Arshi SS: ENTRAPMENT - Thread 3 - Part 20 LAST PART (27/03)

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Anu179

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this suspense laden...light and breezy love story...Astha being the villain was assured...but her being the step mom...rather Maasi was a shocker...thank you for the sweet journey

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Read last four chapter together because I am going to Grandmother house so I can't have time to write a comment separately, so bear with my this combined comment...Revelations about Arshi's past took my breath away..And how can any woman stoop so low to kill her sister son who called her as a mother...Just for the sake of money...Astha confrontation witha rnav was intense...Thankfully Shashi Gupta was innocent and things get better in arshi's life and they are blissfully happy in their world...Ending was dramatic and awesome...Loved the story every bit of it...

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ShiningHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Amazing Story!!!!

vth awesome twist n turns.. Loved it 😃

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hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

a fantastic story I loved how it was completely your own plot and story line that was different from the actual series but you still managed to incorporate special arhi moments from the series. it was a nice walk down memory lane but with new twist, turns and surprises. with love,

hiraah

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koonj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

wow yar owsume i completed this story too
indeed you are owsume writer
i am regrading why didn't i get the chance to comment on each part of this ss but i ma glad that i ma able to atleast comment on last part
really love the way you reveal the past
keep writing