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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

thaank uu for the pm and thank uu for updating,mention not dear. sach mein mein bhul gayi thi storyline,haha sorry then last udpate padhkar sab ekdam chakachak ho gaayaa😉ahha thats great thaank uu fr updating,aftrall its better late than never😉😃 rofl! yeah 'better late than never' uday coming close to manyata was soo romntic,then manyata apne aap ko hi gaali de di😆haha yep.poor girl that was funny!!!!! uday kissed her on her cheeks,haaye kya pyar hai!!!!! ishq wala pyaar😉 but uday akele wala scene made me upset that was intense, showing his struggle. ab kya kare. pyar kiya hain usne afterall horse riding mein luv u to bol diya par frnds se zyada kab bolegi😛 when the strory comes to an end😛 uuff akash firse aa gaya!!!!!😡 wait n watch... theres much more manveer scenes were just superb!!!!! thankyou😊 hope to gte ur nxt pm soon!!!!!!!😊 yep probably in the next week

thanx for th elovely comment pia!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anvijanya

Amazing update! thanx a lot I read all the parts at once oh my god😲 and I must say you are a great writer! oh! 😳 tareef keliye shukriya😉 Loving the concept of your story and the friendship manveer share.. happy proud and satisfied to know😃 Hope manyata falls for uday soon yep, she has already fallen for him bas ab realise hona baaki hain the horse riding scene was soo cute..thanx!😊 I hate that akash 😡 might be u will thank him at the end continue soon 😃 yep i'll try my level bst

thanx for the sweet comment dear!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preya_radev

finallly u have updated yep FINALLY😛 i member u saying u gone update soon... soon but that soon never came my apologies but finally happy to see u back and hope u update earlier this time... yep, now i will never create a delay coming to the update really loved it thanx!😊 so manyata won really felt sorry for uday he loves manyata a lot and hope she realizes this soon... yep i'll help her in it😉 liked manveer horse riding soon... cnt believe akash has hired two detectives to spy on manveer i hope they find out and then manyata leaves him for good well unfortunately they dont. but thats what helps everyone at the end😊 do update soon and thanks for the pm mention not. yep will update soon

thanx for commenting dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict


thanx for a beautiful comment navi! Welcome Sanju😃.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Navi don't think much about the detectives
Let it be ;)
U always come up with an answer closer or the right one
If u think of anything do pm me :P don't put it in a comment. Please :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Superb
just love it
wonderful update
w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Superb
just love it
wonderful update
w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm

thanx!!
glad u loved it!!!
yeah ill update in a few hours
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
hawww mi comment nai keli????
so stupid of me!
whats app var sangitla tula
kiti bhari lihilay te and ithe comment karaychich visarle!!
update was ummm... sexy :-P
loved it loads
ata he sangaychi garaj ahe asa mala vatat tar nai ;-)
update soon..
:-P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Hey guys updated the next chapter!

MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY BILLU!!! LOVE YOU! HAVE A BLAST!!

Uday sat on the couch in his room tapping his finger on the hand rest of the couch thinking deeply about his current track of life. Vijay was relaxing on his bed as he say all the countroversies from varios sectors of the bollywood'-business'. While Unnati was talking over the phone with her dad up in London, Jai was making a shopping list. No one knew where the others were, they were kinda busy with themselves. On the otherside, Manyata was preparing herself for her conversation with DS. She had realization after she came home, and now really wanted to work on that thought. It had struck her, after seeing Jai n Vijay discuss things with the DS about the Riyasat, and realizing they do it every night, and she hasn't even touched a file in ages, that she is being a real bad Yuvraani. She planned it all in her head. What she will say, what DS might say and like a perfect script. She took a deep breath and relaxed as she left it. "Yuvraani sa" the maid called out to her. "haan" she said a bit startled. "aapko rajmataji ne bulaya hain" she said. "ji... unko batayiye hum aa rahe hain" Manyata said and smiled. She looked in the mirror for the last time and relaxed. Closing the room of her door, she walked out

