyaar kiya..tum soch bhi nahi sakti... but main apney aur aarav ke beech kisi ko nahi laa sakta tha...isiliye maine tumhey chod diya...But even 2day i love u...aaj tak shaadi nahi ki maine...


she was numb...


ran- par tumbey kya kiya ..shaadi karli..ek baar nahi pucha ... socha ki maine aisa kyon kiya ... apni ego mein shaadi karli..

aur wo.bhi vardhaan sir se... apna guru mentor manti thi na unhey to fir...

fir tum mughey hospital ke bahar mili... dekha maine tumney shaadi karli..

i was happy... ki atleast u moved on..


Abhi mujhme kahin baaki thodi si hai zindagi

Hoo dhoop mein jalte huey tan ko

Chaaya ped ki mil gayi

Roote bacche ki hasin jaise

Phooslane se phir khil gayi

Kuch aisa hi ab mehsoos dil ko ho raha hai

Barson ke purane zakhm pe marham laga sa hai

Kuch aisa rehem is lamhe mein hai

Yeh lamha kahan tha meraa

Ab hai samne ise chu lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara

Khushiyaan choom lun ya ro lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara


sanyu was also in tears now...


ran- kyon.why...aisa kyon kiya ...bolo...paaglo ki tarah ... i missed u ..loved u...duniya se koi matlab nahi tha mughey...sirf kaam kaam aur kaam..

.

Dor se tooti ptang jaisi

Thi yeh zindagaani meri

Aaj hoon kal ho mera na ho

Har din thi kahaani meriIk bandhan naya piche se ab mujhko bulaye

Aanewale kal ki kyoun fikar mujhko sataaye

Ik aisi chubhan is lamhe mein hai


ran - aaj tun merey saamney ho...but still i cant show any right on u...yeh baby ka sapna maine dekha tha tumharey saath...

Crying loudly now...


Yeh lamha kahan tha meraa

Ab hai samne ise chu lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara

Khushiyaan choom lun ya ro lun zara

Mar jaaun ya jee lun zara



PRECAP -

sanyu- randhir!!!!

ran-haan sanyu bolo...

sanyu - plz mughey call mat kara karo..nahi to tumhara number block karwana padega..



finally done😳

so sorry for a short and late update ..

theses days im not able 2 write coz of the painfull track of sadda haq😭😭


and also my exams have started
so the next update will be after few days😃😃


and the precap

there is a twist😳😳


till then dont forget me and my story😲


for pms plz buddy me😊😊


DARSHANA 23 i read ur comment yesterday and only coz of that i wrote ths part today😆😆

thanks 2 u. i realized that many of u actually remember my story..


till then toodles😳


Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
wat do u mean by remember ur story... i love it
n update chotu tha bt it was nice
i want next part soon
n it was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
OMG! A new twist in the next update! Can't wait! This story is getting more intense, all thanks to your twists and turns! Thanks a tonne for updating and pm'ing! Lots of love, keep writing! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Hey read all part in one go

The story is awsme

Poor sandhir

Excited for next new twist is on its way

Update soon wtng

Pm me when u update next


Alwz keep smiling dear 😊

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