I want you back - a sandhir ff part 14 updated page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue

sanyukta is married nw...she nw works in her husband's company..though she had been university topper. she is a very down to earth person...she is a great business women and a perfect homemaker
...she loves her husband or she pretends 2 love him...

her husband loves her very much...she is his wife in every aspect( u know wht i mean)but still he finds some emptiness in his life...sm emptiness in his wife..
.and he wants his sanyukta back to whom he had loved when she was in collage...
still they r living together in a house...happily or they jst pretend 2 be happy...

Guys plz tell ki continue karun ya nahi...tomatoes .eggs all r welcomed..😊😛😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want you back
Part 1

Sanyu was sitting on her study table scribbling smthng. .it was her passion after machines and dance she loved penning her thoughts down.. .these thoughts were inspired by her life...whatever she feels she writes... She was compleatly engrossed in her thoughts ...suddenly someone hugged her from behind...yes it was her husband...
( s.h- sanyu husband)
s.h- baby wht r u doing.. .
s- aap aa gaye ill ...mughey pata hi nahi chala...ill get some water for u...

and she went to get water.she forgot to hide her diary..

.s.h who was so curious 2 read her diary from so many days ...quickly took her diary and started reading it..

.1st page

Thoughts inspired from my life

Sanyukta aggarwal


2nd page


"I Lost My Heart From
The Day U Come Into My Life, ,
U hold Me Tight in My Thoughts
all the Day &Night..!
I Wish That all My Life..
.I live With U "..


He was so happy...his happiness had no boundations...

suddenly sanyu came in and gave him water. ..she started untying his tie...and he pulled her closer 2 him...his hands were on her waist...she was blushing..( or was pretending) he left her and said ill jst come and he went 2 the washroom... after sometime he came out with wet hair. ..ill dry it u must be tired...come sit...and she srarted drying his hair...he was having a perfect view of his bellly ...he jst wanted 2 grab her kiss her make out with her but he controlled himself... ill get ur tea she said and left..

.he quickly got up and took her diary

Page 3

When You Love . ..You Get Hurt..!
When you Get Hurt.. .You Try To hate!!
When You Hate.. ... You Try To Forget!!
When You Try to Forget... U Start missing..!
When You Start Missing... YouFall inLove again

.. Nw he had tears in his eyes with heavy heart he turned the page

page 4

. You can't force love
, I realized. It's thereor it isn't.
If it's not there,
you've got to be able to admit it
If it is there, you've
got to do whatever it takes to protect the.
ones you love

. He was nw crying and sanyu entered with tea ..

.she could make out something has happened...
do u still love him he enquired no response

Im asking u smthng do u still love him
no response

He shouted
im asking u smthng
no response

THAP!!!!!yes he slapped her.. .

still no response.. .she jst went out.. 😭😭
Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice... continue n pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
I want you back

Part 2


: Oh shit wht hv i done...i knew sanyu loved him...yeh maine kaise kiya...no no i have 2 apolojise..

.He went out from the room and saw sanyu laying the table... she looked at him and ignored...she served him his dinner... and sat down 2 have her own... he came in front of her and started doing situps (uthak baithak)
im srry baby..
.its all my mistake i jst become jealous whenever u think abt him... im srry plz forgive me.

.. no response.. .
srry na baby i promise future main aisa kabhi nahi hoga

no response

THAP!!!!!

( sanyu slapped him)

Ab mughey kyon mara...he asked

Aapne mughey marra maine aapko mara hissab barabar... and she giggled...

he was jst mesmerised by seeing his beauty...

Nw u r gone mrs...(suspence)

He caught her and kissed her passionately with all his force and she too responded...

after a while he left her smilingly

She was feeling happy and shy( or was pretending)

Ab khanna khaye im feeling very hungry he said

hmmm she also started eating Srry baby...im really srry he said

its k ...she replied

He was feeling very guilty... hv u forgiven me he asked

hmmm obviously she smiled..

.to plz mughey tum khanna khilao naa...

no aap khud nahi kha saktey ho r u a kid she replied..

.plz he made a puppy face and waise bhi aadat dal lo. ..

wht do u mean ?????

nthng he replied..

.k fi9 she stood up and sat on his lap ...he was eating with her hands...and she was eating with his hands... they finished their food and she wiped his mouth..

