Arhi FF: Falling for you!! THREAD 1 - Page 86

Phew...just finished reading 21 chapters...the story is so catchy that you don't want to leave it until you hit the last chapter written by you. I don't remember who recommended me your story...thanks to the person because it is a beautiful story. It is a mind blowing story and you did a great job with the storyline. I read so many fictions with Arnav and Khushi's dark past...mostly you can say with Arnav but this was just awesome. This time I find a feisty Khushi who is as much workaholic as ASR...The way you described Khushi's resistance along with her attitude made this more interesting to read. I will start with Khushi...she has a terrible past where not only her mother but her father also betrayal her. I will call it betrayal as he only thought about his wife and not bothered about his own daughter who is suffering just because of her parents...and then Shashi who again is a bad man came into her life. But I am happy that after so many ups and downs she is in safe hands...Poor Khushi gets panic attack all thanks to Ashok and Shashi.

On the other hand Arnav, he loves his family...he is a man of few words...he said so many things but could not comprehend himself why he wanted to know her...why her sorrow mattered to him...why he does not like the emptiness in her eyes pained him. He is always there to help her to keep away her horrendous memories. Finally he is successful in his move. But I am just worried about Khushi when she will come to know that he knows her past...how she will take it. I loved the way he soothe her...loved the way he said sorry and thank you and then shared his own pain with her that was awesome. The explanation Arnav gave to Khushi's mistrust and disbelief and that left me wondering how much this man could understand Khushi's insecurities. I am scared that she should not think that whatever he is doing with her is out of sympathy not love.

I loved the way you wrote about their vacations. Loved the way Shyam took initiative to make sure the whole family spends sometime together and I love the Cape Town trip...it was an adventure trip. Choice of movie is good and I am ready to give my hug to Arnav unlike Khushi because I love this movie and Arnav too.

What Lavanya is doing now is a part of their plan or she is gaming with them. Just curious to know...what happen to Khushi's mother is she have any connection with Khannas...I don't know but I am thinking something bad for her.

This story has everything...humor, suspense, love, worst past...office politics,

Please PM me...sending you buddy request.

Originally posted by: radhvi

another fab update!! loved it when Arnav explains about valuing the right people we meet in life.

OMG Khushi pecking him was absolutely beautiful!!!

Lavanya is she really that distraught or is she faking it? I would not be surprised if she has taken khushi's words and is on a path to teach Suraj a lesson. Else she is a serious threat!

Originally posted by: ILoveFF

Very nice

Originally posted by: loves_aishu

First things first, I just love your ff, love you!! Loved it so much that I read all the chapters in one go!!

😛

Secondly get well soon, saying for my personal gain, need the next chapter fast as possible!!

😆😆

Just Get Well Soon!!😛

Just love your Khushi, she truly feels like the epitome of a 21st century woman,

Inspiring as hell, and your Arnav is just the perfect partner atleast I would want, humble, loyal, traditional, hardworking, all in all a complete package.

👏👏

Thanks for this lovely ff.

Psst: Is the senior Khanna related to Khushi's past!!

Just had a thought!😕

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved it

Originally posted by: madhu1210

lovely fantastic update!!

the way Khushi talked to La and then told her the real face of suraj...

still wondering is La playing a game with Arnav?

like the morning time at RM, lovely family.. the way Akash managed to change the way he said to Arnav..👏

Arnav, Khushi both being workoholic they have same style coming early and start so they are on the top of everything.. the way khushi sense him shows she has been falling for him👏.. love their time

the way later Arnav told her about marriage and told her for him consider it was excellent , it shows he understand her very well... looking forward for khushi to overcoming her past..

Oh no La called Suraj...is she going to tell him that Arnav knows all???😕

Get well soon and looking forward!!

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: nine2

Yay!! So La knows the truth about Suraj. But please tell me the last bit implies what I am thinking, and not what I don't want to happen! I was so sure as I read earlier, but the part where she tells him that "They have something on him," makes me doubt her a little.

Can't wait to see ArHi together in a wedding! Please continue soon and thanks for the pm!

p.s I hope you are feeling better now. Take care! :)

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

awww.. me too down with fever along with cold n cough n sore throat n headache n stomachache... ek baar me ek bimaari to hoti hi nai meko... sab saath me... 😭

okay coming to the chapter...
lavanya... this girl.. i cant understand her ri8 now.. at first i thought after what arnav did to her she wont help AR, then her explanation to Khushi that Suraj used her made me believe she'll be helpful, n then in the end she calls him. gosh, will u be making her bad here... or she'll be playing just a Fool in Love.. stupid girl... bechare Arnav ko vi fasayegi ye...

awww... their family time is definitely the most Lively n Adorable part of ur story dear..
poor Akash.. Khandaan ki Auraton ke neeche dabaa kuchhla Purush.. 😆

n then comes our Arshi... everyone says Opposite attracts, but these two... they are Exactly The Same... but still dont repel..
she sensed him... obviously she will... Havaa chalne lagti he... n Rabba ve vi toh bajne lagta he bg me... Stupid Arnav... dont know anything. 😆
the BEST n CUTEST part of chappy- the way he took her Espresso n took a sip n gave it back to her.. i went all Awwwieee there..
She kissed... like really... she initiated... this is some huge progress.. n she dint even objected on his views on marriage... 👍🏼

will be waiting for lots n lots of Rabba veys in the wedding of the Red haired priya or pooja or som1...

p.s. get better soon... have chocolates.. lots of them.,.. accha lagta he.. i too had many of them, obviously mum se chhupke.. 😳
p.p.s hoping the next chapter to be on a new Thread... yippieee...

Originally posted by: Joarshi

god how did i missed this ff for so long...
u r an awesome writer...
ur each characters are so much real and breathing becoz of ur so powerful words...
i jst love this arnav...he is something that every women would wish to have...
and khushi...her character is so different and u have potrayed it so well...
iam really excited to read more...