"kya hua Jiju... aapne hume itni jaldi main kyun bulaya?" Jai asked closing the door of the room behind her. "Kya aap sabne notice kiya hain Manyata ka behavior. She still behaves like u know... chawl types" he said analyzing. "Yeah... so?" Vijay said thinking it was really stupid of Uday to call everyone here just to tell thim this. "my point is I want her to behave like a princess, a real sophisticated lady. People should be in awe of her and should wish to be like her, to be... to be... her..." he said thinking of the right words. "that's a nice idea" Jai said. "toh why have u called us here. Why don't u go n tell her" Jai continued. "I need ur help... we have to SHOW Manyata how it is when she is behaving like a chawl girl" Uday said smirking as he had planned everything in his head. "kehna kya chahte hain aap Dada?" Unnati asked confused. "Its showtime sweethearts" he said as he winked and smirked.

"daadisa..." Manyata said peeping inside. Looking up from her file DS called her in. "ji kahiye aap humse baat karna chahtithi na?" she asked. "wo actually hume bahot bura lag raha hain" Manyata said as she walked in. "kis baatka?" DS asked removing her glasses. "yahi baatka ki hum yuvraani ki koi bhi jimmedari nahi nibharahe hain" Manyata said as she sighed. DS felt relieved. Is it that firm step which she was waiting for since ages? DS didn't comment over it, and so Manyata continued "to humne is par ek solution sochliya hain" Manyata said giving a confused smile. "haan... kya?" DS asked hoping for the best. "wo maine... I mean humne socha that hum har roj yaha asakte hain. As in jab Akash kaam par jayega, hum yaha ayenge aur shaam ko wapas chale jayenge. Like office. I mean so dumb of me, maine I mean humne ye pehle kyun nahi socha..." she said smiling weird. NO! that was surely not the solution. What DS feared was happening. Manyata was slowly adjusting there. There were no problem she was facing there and she wasn't missing the royal treatment. She had still the seeds of Moniya somewhere deep inside and before that seed grew into a big tree, something HAD to be done. "par beta aapko hi kitna hectic hoga" DS said as she got up and went and stood before Manyata, her back towards Manyata. "ab thoda hoga hi... aur ab hum itna to kar sakte hain" Manyata said. "par beta aap ayenge kaise. Transport ka bhi problem hain. Chawl waha east ki taraf, aur rajmahal west. Bilkul bhi paas nahi hain" DS tried to turn that solution down. "bus se ajayenge... sasta bhi hoga" Manyata said. SASTA' oh god... no, DS thought. "Manyata, beta aap yuvraani hain... kya sasta kya mehenga jo aapko chahiye wo aapka ho sakta hain. Aur bus nahi. That's not at all safe. Aur ab rickshaw ya taxi mat kahiye" DS said with her back still towards Manyata. "ok thik hain... aap gaadi bhijwa dena" Manyata said with another solution. For the first time in her life, might be DS was loosing an argument and she wasn't able to say anything which would save her. "par Manyata petrol..." DS said and Manyata cut her in between "ab aisa mat kehna that we cant afford petrol" Manyata said chukling. Turning her face towards Manyata and laughing , DS replied "nahi beta aisa nahi hain per wo kya hain..." she said as she scratched her temples, falling short of words to defend herself. "kya hain?" Manyata asked her. "rajmata ji... aap keliye call hain" the maid called out to her from the door. DS turned with a swift and almost jogged to her. "haan dijiye" she said taking the phone from her. "breakfast lag gaya hain" the maid said bowing and left. Pressing the mic over the phone, DS said to Manyata, "aap jake breakfast kijiye, hum is Vishay par baad main charcha karenge" DS said sounding too royal and sophisticated. "Mrinalini Devi here..." she continued to talk over the phone while Manyata walked away with heavy steps.


