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Posted: 11 years ago

thankie😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima209

awsme yar... i loved it yar... jaldhi post na nxt part pls... awsme reacp yaa sanyu is pleasing randhir ... hahahhahah

S - randhir...

R - hmm...

S- mein tumse kuch kehna chahti hun. kahon?

R - hmm...

S - Voh main kehna chahti thi ki...


oh lord i'm so bad.😆
can't even do one work of posting on time properly😆
by the way thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Res-ing!

Will unres soon!!

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Girl this was one of my best reads in the forum so far!!
Read all parts in one go and regretted not reading & commenting earlier!!!
I want to mention that dialog of vardhan sir in chap 6 where he asked randhir to not be selfish and think abt sanyu also...that dialog was super awesome!!!
Their court marriage scene was brilliantly portrayed!
And chapter 8 was my fav! Loved the entire thing!!!
Eagerly waiting to know abt sanyu-aditya!!
U r a brilliant writer & I'm so thankful u told me abt this story!!!
*kudos*
Love u,
Anu Di!!
PS: the dedication was so sweet of u...and chapter 8 also became my fav part!!! Update soon plz!


this coming from you who is a fabulous writer herself means very much to me😳
though i know that i'm not even half as good writer as you are
your comment has surely given me the boost i needed to write the next part (too lazy i am)😆
well sanyu - aditya story would unfold soon

thanks
love
soumya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

I just read the whole story in one go

Totally loved it and the way you describe everything is perfect
Please update asap and PM me please


thanks girl
would update by tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

great story... loved it...continue n pm me...


thanks
will sure send you a pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

Awesome update dear...

I loved it soo much...
this is my fav chapter of this story...
nd the new twist..!!!
plz plz update soon... will be waiting.


hey, honestly i was waiting for you 😃
and here you are
well i thought the chapter was a piece of shit.
i am never able to do justice to emotions 😕

but still thanks for bearing with it😆

and the twist i don't know how i'm going to get forward on it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suumi

first of all im nw imagining shaadi in college 😆 😆 🤣 nyc idea bt luvd it...
bt hei aaditya kon aa gaya bichme cont soon


even i thought the idea was too far stretched 🤣 but everything is unique when it comes to
sandhir😉

aaditya must be someone only sanyu knows (i'm not joking, even i don't know his role till now)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz update the next part

Can you PM me ?
Gowri:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: candyfreak

Plz update the next part

Can you PM me ?
Gowri:-)


are you gowri of 'sandhir loves fanfictions"?
for pm send me buddy request
i'm going to update right now in about 5 mis

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Posted: 11 years ago

A/N - so finally posted the 9th part.

this is dedicated to don girls and khyati178.

note that the part in italics is pov.

blue of randhir and green of sanyukta


ps - aaditya is the name of my first crush😳



PART - 9

listen you farzi... in this house I expect that you will not cross my way. now go and find yourself a room.

"whatever" replied sanyukta before heading upstairs.

she was admiring the house when she saw a room, it was big and was decorated with flowers and candles. the room's window gave the pool view. the sweet fragrance and whole ambience was quite seductive.

suddenly Randhir who was selecting a room for himself too reached there.

both were getting uneasy due to their surrounding.

Randhir gained his calm and said this is my room, go find yourself another. saying this he started removing all the flowers from the bed. but sanyukta had already decided "I came here first Randhir and so i'll take this room Ab hato" saying so she pushed him out of the room. but before she could close the door he again entered. this time with a mischievous smirk and twinkling eyes.

this was the only thing that sanyukta was afraid of Randhir. it meant trouble. he came near her. with his every forward step she took a backward step and then crash. she collided with the wall. now she can't go backward any further but he was still inching closer. he came so near that she got hell uncomfortable. he put both his hands on the wall blocking her. her heartbeat was rising with every second. he slowly brought his mouth near her cheeks and whispered in her ears " sanyukta, this is my room, NOW GET TE HELL OUT OF HERE"

and then moved back smirking and enjoying her condition. she was confused at what just happened.

why was i so effected when he came near me, why i lost my senses, why my heart beat raised to that extinct and why the hell is he smirking like that.

afraid that he might again do something like this she ran out of the room and then took the room just next to it.

both slept in their respective rooms.

While in US

The MD and sole owner of A 'N' S automobiles was holding a pic of himself and sanyukta. I'm sorry sanyu, I left you. I left all of you alone but I had no choice.

a lone tear escaped his eyes which he quickly wiped and said but don't worry. I'm coming soon. I missed you. I remember how much you cried when I came to US to fulfil my dreams leaving everything behind.

