Pyar Ka Intezaar (Waiting for Love): Arshi FF: Thread 1 Completed - Page 32

Originally posted by: deeswarna

u did an amazing job with the update kiru and i cant understand y u were so nevous, u wrote their first kiss so beautiful, it was mesmerising and so special, one that both wont ever be able to forget in this lifetime! u did a great job at describing such a romantic sitaution!n i loved arnav for being the understanding and considerate guy he was, he knew that it was her first time and he needed to take things slowly to make her feel at ease!

lol the ever present aman but thank god he phoned after the moment and not interupting it as usual. i think that arnav will definitely love the fact that he has someone to come home now, someone who will be waiting to share his meals and talks about his day, his house is no longer just a place where he crashes or have meals, it has become a homw with two people loving each other enormously. he will be looking forward to spend his evenings in her company doing things that every family does!

looking forward to the next one:)

Originally posted by: canapoem

Kiran, I loved the way you have written their kissing scene, sensuous and passionate. It also showed how their feelings run much deeper than even they have thought. Looks like Aman should disturb their moment afterall. 😆

So NK will be coming back to India shortly. Wonder what he and Lavanya will say once they come to know that Khushi has moved in with Arnav.

Very nice upate Kiran. Good job girl.

kirru darling u just nailed the kissing scene...

Originally posted by: diyadivya

kirru darling u just nailed the kissing scene...

kiss was sooo ardent...

aman had to call arnav😡...

NK visiting India - negative vibes 🤢

awesome updt baby

this is for u

First of all sorry Kiran.. For not commenting for a while. Been busy with personal stuff.

hey loved ur update...but i was confused bt post his return to the house... first there is a sentence saying that he forgot bt khushi being alone at home...

and in the end u mention that he was feeling guilty for leaving her alone at home... so was this guilty feeling post him remembering that khushi was at home...when was that, when he saw her in the dining room...cause when he entered he thought she must be asleep, so when exactly did he remember that she is at home...

also i hate LA for interfering so much in arnav;s life...despite him rudely reminding her to stay away, now she has gone ahead n discussed n planned with nk, to keep khushi away...i hope arnav finds out what these guys are planning n get rid of them soon...

Originally posted by: anjs

hey loved ur update...but i was confused bt post his return to the house... first there is a sentence saying that he forgot bt khushi being alone at home...

and in the end u mention that he was feeling guilty for leaving her alone at home... so was this guilty feeling post him remembering that khushi was at home...when was that, when he saw her in the dining room...cause when he entered he thought she must be asleep, so when exactly did he remember that she is at home...

also i hate LA for interfering so much in arnav;s life...despite him rudely reminding her to stay away, now she has gone ahead n discussed n planned with nk, to keep khushi away...i hope arnav finds out what these guys are planning n get rid of them soon...

Hey kirrruuu..
adirindi nijamga...the best kiss i ever read in any ff...
hoho...superb ..ok no curses to u now...
very beautifully written about the state of khushi during and after the kiss..
liked the hot khushi so much...i think she might have taken the coldest shower to cool down...
arnav too looked so hot...
and the picture is superb yar...liked it so much...
wow they r like typical hubby n wife...she is waiting for him to have dinner together..
i hope they will always be like this..
please dont create any mu's b/w them by bringing khushi's sisters past...
r take some time to do that...n please create many more beautiful moments like this...
bye ra ,,see u...🤗

Originally posted by: hesinahi

Hey kirrruuu..
adirindi nijamga...the best kiss i ever read in any ff...
hoho...superb ..ok no curses to u now...
very beautifully written about the state of khushi during and after the kiss..
liked the hot khushi so much...i think she might have taken the coldest shower to cool down...
arnav too looked so hot...
and the picture is superb yar...liked it so much...
wow they r like typical hubby n wife...she is waiting for him to have dinner together..
i hope they will always be like this..
please dont create any mu's b/w them by bringing khushi's sisters past...
r take some time to do that...n please create many more beautiful moments like this...
bye ra ,,see u...🤗

Beautifully written update..
Love it..!! :-*