Menaka, Brijraj, Komal and Manyata were sitting by the table and soon DS joined them. But the four kids were missing. "ye chaaro kaha reh gaye? Manyata beta aap jaanti hain ye kaha hain?" Komal asked her while Manyata tapped her plate gently with a spoon and nodded in a no. After a few minutes, four of them walked in the dining area speaking in muffled voices. Smiling unusually broad, they took there places. Uday and Unnati sat on either sides of Manyata while Vijay and Jai sat across them. The staff served them baked beans and toast with Orange juice, and everyone began except - Jai. "ye kya hain?" Jai asked as she squashed a bean under her spoon. "main batayunga main batayunga" Vijay said excitedly and Jai looked up at him and Menaka's eyes grew wide. "ye hain... ye hain" he said trying hard to think and scratching his temples with back of his spoon. Manyata just stared at both of them with terror. "wo... umm...aise juban pe hain" he said with a very peculiar English-hindi translation. "Bak-ed beans" Uday told both of them especially stressing on K' and D'. "ohh... mujhe laga rajma hoga" Jai said as she gave the beans a wild berth. "nahi Jai... Rajma kidney jaise hote hain" Unnati said as she sipped on the juice, and made a face as she kept it down. "ganda hain? Kiska juice hain?" Jai asked making a similar face as Unnati. By now everybody on the table had stopped eating and started looking at them. One- because they were shocked seeing the four behave like this and second- listening to the comparison of food with kidneys, they felt it was rather better to stop eating. "ye shayad santre ka hain..." Unnati said looking at the jar of juice. "isse accha to nimbu paani hain" Jai said making an obvious face. "Mujhe ye sab nahi chahiye" she said pushing the plate ahead. "mujhe wada-sambar chahiye. Abhi ke abhi. Mujhe bahot bhuk lagi hain. Mujhe abhi lake do" Jai said crossing her hands. "Jaighamandini chup chap gatakle jo diya hain wo. Itne nakhre mat dikha" Vijay said with food still in his mouth. Others went speechless and Manyata's jaw dropped. "Vijay Dinanath Chauhan ke bacche" Jai said as she snapped her fingers and pointed her finger to him "tu mujhe mat sikha mujhe kya karna hain. Main jaanti hu. Aur mujhe wada sambar khana hain" Jai said rolling her eyes. "par Jai itni jaldi kaise banega wada sambar?" Manyata said to her. Looking at her with a raised eyebrow, Jai said "thik hain, to mujhe nashta hi nahi karna" Jai got up to leave. "abhi ke abhi yaha aake baith jaa. Ye koi tareeka huya hain. Kitna ghamand!" Uday said to Jai who had already started walking towards her room. Turning around, she said to Uday "tu chup reh saand kahike. Tujhe kisne haq diya mujhe rokne ka" Jai said and again started walking towards the room. "Kya bolu tu mujhe? Saand????!! Ruk tu gavarni kahiki. Teri ye himmat" Uday suddenly got up from his place, making the chair behind him fall back and started marching towards her room. They heard a loud bang as Jai banged the doors of her room as hard she could. "ruk Uday main bhi aa raha hu, subah se chudail mujhe bhi boli ja rahi hain" Vijay said and jogged towards her room. Then they heard another bang- this time louder as Uday went in the room, this time even harder. Then again they heard a bang, much softer as Vijay went in. by now, everyone's eyes had popped out. Unnati stood up abruptly and started going towards Jai's room "Unnati, Where are you going?" Manyata asked her. "wo andar bada kaand hone wala hain. Usko thand karne keliye setting karni padegi" Unnati said and ran in. last thing they wanted to hear was Unnati being like this