.baby kisi ki diary padna galat baat...

but agar pado to fir puri pado...so that koi misunderstandings naa ho...

they both smiled

:Sanyukta's husband's pov

Hw cud i...i knoe she loves him...and i cant pressurize her 2 love me...i knoe hw they both completed each other.. .hw they helped each other i was the only one who united them...so why nw im feeling jealous possesive. ..she has expected me as her husband... she is my wife in every way...she respects me she is happy with me or she is pretending..


.*flashback*

Character sketch.. .

Randhir singh shekhawat - rank 1...galz just drool over him...he is hot ...btta little rude...( he has no probs with her mother in my ff)

Aarav shekhawat - his cousin rank 1.5 ...same killer looks...very sweet unlike randhir ( he lost his parents btt was equally loved by ran'smom)

Both the shekhawat bros share a great bond 2gether ..

.Vidushi and kaustaki are frnz from school..
.so randhir aarav vidushiand kaustaki r school frnz.they r bst frnz...

Sanyukta aggarwal - same as the show( in my ff her family supports her studies)

She is a dancer by proff and loves writing her thoughts.

.Vardhaan - same as the show. .

.( all characters to be introduced as the story progresses)

mechanical lab

San - ran tumhari prob kya hai...
ran - tum ho meri prob
San - oh really see whoz speaking
ran - jst shut up k..
.san - no u 1st listen 2 me ..

. her cell beeped she smiled looking at her phn and started replying to the msg..

.ran got irritated coz she didnt finished and started typing on her phn.. .

Oh farzi !!!! baat to purikaro

acha jao maaf kiya she replied and started smiling and typing...

W*F she is ignoring me the RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT bloody hell hey u wht do u mean by jao maaf kiya galti tumhari thi farzi kahin ki... he yelled at her...

aarav vids and kaus were slapping their foreheads in disgust...oh god yeh fir shuru ho gaye..

.Sanyu who was smiling and typing ...became serious..

.ab to world war 3 pakka...she was abt 2 say smthng but again her phn beeped ... .she started smiling and said 2 randhir - k fi9 im srry ..

.all of them were shocked espeacially mr mcp...isney ladai nahi ki...aisa kaise ho sakta hai...Aise kissey baat kar rahithi...jo usney mughey ignore kiya...patato karna padega.. .Randhir and Aarav were the most popular guys of the collage ...so no one dared 2 rag them...and ntt even vids and kaus coz they were the gang members of Ran's gang.. .

But sanyukta she was caught by some of the senior students...they tld her to jump from the window whch was on 1st floor ..

.aarav and kaustaki wr warning them to stp all ths nonsence but they were ntt in a mood 2 listen.. .
Sanyu in her mind ab tu kyakaregi sanyu ya to haddiya tutegi ya besti hogi.. .

Aarav its k...ill jump she said
sanyu r u mad no way...tu aisa kuch nahi karegi aarav said.

.meri 1 shart hai kudney se pehley ...

haan bolo snr students replied in unison...No one will q me ki main kyon aur kaise kudi...k??

hmmm k k .. .

She climbed the window and

THUD!!!
!She jumped inside the classroom😆😆 ...

W*F the snr students said... woh kya hai naa u never said that i hv to jump outside the window ...and acc to my condition no one can ask me ...anything..they all left in disgust...

aarav was also smiling... he has started falling 4her smwhere in the corner of his heart...



😊😊



Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res/unres
Me first!

I'm guessing aarav is her husband & she loves randhir?!
Sanyu accepted her husband, but not love!
Its confusing

Pls Continue soon, dear!
Edited by ..Neha..PM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update... continue n thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
I want you back
part 3

----------she entered their room she was wearing a noodle strap nighty...which was coming above her knees...He kept looking at her...its ntt like she is wearing ths for the1st time btt the feeling was different ...His legs automatically reached her...he grabbed her from the back...and kissed her shoulder...

she was smiling from outside and from inside she was crying...he turned her towards himself he kissed her chin and hugged him tightly breaking her bones...

sanyu - easy easy...im ntt running from here...he picked her up and lay her on the bed...she wanted 2 stop him but her mother's words keep ringing in her mind

" beta kisi aur ki galti ka gussa kisi aur par mat nikalna"everytime this happened...he proceeded towards her lips and he kissed passionately ..

