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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: raddhi

Kab kab kab
One more song
Intazaar ho gai, Teri stry ki
Aai na kuchh khabar, Teri PM ki
Ye hamen hai yaqeen, stry end nahin
Phir vajah kya hui, intazaar ki,

Wah wah I am making songs for u
I am talented thank u chalo update de

wah wah

one from me 😆

ayega aayega update aayegaaa

thoda kar intezar

PM bhi aayega 🤣



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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: -SunShine


wah wah

one from me😆

ayega aayega update aayegaaa

thoda kar intezar

PM bhi aayega 🤣





Kab kab Bol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

in 10 minutes

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: lechu10

CONGRATULATION FOR UR NEW THREAD...😊

thank you dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

CHAPTER EIGHT

Taani was waiting for rey in hall to come back from office he is late today...she is feeling scared in his absense


It is past 11.00 in night still he didnt return...usually he come back till 8 pm from office

" where he is..why didnt he come back yet ?? Krishna ji pls rey theek ho i dont want to lose him like dadi " taani thought..a tear drop fell from her eyes

Rey entered in house seeing him taani ran to him and hug him tightly like her life depend on that hug...rey was taken back by her sudden hug but hug her back

" where were you..i was so worried..i thought i lost you " taani said while silently sobbing

" hey kitten stop crying you know na i dont like tears in your eyes and am here i was caught up in some meeting thats why i couldnt come earlier now am here and i am always with you " rey said calming her down..he understand that she felt scared when he was not around her

" promise you will never leave me " taani aske in her cute innocent tone

" i promise..i ll not leave you till my last breath " his voice was intense...his voice shows his every emotion...his love , care , his junoon to be with her , his obsession for her

Hearing his words taani hug him tightly pressing her body against his...on the other sode rey was having hard time to control himself...her soft n sweet fregrence was driving him crazy...he pressed her more onto him feeling her softness

" hmm " taani moaned when she felt his hand inside her top caressing her milky skin...rey scoop her in arm when he couldnt control himself and start moving toward his room

Taani lool at him innocently

" you are not hungry ?? ...you ll not eat you dinner ?? " she asked him still in his arms

" did you eat your food " he asked her to which taani nodded " and about me am planning to eat something delecious " he completed his sentence in husky tone

" what ? " she questioned him
" you..i want to eat you kitten tonite " he said..he was gazing at her with desire hooded eyes...they reach their room...rey put her down and lock the door behind him

Rey pull her close to him...taani look at him..his mere look sending currents through her body...she clutched his shirt tightly in her tiny fist

Rey slid his one hand in her top feeling every bit of her soft skin while his other hand open opened his shirt and threw it away...taani look at his perfect tone body for a moment she didnt able to remove her gaze from his well toned abs...rey was liking the way HIS kitten was checking him out with her innocent eyes

He was so lost in her that he didnt knew when he open the zip of her top..rey start giving her open mouth kissing on her shoulder...taani was lost in another world world...the feel of his touch always made her lose her senses

He again took her in his arms and laid her on bed...after getting rid of his pants he too joined her..slowly slowly he removed every cloth from their bodies...he was so lost in her that he himself dont know when he lost his self control

Taani was cutching him tightly in her embrace...his kisses increase...he was wildy kissing her body..he place wet kisses from her shoulder till..occassionaly giving her love bites...his hands were roaming on her thighs seductevely...rey took her lips in an aggressive kiss..he was kissing her passionately..he nibbled her lower lip occassionally biting her lips...first taani was enjoying his touch but when his touch became rough and she feel pain because of his biting...she cried between the kiss

With that rey comes into his sense and see what he had done...rey look at their nude bodies instantly covered them with blanket then cup her face between his palms

" what happen kitten...am sorry i know i should control " rey said in worried tone

" its paining " she said in her low voice still clutching his shoulder tightly

" where sweetheart " rey asked gently
" here " she pointed toward her shoulder...rey look at where she was pointing...his eyes widen...his bite marks were there telling him about his wildness and passion

" am sorry " he said...rey move close to her and digg his face in crook of her neck

Rey placed his lips on bite and lick that with his tounge area to sooth her pain...her hold on him got tighter she closed her eyes

He embrace her securely in his arms

" is it still paining ? " he ask..he cursed himself for loosing control

" nahi " she said innocently...rey smiled at her and ask her to sleep now

Rey was caressing her hhairs lovingly soon taani fall asleep

" what happen to me..why i lost my control i knew that she will not able to handle my passion if i want her to be mine for life time i have to control my desires for sometime " he mently scold himself but he cant deny the fact that only she can make him forgot everything around her

