Arhi FF: Falling for you!! THREAD 1 - Page 87

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Phew...just finished reading 21 chapters...the story is so catchy that you don't want to leave it until you hit the last chapter written by you. I don't remember who recommended me your story...thanks to the person because it is a beautiful story. It is a mind blowing story and you did a great job with the storyline. I read so many fictions with Arnav and Khushi's dark past...mostly you can say with Arnav but this was just awesome. This time I find a feisty Khushi who is as much workaholic as ASR...The way you described Khushi's resistance along with her attitude made this more interesting to read. I will start with Khushi...she has a terrible past where not only her mother but her father also betrayal her. I will call it betrayal as he only thought about his wife and not bothered about his own daughter who is suffering just because of her parents...and then Shashi who again is a bad man came into her life. But I am happy that after so many ups and downs she is in safe hands...Poor Khushi gets panic attack all thanks to Ashok and Shashi.

On the other hand Arnav, he loves his family...he is a man of few words...he said so many things but could not comprehend himself why he wanted to know her...why her sorrow mattered to him...why he does not like the emptiness in her eyes pained him. He is always there to help her to keep away her horrendous memories. Finally he is successful in his move. But I am just worried about Khushi when she will come to know that he knows her past...how she will take it. I loved the way he soothe her...loved the way he said sorry and thank you and then shared his own pain with her that was awesome. The explanation Arnav gave to Khushi's mistrust and disbelief and that left me wondering how much this man could understand Khushi's insecurities. I am scared that she should not think that whatever he is doing with her is out of sympathy not love.

I loved the way you wrote about their vacations. Loved the way Shyam took initiative to make sure the whole family spends sometime together and I love the Cape Town trip...it was an adventure trip. Choice of movie is good and I am ready to give my hug to Arnav unlike Khushi because I love this movie and Arnav too.

What Lavanya is doing now is a part of their plan or she is gaming with them. Just curious to know...what happen to Khushi's mother is she have any connection with Khannas...I don't know but I am thinking something bad for her.

This story has everything...humor, suspense, love, worst past...office politics,

Please PM me...sending you buddy request.

awesome story...i just loved it...feeling pity for khushi...love arnie very much...you are just an awesome writer...

I love the plot of the story. It is really very interesting. I like all the characters and I love the way you have sketched Khushi and Arnav's Characters. They are the exact replica of each other but having their own identity. Both are strong and weak at the same time.

Had read this story last October and loved it