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hey guys!!!!! m here with a new storyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
with a new one shot!!!!!! 😃😃😃
lets start!!!!! and end mein miltey hain!!!!

DESTINY

Zoron ke baarish ho rahi Thi...raat ka samay tha...sab ghar mein the... Par do log aise the jinhe bahut maza AA raha tha... a girl was playing on the road wid few kids and the boy not too far was also playing wid few kids dono anjaan kheltey kheltey takratey hain... And ek dusre ko dekh kar shock ho jaatey hain...
girl- tum
boy - luk m sorry,...
girl- hell swayam... Sorry bolkar bachna chahtey ho...
swayam- sorry kria...
kria- wat sorry I was waiting for u...
swayam- m sorry kria...
kria- accha now tel me kyun bulaya tha...
swayam- meet my friend rey and introduces rey to her...
but rey he was sitting in the car watching his frnd play and admiring the girl... rey comes out as soon as swayam points to him... kria cums to him...
kria- hey rey...
rey- hello... And luks at swayam...
swayam- rey yehi hai kria...
rey - wat sacchi?
kria- haan kyun?
rey- he speaks sooo much abt u that I was sooo excited to meet u!!
kria luks at swayam...
sw- m sorry...
kria notices rey is holding an umbrella... Kria takes the umbrella and throws it...
rey- oh hello ye tumne kya Kia?
kria- take the fun of playing in the rain!! Its beautifull ull enjoy it...
Kria then directs rey to open his hand wide and swirl and feel the drops rey do's it... swayam luks at rey is shocked but then decides to spk later...
for sometime KR play together in rain and swayam watches them smilingly... after sometime...
kria- I g2g rey bye...
rey- itni jaldi?
kria- rey it's 10:30 I g2g mom must b waiting...
rey- tumhare saath time,kaise pass Hua pata hi nahi chala,...(to himself)
kr- kuch kaha?
rey- kuch nahi... Bye...
kria then bids bye to swayam and hugs him and leaves...
rey and swayam sit in the car...
sw- waah beta waah rey- meinne kya Kia...
sw- aaj tak jab bhi meinne tujh se rain ko enjoy kar lene ke liye kaha u didn't... And aaj kria ne kaha toh jhat se maan Li baat...
rey- swayam aisa nahi hai...
sw- toh kaisa hai?
rey- luk I didn't want to make her feel sad isliye...
sw- accha u can make me feel sad but not her...
rey- swayam...
sw- accha ( wid a naughty smile)
rey- swayam...fine yes I kinda like her...
sw- ab aayana Tu line par...
after that day rey was only dreaming abt Kria...
ek din swayam was spking to kria wen rey indicates swayam to ask kria abt him and asks him to keep the phone on speaker...
sw- so Kria tumhe mera frnd kaisa laga?
kr- kaunsa frnd?
rey feels bad...
sw- Wo us din rain wala...
kr- kaun swayam...
sw- arrey rey ... Jisse tum baarish ke time mili Thi...
kr- ohhh wooo... Kya tha uska Name,...ummm... Yaad nahi...
rey feels really bad... Ki kria ko uska name bhi yaad nahi...
sw- rey...
kr- haan rey...wo Accha ladka hai...
sw- accha?
kr- see swayam aisa kuch nahi hai... I don't even noe him...and he is a stranger for me...and ur frnd that's it... Nothing else..., so he doesn't matters much...
rey feels happy wen kria said accha ladka hai but then he feels sad wen he hears that he doesn't matters much... swayam see's rey's face and decides he'll spk later to kria...
sw- accha kria i'll call u later...
kr- theek hai... bye...
sw- rey don't b sad dude... usse tere baare mein zyada kuch nahi pata isliye she told this...
rey- tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise i knew ... and den stops realising swayam is right... he fell for kria even before he spoke to her personally... and dat day he felt it is kria but ignored the fact...
sw- toh ab samjha...
rey- haan swayam u r right...
sw- i m always right...
rey- i hope she gets to noe me...
sw- tu boley toh shall i plan something??
rey- nahi swayam...
sw- kyun??
rey- coz i don't want it to happen bcoz i wish... agar destiny wants us to meet then v will meet warna v aren't meant to be...
sw- rey i cn't blieve tu yeh keh raha hai...
rey- swayam it's just that agar pyaar saccha hai toh hum zarur milengey warna nahi... sw- rey i m proud of u... and they hug...
time passed and they never met... swayam felt as if the destiny as rey called is testing him... or playing with him and he wanted rey to meet kria... he felt as if they are perfect for eachother... and even tried to make them meet but it didn't work... so he too thought if destiny wishes then they wiil surely meet... it had been one year since nothing happened...
but one day destiny played it's game...and made KR meet...
rey- hey
kr- hi... ummm swayam ke dost hona right??
rey (to himself)-aaj yaad hai par us din yaad nahi tha...
kr- kuch kaha tumne??
rey- nahi... yes swayam ka frnd,...
kr- srry i don't remember ur name,,,,,... (rey felt bad but then he remembers that he doesn't matters much for her)
rey- mera naam rey hai...reyaansh singhania for strangers and doston ke liye rey...
kria felt odd wen he told dat sentence... she remembered of him being introduced as rey... and ab sudden se ye line... but then she ignored the fact...
kr- tum yahan... rey- haan wo actually i was going to my office...
kr- ohh great me too...
rey- wel m getting late g2g byee...
kr- yaa me too bye... and then both leave opposite ways... unaware of the fact that destiny still has to play it's turns...
train mein... kria was almost abt to miss the train wen a hand is held out and she holds it and is pulled in...
kr- thank u thank u sooo much... and den luks at the person and says...
