Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

nice update and the kid is virat and
manvi how update soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Wow dear...

It was awesome and mind blowing update.

Just loved it.

Do continue soon...

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nidhiagarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

lovely update
thanx for pm
cont soon

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Nice update!!! Waitin for nxt n thnks for the PM!!

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Loved it dear

Awesome update

thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Awesome update...
Loved it..
Finally Virat knows that it is his kids..
Aww court is Virat going to the court???
Pleaseee update soon..
And thanks for the PM...

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

awesome update

loved it

thankx for pm

continu soon

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komalvirman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Wow very nice update and loved it y did she hide their

Childrens from him

Update soon thanks for pm

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swathin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

great update
bt virat should at least listen to her point of view
kids were really sweet
waiting for next

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Dik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Thank u soo much guys for ur likes n coments... Mean a lot ro me...

Sorry im not able to rply to each of ur coments.. Busy with examz.. But yes i read all of them n realy happy with ur response...

PART ~ 15

V : im taking them with me..
M : bt virat..
V : i dont wana listen any more... From now kids will stay with me..
Tani can u plz drop their stuf at my place..
Tani just nodded

Vurat left with mannan n vini..

Tani : manvi plz control urself.. V both will make him understand dont worry
M : tani u knew it rite.. Y did not tell me b4..
Tani : from the day one kids became very close to virat.. It felt as if know each other scine ages.. I didnot want to hurt u thats y...
M : bond is obvious.. Afterall he is thier Father..
Tani : lets go home..
M : ok..

Manvi ' s rum..
Manvi tried called virat n no of times..
No responce..
M : plz viru for once pick up...
Manvi decided to go virats place...

Virats house..
V : manvi what are u doing here... I dont wanna listen anything.. Jst leave...
M : viru plz for once..
V : virat vadhera miss chadhary... U killed viru 5 yrs back.. N now i hate u more... Wat ever felings i had for u.. All are now dead... I never expected ull do this to me...!!
M : virat...
V : leave...
N closes the door..

Manvi unalbe to control her tears.. Sat there on the door step..

** flash back
5 years ago..
Party nite..
Manvi fully drunk n virat pulls her out of party hall..
V : god manu are u mad.. U cant control urself after drinks... ( shouted )
Y did u drink so much..
M started crying like a baby... : viru u mean u are very bad u scloded ur manu... :'(:'(
V laughs on her inocence.. : now what should i do.. I cant drop u at ur house.. Aunty will get more worried..

Virats takes her to his olace..

V : manu keep quite n sleep..
M : again u scloded me... Uuhhnnn

V : manu manu shhh..!! Quite..
Manvi hugged him..
Viru i love u sooo much...
Virat was on cloud nine on hearing this..
V : i love u tooo manu
M : no u lier.. U dont.. U always scold me... Uuhhnn..
V : manu i love u alot..
M : no.. U dont..
V : i dooo
M : then prove it..
Virat on hearing her words prove... Virat captured manvi ' s lips into a kiss... N manvi also gave in...
Ater kissing for some time..
Both aparted wen they were out of breath...

Virat started giving kisses on her face...
Manvi hugged him more tightly...

Virat picked her uo in his arms.. N placed her on the bed..
: gud nite manu u need to rest.. Sleep..
M : no..
V : manu plz sleep .. This is the only thing i need rite now..
M : no i need u onllyyy... i love u my viru..
N pulled him over her..

Virat was surprised on sudden pul..
V : manu..
M : i love u..
N caputerd his lips...

Both made love with each other n slept peacefull in each others arms..

Morning..
Manvi woke up n realised what happened lst nite...
Manvi came out of virats grip without disturbing his sleep..

M took a writing pad n wrote a letter for virat..
Kissed virat 's 4 head..
: im sorryy viru...
N left from there...

** end of flash back..

So this was it ...
Hope u guys like it..

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