His secretary came and told him he has a flight to Delhi in 2 hours. Aditya, as quickly as he could left for airport.

i'm coming sanyu. i'm coming

morning at sandhir palace

Randhir woke up at around 6 in the morning. tired with the last night's drama, he was in no mood to wake up but he had to reach college on time. afterall the whole drama took place so that they can attend their college.

with half opened eyes he stood up but as soon he took one step forward his legs collided with something and he fell down. the sudden unexpected fall made him to open his eyes, sleep just vanished.

well he didn't hit the ground instead he fell on "the thing".

but wait it was not a thing, it was sanyukta sleeping on the floor of his room. she too woke up at the instant he fell on her.

Both were again lost in each other's eyes. they lost track of time like they were looking in each others eyes as if they were drawn in it.

S - Randhir...

R ( who was completely lost in her eyes) - hmm...

S- mein tumse kuch kehna chahti hun. kahon?

R - hmm...

S - Voh main kehna chahti thi ki... HATO MERE UPAR SE

R - (coming back to his senses) what the hell sanyukta? tum yahan kya kar rahi ho. Yeh mera room hai. tum apne room ke kyun nahi so rahi thi.

S - Voh Randhir... actually...

mujhe andhere se Dar lagta hai... raat ko dar lag raha tha toh socha yahan aa jati hun... but tum so juke the so mein neeche so gai...

Randhir could not help but smile at her innocence

R - aise toh badi jhansi ki rani bani ghumti ho Aur raat ko akele so tak nahi sakti.

waise neeche sone ki kya jarurat thi Tum bhi bed par so jati. waise bhi hum husband wife hai he said with a smirk and left for the washroom.

she was hell irritated with Randhir and just prayed to god ki jaldi se Yeh 4 years nikal jaye. najane Randhir mujhe in 4 salon mein kitna torture karega thinking so she too left to her room to fresh up and leave for her college.

both of them got ready and came down.

seeing sanyukta wear her usual kurti this time pink and salwar he said kamsekam shadi ke bad toh ladkiyon ki tarah dress up ho jati.

she in response just showed him her tongue.

"so childish" he thought.

when they came downstairs Randhir said sanyukta waise tumne breakfast mein kya banaya hai. I mean kuch edible hai na.

S - Maine? mein breakfast kyun banao?

R - tum breakfast banaogi because

1) Ghar mein Koi servant nahi hai.

2) Tum ek ladki ho.

3) Tum unfortunately meri wife ho, so Yeh tumhari duty hai

S - oh just shut up you mcp. agar tumhe bhuk lagi hai Aur tumhe kuch banana nahi ata toh directly keh do na. Aur waise bhi tum shayad bhul gaye ki humne decide kiya tha that there is no need of any responsibility. toh main tumhare liye kuch nahi banane wali.

saying so she went inside the kitchen and started making breakfast. she made allo paratha but just for herself (actually she made for him as well but hid his portion inside the fridge) and started eating while Randhir was just staring at her as he was too damn hungry.

S - wah!!!! maja agaya. she said as she finished breakfast and started licking her fingers. toh Maine breakfast kar liya Ab chalein.

R - chalein? I mean seriously sanyukta!!! Do you think I'm your chauffer? Tum toh ek strong girl hona. Go and find your own way.

Though he regretted what he said at the moment he said it but his bigger than life ego would never allow him to ask her to come with him.

Our house is on the outskirts and it was hard to get a ride to college. Moreover she was not aware of the route. How will she make it?

Before he could think any further he heard a loud thud. The main door was closed by someone using too much more force than required.

She left!!! Oh god this girl is unbelievable!!!

Well whatever she doesn't deserve any sympathy. She could have made food for me too but instead she was teasing me. He thought as he progressed towards the kitchen. He thought of managing with some loafs of bread as his stomach growled for food.

Well I had my revenge..... But his thoughts were broken by the sight in front of him. He opened the fridge hoping to find few loafs of bread but what he got, surprised him

There was a plate with alloo paratha kept in it and a note saying "you must be searching for food like wolf right now. So enjoy and be grateful to me :p"

He was shocked. Oh how wrong he was. He wanted to correct his mistake as well as eat as he was damn hungry. So he did what he thought was the best thing to do at that moment. He rushed towards his car, with the plate in his hands.

Meanwhile on the road

S - What does he think of himself? Stupid, joker, jungle jerk. Usse kya laga, mein khud college bhi nahi ja sakti. Huh!!!! I will manage.

But sanyu, kaise karegi tu manage? Tujhe toh raasta bhi nahi pata. Aur yahan bus, auto, rickshaw kuch nahi dikh raha. Oh god ab kya karun.

Right at that moment she saw a black Audi rushing towards her in full speed and stopped just inches away from her. Well no rocket science is required to guess who the person was.

precap -

farzi tum mujhe apne hath se khana khilaogi...

an invitation to a party...

randhir mujhe shopping karni hai...

Edited by soumyamishra - 11 years ago

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