kr- aap thank u sooo mucchhh!!!! rey i mean reyaansh thank u!!! u saved me...
rey bcums happy wen she says rey but then sad wen he hears reyaansh... he feels still he is a stranger for her...
rey- well my pleasure and turns to leave...
kr- reyaansh rey- yes...
kria- thank u once again...
rey smiles and leaves... kria feels bad of not being replied properly... after some time they reach their destination...
kria- aap??
rey- tum?? are u stalking me.??? (wth a naughty smile)
kr- shut up... accha mazak tha...
rey- so u working here ya new??
kr- nayi hun... aap bhi??
rey- haan... receptionist- reyaansh and kria sir aapo bula rahe hain...
they say ok and leave...
KR- SIR aapne bulaya...
sir- ahhh reyaansh and kria... well as tum dono new ho yahan par i have a work for u both... u guys need to go to PUNE and get this file signed by mr.malhotra...
KR- but sir hum??
sir- yess kyunki it's important file and as he can't cum here kisi ko sign karvake aana hi padega... and baaki sab bsy hai... isliye u two are only left...
KR- ok sir,,,,
sir- so go pack ur bags and and u have to leave by afternoon and be back by tomorrow night...
KR- yes sir and they leave...
kriyaansh reach pune by night and nxt morning get the file signed too... as they had a train in the night they decide to have fun...
rey- kria v'll go enjoy?? raat tak v have to wait...
kria-theek hai reynaash...
kria- rey can v go to shopping pleeaassseee???
rey- theek hai... and dey leave for shopping...
rey helps kria to shop and kria really liked his choices... kria- reynaash u hve a good taste...
rey- well i noe dat...
kria- umm reyaansh can i call u rey??
rey- that means friends??
kria- friends... they shake hands...
kria- rey chalo na movie dekhne chaltey hain...
rey- kria is time par?/
kria- haan kyun koi problem hai??
rey- nahi wo actually chalo... and den dey go to the movie... scary wala... (conjuring) đŸ€Ł rey- kria it's a scary movie i hope u don't mind...
kria jisse dar lag raha tha...- nahi rey i love scary movies!!!!
rey (to himself)- v'll see...
and den dey go... as the movie started the hall bcam silent and sudden se they shout... kria- aaahhh... rey watching her scream laughs...😆
kria luks at rey- aaapko dar nahi lag raha??
rey- nahi... i love scary movies(trying to immitate her)
kria- reeeyyy...
rey laughss... and dey continue watching wid screams all over... and rey laughing... kria ko itna dar laga that she held rey's hand and digged her nails... rey was enjoying the scene!!!! after the movie...
kria-kitni scary movie thi na...
rey- haan bahut and then rubs his hand...
kria- rey...
rey- movie se zyada tumhare scratches daravne the,... and then luks at his hand...
kria- rey (fake angers) rey laughs...
kria leaves...
ry- accha baba m sorry... really sorry and then holds her hand... kria stops and turns... rey- sorry na holding his ears...
kria starts laughing... rey understood kria was fake angering... rey gets lost...
kria- rey rey suno hum wahan chale??
rey- haan and den they go to a disco where they get drunk...
and start dancing!!!!
rey- kria lets go v wil miss our train...
kria- rey 5 min...
rey- kria ad then pulls her towards him...
kria dashes his chest and then they have an eye lock... rey inches forward kria closes her eyes and they kiss...
he takes his lips in hers and sucks it... kria sucks his upper lips... rey enters into kria's mouth and their tongues play wid eachother...they kiss to eternity... they break the kiss when they feel short of breaths and kria runs...
rey- kria kria suno toh and catch holds of her...
rey-chalo let's go warna v'll be late... and they leave for the station both keep quite... nxt day...(afternoon) they reach the office and kria avoids rey...
sir- so did u get the sign??
KR- yes sir...
sir- okk u can take a day off today and get back to work frm tomorrow...
they leave and rey tries spking to kria... but all failed... outside the office,...
rey- kria suno?? wats wrong??
kr- kuch nahi,...
rey- then y r u avoiding me??
kr- wo rey...
rey- luk kria i m sorry...
kr- sorry kehne se kya hoga rey...u just...
rey- luk kria i waas drunk...
kr- me too...
rey- i couldn't control myself...
kr- ur fault... rey- wth tumne bhhi kiss kia tha...
kr- no i didn't/...
rey- yes u did...
kr- rey car mein jaakar baat karein?? sab dekh rahe hain... rey agress ...
(in the car)
kr- u better b sorry rey jo kal hua wo nahi hona chaiye tha...
rey- wat do u mean kria?? it was all my fault??
kr- haan... rey- jitna mera haiutna tumhara bhi hai...
kr- kaise?? rey- u too kissed back... kr- no i didn't...
rey- yes u did... kr- kya proof hai... rey- proof chaiye... and den rey pulls her closer and they kiss!!!! they kiss with passion/... rey then breaks the kiss...
rey- dekha u kissed back just like u did now... kria was blushing...
rey- kria... luk...
kr- i love u rey and hugs him!!!!
rey- wat??? wat did u just say??
kr- i love u rey...
rey- meinne suna nahi...
kr=- reeeyyy rey- i love u too kria!!!!
and they hug!!!! the next they do is call up swayam...
rey- swayam!!! sw- rey tu theek haina!!! u r sounding sooo excited jaise kria accepted u...
kr- kuch aisa hi soch lo swayam...
sw- kr tum?? rey ke saath... matlab...
KR- haan swayam!!! v r together!!!!
swayam- wat?? sacchi??
KR- haan!!! and both luk at eachother!!!!!(they get lost)
sw- congrats rey!!!!! congrats kria!!!!!!
sw- rey... kria... u there?>?? helllooo
kR- haan swayam...
sw- lagta hai u guys r lost... baad mein call karta hun... and cuts it!!!!
KR luk at eachother and smile!!! and hug!!!!!