.( aagey to pata hi hai sabko kya hota hai... im ntt describing 😛 😛)

nxt morning- she was sleeping peacefully in his arms...he woke up 1st and made her sleep properly...he went outside the room and called someone..

s.h - hello !! mr bhavesh ( his companies ceo)
bha- yess sir
.s.h - call mrs sanyukta and tell her that she has 2 go to conduct placement interviews in fite and cite...and plz dont tell her that i told u to do all ths...

bha- yes sir..he went inside his room he saw her wife sleeping ...he kissed her forehead and went to the washroom..when he came out he saw sanyu is sitting with her palm on her head...and is tensed.

.s.h - yo baby kya hus
sanyu - wo mr bhavesh called...he said that i hv 2 go for the placement interviews.

..s.h - so u shud go sanyu- no plz i cant ...plz aap chaley jaao.

.s.h- no i cant ... i hv some imp clients coming 2day and sanyu tumney prom kiya tha naa that u will keep ur personal and prof life separate...then wht is bothering u now...

sanyu - i ..i...i...

s.h - u hv 2 go...and thats final..nw plz get ready we hv 2 leave early 2days.

im srry sanyu ...btt i had 2 do ths coz i want u back...



FITE



Sanyukta entered the collage... she was just rejoiced by living her memories...her fights with randhir... hw aarav and sanyu used to make fun of him...hw randhir was so possesive abt her sanyu...hw he loved her..how she loved him... hw aarav supported the couple... hw aarav managed to convince both the sets of the parents to agree to their marriage...hw aarav bid them goodbye and left forever and the list went on...

she was jst walking absent mindely...when she was hit by a stone and was abt to fall...bttt a strong hold of hands caught her by the waist...she was somewhat familiar with this hold...

person - sanyukta !!!!!! oh my god...kaisi ho tum

sanyu - array tum yahan... oh god i missed u so much... and they hugged each other..

.person - university topper..itni badi co. handle karti hai...par abhi tak girna nahi choda and he laughed.

sanyu - aarav..where were u...ahanak kaha chala gaya tha...kahan tha tu itney saal


aarav - woh nthng cha lplacement interviews ka time ho gaya hai...lets go

sanyu - hmmm.btt meet me after the interviews get over...

aarav - k

*flashback*

ill confess my love 2 u sanyu today aarav
thought and told vidushi abt his love towards sanyu.he goes and finds sanyu finding him.

.sanyu - aarav kahan par tha tu..tughey pata hai main subah se tughey dhund rahi thi...

aarav - bata to sahi kya hua hais

anyu - aarav im in love

aarav - oh really who is that lucky guy... he was trying hard to hold his
blush.
sanyu - tu hasega to nahi na

aarav - ab bol bhi

sanyu - tera bhai...my mcp randhir singh shekhawat

aarav was shocked to hear ths he never thought that sanyu can really love randhir...he felt as if god is in mood today to curse him and his life...

sanyu - aarav im so happy and she hugged him tightly..

.*flashback end*


after the interview they both were sitting in the coffee house

aarav - so randhir kaisa hai sanyu was left speechless...tum abhi bhi ladtey ho ya...she was lost in the thoughts

aarav - mrs shekawat kahan kho gayi...
sanyu - woh kahin nahi...actually i need to hurry...i forgot meri meeting hai..and aarav nxt time ham miley to call me sanyukta and ntt adding other names to my name without any reason...aarav was shocked to hear ths..

.aarav - sanyu terey aur randhir ke beech sab thik to hai naa..

sanyu - realized wht she said... haan merey aur merey husband ke beech sab thik hai...actually yaar im a succesfull business women...i have my own identity and i dont need any name tag my husband totally supports it..

.aarav - oh !!!!

but sanyu u have changed i mean u were never like ths

sanyu - aarav im in a hurry hv 2 leave... will call u...and will meet again...hope ths time u will confess ur feelings she said and left


😊
Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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nice update...so sandhir r married... thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want you back
part 4

Hope this time u will confess ur feelings she said and left...

Sanyukta... sanyukta he was shouting...btt she kept on running and soon she was out of his sight..

she kept running and finally stopped near a lake where randhir proposed sanyu..