Brijraj held his head in frustration. "Oh god!!! Ye sab Moniya jaisa bartaav kyun kar rahe hain!!" He said and stood. "hum kuch kha nahi sakenge. Sorry..." he said and left. "hum bhi... Vijay ka aisa bartaav dekh kar hume to chakkar aa rahe hain" Menaka said and joined her brother in leaving the table. "hum abhi aaye" Komal said and left. DS looked at Manyata and then at the closed door of the room. Sighing, she stood and left. The only person left on the table was Manyata. Brijraj's words repeated in her head Ye sab Moniya jaisa bartaav kyun kar rahe hain' and that's when it dawned on her that she used to behave like this. This is what it is when she behaves like Moniya. She propped her chin on her hands and stared at the close door. " seema ji, andar breakfast bhej dijiye charon keliye. Aur ho sake to, wada sambar bhej dena" she said. Seema ji bowed and went to get it.

"hume bahot bhuk lagi hain" Jai said pressing her stomach. Hume abhi khana hain. The baked beans looked so yummy" Jai sighed and fell back on her bed. Uday marched the length of the room. Vijay sat on the ottoman while Unnati rested her back on the wall. They heard a knock on the door and all sat up staright while Uday froze. "k.. k.. kaun hain?" Vijay asked. Now Seema ji was in a dilemma how and what to answer. She had never called out her name to someone as everytime either everyone allowed or denied very rarely. "seema..." she simply said her name. "ah seema ji..." Uday went and creeked open the door. Seema ji walked in and kept the tray on the table. "Manyata kaha hain?" Unnati asked her. "yuvraani sa bahar khadi hain. Shayad wo janna chahti hain andar kya chal raha hain" Seemaji said and left. "Plan A worked I think" Uday said as he locked his hands and pressed them on his lips. "time for plan B Unnati announced. "Tum humse aise baat bhi kaise kar sakte ho Uday... akkal hi nahi hain tumme" Jai directly started without giving any precognition to anyone. "bhagwan ne tumko bheja to bheja par bheje main bheja hi nahi bheja" Vijay said as he got up suddenly said and said as if cursing Uday. "what? This wasn't decided what are you blabbering?" Uday whispered. "whatever, just continue" Unnati said hurrying them up. "Vijay tu chup chap jaake baith waha pe. Kuch bhi bake ja raha hain. Ekdam chup" Uday said keeping his finger on his lips and turned his attention to Jai. "tu jis tarah se table pe boli hain kuch tameez hain bhi ya nahi. Kameeni" Uday said folding his hands. Jai darted towards Uday and pointed his finger at him nearly pearcing his face "tu apni jagah par reh aur mujhe mat seekha mujhe kya karna hain kya nahi. Tu kameena. Main nahi hu kameeni" Jai said and took a step back. Manyata gasped from behind the door. Like a slideshow, all what she used to say to Uday flashed before her eyes. Unnati stepped in between them before Uday could say anything. "tum dono ruk jayo please. Ab use khana hain to khana hain... dada tum bhi... bekaar main chemical locha" Unnati said "Chotti..." before Uday could say, Manyata stepped in the the room. "ye sab kya chal raha hain" she said. Vijay stood up and all turned there attention towards Manyata. Uday came forward and looked into Manyata's eyes. He cupped her face with his hand and said to her in the most gentle and caring voice "princess... this was a jhalak of how Moniya is. Though she is my junglee billi, but Moniya isn't real. She was MASK, a fake identity, which must be shed off as soon as possible, or its dangerous sweetie" he ended, patting her cheek and left. "princess... behave like a princess. You are the royal. Be like one. Sometimes I still find traces of Moniya in you" she remembered Uday telling her while they were driving back from horse riding. Though at back of her mind, Manyata had agreed, but she refused to show it aloud to Uday.

She looked at everyone present in the room and smiled lightly at them. Then she turned around, and left to go, leaving all three of them looking at each other.

Done with this chapter guys!
do hit like n do leave a comment

I'll send the PMs in the evening

sorry for the delay

love ya all

Pranks aka Sanju

Edited by Ashish.Addict - 11 years ago

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