Rey look at her naked body in his arms under the blanket...her body curves were making him go crazy

He move his hand on her curves feeling her soft skin then he notice her lips they were bit swallon because of his aggressive assualt on them

Rey placed her lips on her and give her soft kiss

~~

" Now only you can do something kriya...i need my sister in this bad time of my life " shivam tries to covince kriya to help him

" no shivam if Rey come to know that am helping you...he will destroy my career also i cant take risk with my career by helping you " kriya clearly denied him to help him she knows that rey never leaves his enemy in peace..rey can do anything to destroy the destroy the person who is against him

" nothing will happen kriya...you just have to go there and take infomation about that girl and wese bhi every sunday you friends go out with rey " shivam said to her...at last kriya agreed to try once

" okay let me ask swayum when we are going tommorrow " saying this she dialed swayums number after three four ring swayum pick up the call

" he swayum i want to aks when and where we are gping tommorrow ? " she asked him

" we are going at xyz club tommorrow 8 pm but rey is not coming he said he is busy so except him all our friends group is going " swayum explain her in sleepy tone...he wanted to snap at her for calling him this late in night just to know this but he remained his calm

" okay good night " she said disappointedly...seeing her dissappointed face shivam questioned her

" what happen ?? " shivam ask

" rey is not coming with us he is busy..we cant do anything now " kriya told him sadly

Shivam was thinking deeply..he cant lose he will take his revange by hook or crook..another plan comes in his evil mind

" no this is not an end of my plan...do one thing go at his place...make an excuse and try to find something there am sure you will surely get something which can help us " shivam told her about their next move...kriya also agree for this...after discussing for while they left for their respectiv room and slept

~~

- IN MORNING -

" Kitten wake up its already 8 in morning now come on get up " rey was trying his level best to wake her up but she is not listening him

" please five minutes more " she said while yawing

" only MY kitten can do this denying me The Reyaansh Singhania " rey thought smilingly

" no !!! Wake up or else i ll pick you up and throw you in bath tub " rey said pulling the blanket from her..thank god he already made her wear her dress in early morning when he woke up or else he would surely ended up in doing something *ahem ahem* with her

" you cant do this you are my rey " she said in sleepy cute tone again pull the quilt on herself

Rey sighed on her stubborness and scoop her in his arms

Taani gasp in shock and open her eyes

" you didnt listen to your rey now see what am going to do " rey said grinning naughtly..he walk toward washroom

" no no !! rey mujhe thandi lag jayegi please see now i am awake " taani said cutely making most innocent face

" nope " rey answered her as he entered in washroom and close the door behind him with his leg

PRECAP : ☺️ ☺️ And Someone's Entry


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I know cliff hanger 😆 thoda wait karo 😳 aage jaanne ke liye 🤣

guys please leave your feedback not just in one / two word but little big...give your views what you feel about story/update not just on this story but on my others too

with great difficulty am updating now days firstly my exams then my bad health but in all this your comments encourage me to wrtie

and thank you so much for your support till now

Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for comment
Wlcom Wlcom after long time
Ohk prt was sexy plus interesting
Aww taani was waiting for rey she is
Scared aww finally rey came n she hug him
Tight haaye luv tht hug prt 😳 ohh la la taani
Was checking out rey body haaye tht was hot mera
Rey shirtless uff kya hotness hai 😳 u shld hav put pic
Rey loss his control n luv tht kiss rey is getting
Passinated day by day 😳 I am luving it taani
Got hurt n thank god rey stop in bet only shivam
N kriya this ppl can never be away from my taarey 😡
Hate thm wht thr r upto hmm ohh rey is not going with
Gang I know he is busy with taani 😳 hehe taani was not
listening to rey aww n rey pick up taani n wht he is planing to do 😳
Let him do waiting for nxt prt n per-cape is interesting excited for
Taarey prt but who is coming hope tht person is gud for taarey
Thanks for PM swty aur jaldi jaldi update deya kar 😊
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
superb..
taani is falling for rey deeply..
rey lost his control..
it was hot...
kriya and shivam are beep beep beep..
rey is so naughty with taani..
and taani is so cute..
Edited by tamanna-azaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finaly update karne k liye thank... Love it yr d ways reus love goes wild 4 taani Bt he stop as he khnw she can't handle his passon...
love d update and plzz ab baki story nhi update kardo plxzx yr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm update
Loved it
It was jst so cute and taareylicious
Shivam is so going to regret this
Precap looks interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme update... taani was so tensed when rey didn't return... rey lost his control... luv their romance... what's shivam plan ...
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update soon...
waiting for ur updates...
pls update dark ff jaldi... cnt wait MRE... plsss
update soon

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