so ye tha destiny ka khel!!!! destiny had it's plans!!!! and jaise khetey hain sabr ka phal meetha hota hai... rey ka sabr ka phal meetha tha!~!! he got his love!!!!

khatam!!! huh...
toh guys!!! kaisa laga??
kripiya aap comments zarur karna and do hit the like button!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Hayee didu kya likha hai...
Amazng. Awesome. Mnd blwng..
I seriously lvd it..
Kr were so cute.. and strtng to super osam.. Swayum hayee uska role i lvd d mst..
And tht horror movie haha rey ne kria ko dara dia.. Bichari...
Edited by arsha-rupanshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres!!!
mein kya bolun???
I just loved while writing it!!!!
bahut maza aaya!!!!
specially movie wala part and destiny ke baare mein!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ramya didz đŸ€—...
ye bahot cute tha...kriyaansh enjoying rain...wow..
nd den d destiny decision...loved rey here...
their 2nd meet in same office...trip to pune..movie part nd kiss...evrythung was so damn adorable...loved it...
plz or bi likho..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful and fantastic os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS...!
simply beautiful OS ...!
just perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res..
Unres kab karungi ye universe jii knws..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww ramzzzđŸ€—
this was one of d sweetest and cutest os's that i've ever read😳
jus loveeeddd ittt❀
well-written👏👏
totallyyy fab os😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os love it so much reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dii maine kissiko bhi ab tak pm nahin kiyaa

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