*flashback*

ran sitting on his knees

ran - sanyukta aggarwal i randhir singh shekhawat want to confess that i...i love...he was stammering

.sanyu - ab bol bhi do

ran - i love ur greasy hands lets go

sanyu caught him agar aaj nahi bola to paka bhaag jaungi...
ran - i love u...sanyukta will u marry me

..sanyu - sidha marriage gf bana kar try nahi karna pehley.

..ran - nahi...i trust u my love

sanyu - sochlo kahin main bhaag na jaun

ran - agar bhaagi to tumhey pakad kar le aaunga aur wahi shaadi kar lunga...

sanyu - aur agar tum gaye to main apna murder kar lungi

he kept his finger on her lips aaj ke baad yeh baat fir mat bolna...and hugged her tightly..


*flashback ends*

sanyu in tears kaash uss din tum mughey gf bana kar check kar letey to aaj hamari zindagi achi hoti...u have changed randhir...u have changed she shouted...

8 :00 pm

s.h- driver madam kaha hai

driver- sir pata nahi wo to abhi colg se bahar hi nahi aayi

s.h - kya.????? acha thik hai.

.He was so tensed now...shit ussay fite bhej kar maine galti to nahi kardi...btt sanyu i knoe tum kahan ho...

he quickly drived towards the lake and saw her sitting pale lifeless...

s.h - sanyukta no response
s.h sanyukta r u k???? he said shaking her

kyon bheja mugheyyahan...kya mil gaya yeh karke bolo...sanyu said

sanyu listen to me see i love u..she cut him in between btt i dont love u...and will never do..aapsey yeh shaadi sirf apney papa ke liye ki hai...jo merey saath hua bhooli nahi hoon main...

sanyu plz suno to sahi hesaid

kya sunun kiss baat ki explanation jo saza mughey mili bina kisi galti ki...im srry kab tak uss baat kolekar baithi rahogi...zindagi bhar... i willnever love u...never and she fainted

he quickly took her 2 the hospital..the doc examined her..

.doc - congratulations ur wife is pregnant

s.h - really...he was so happy...ty doc tysm

doc- pleasure is all mine.btt plz take careof her she should ntt take any stress..

.s.h - sure doc Sanyukta was lying on her hospital bed...thinking smthng

*flashback*

vardhaan was really very worried abt the increasing differences b/w his best players randhir and sanyukta..so he made a plan and send them together to a place to buy dream team stuff...with the help of aarav and others he send them...during their journey they came very close 2 each other...( im ntt elaborating)

in the corner of their hearts they had already fallen for each other..they were staying in a village where one of the aunties said that ki iss mandir mein kal ke din jo mannat mango wo sach ho jaati hai...they both went their..

.sanyu's povi

m a mechanical engineer student.mughey yeh sab baatey nahi maani chahiye ... pata nahi uss din aisa kya special tha aisa kuch reality mein hota bhi hai ke nahi lekin maine apni mannat mangi...aur wo bhi sirf ek word RANDHIR merey paas sab kuch tha...bas randhir chahiye tha...

*flashback ends*

A long tear escaped her eye...kyon randhir kyon she whispered 2 herself...her husband enters so mrs SURYAWANSHI whats up !!!!!

sanyu - im srry gussay mein aapko bahut kuch bol diya

..vardhaan- koi baat nahi 2 saal laga diye apney andar ki baat bolney mein ...well congratulations hum parents baney waley hai...
sanyu - really"!!! she had tears if happiness in her eyes...they both hugged tightly...i love u sanyu she was speechless

suddenly she felt uncomfortable and he understood ill jst come he said and left..


.*flashback*

randhir- sanyukta...5 din baad hamari shaadi hai.
..sanyu - hmmnn to
ran - to hamarey kids hongey
sanyu - ran abhi se kids..
.ran - sht up aur meri baat suno...hamari na ladki hogi rank no 1 tumhari tarah nahi...
sanyu- ek baar aur yeh bola na bhaag jaungi main shadi ke mandap par se
ran - oh drama queen agar uss din bhagney ki koshish bhi ki na...im telling u...haad pakad kar mandap par launga...

*flashback ends*

randhir ths kid will always be a living memory of u..

.vardhaan was listning to all ths...oh god yeh maine kya kar diya..sanyu ko fite kyon bheja...shitt btt now i hv realized jaise tum dono ko 1 maine tab kiya tha waise hi aaj bhi karunga...



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Edited by -babydoll- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Vardhaan sanyukta ki husband?how come!:-o 😕

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