'A DREAM COME TRUE' Sandhir ff *PART 16 UPDATED* #1

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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

I really wanted to give a big comment, but I am a little behind on time at the moment

Anyways, so I will make it short and sweet!

You are amazing at weaving plots Appy di! The way you portray emotions is just phenomenal!

Simple yet effective language! Brilliant!

The way you spent quite a few parts on the flashback and stopped right at the most awaited moment! I was like, "Nooo, I want to more and more and more" 😆

And the latest update was just brilliant! I knew Karan was trouble from the very beginning! And the way you described all those memories within the walls of that apartment! Made my heart melt!

And Shanaya is such an adorable child! She adds the perfect touch of innocence and at times tears to this FF!

I am really intrigued to know what happens next! Pleaaaseee Update sooon!

Pretty please, with a cherry on top!

Love,

Pari 😳

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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sparky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Arpita where are you... ppls let us know your well being.

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Kri

@kri1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Oh my gosh! You're almost to 100 pages! 👏 And it deserves it! It's so perfect!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON! I AM ADDICTED TO THIS FF!!!!!!! GOSH I LOVE IT! EAGERLY AWAITING FOR IT!

I love Shanaya and how Randhir is just so adorableee...

He's going to stay with Sanyu in the flashback! GOSH I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!

LOVE KRI

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ShefaliMalhotra

@ShefaliMalhotra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

res

will update god knows when but surely not before thursday

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ShefaliMalhotra

@ShefaliMalhotra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#725

CONGO!!

was stalking as hell just to be the first person to congrats you on completing 100 pages

so double commented :D

no one was commenting so had to do it ;)

you see i am not patient :D

update WHEN YOU GET TIME!!

I won't force you bcoz i ve heard that you are extremely busy

So i will TRY to be patient

but will wait eagerly

n don't wait for me 2 unres

I'm extremely lazy

Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago

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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Congo for completing! 100 pages!!!!
Update soon!!

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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh
Res!!!
Edited:
Appy! SoRRy for unresing so late!!
Ohkay! This chapter was kinda filler chapter but I loved this one too.
Shanaya part sooo cute!
I loved it!
The last part when Randhir gets her flashback!!!
I could actually feel some kinda pain.
Brilliantly written Appy!!
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Update the next part soon.
Loads of love
Samaira

thank you sooo much! 😊😊😊

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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: federized2210
Appy!!!!
I was ready with my comment yesterday only😆

But u didn't post here!!!!

So here goes...

Shanaya is a sweetheart!!! A totally lovable kid!

U've portrayed her so innocently!😊👏

This chapter cleared a lot of doubts...I loved this idea...U know, a filler chapter having the same ending as the previous one...It's perfect how u are merging flashbacks with current track!!👏

So Karan was a bane in SanDhir's life!! I so knew that!

What intrigues me is what actually happened that Sanyu isn't here anymore!!!

U've built up that suspense so well👏

Karan realized RD still loves Sanyu and he agreed to sign the contract? So can we expect a change of heart? Or maybe another ulterior motive?

Hmmm...Only u know🤣

RD is fulfilling Sanyu's dream...*Drifts off to SanDhir-land*

The memories that RD recalled while sitting inside the apartment were an absolute pleasure to read...

Each and every moment seemed so calculated...so precious...so real!!!

Lovely job!!👏👏

U have this uncanny ability to portray emotions using the simplest words and yet leaving a mark in our hearts. That's the best thing about ur work. It's heart-warming!!!

I'm running outta praises Appy!! U are just too good!

In a time when the show is betraying SanDhirians, ur updates are my drugs!!! So do update soonish!😳

Love u loads and big hug!!

-Always your admirer,

Anuradha❤️

Awww

I sooo loved ur commnt

i was about to tell u on fb that i wont post on if but that

comment was not posted!!!😭😭😭

Anyways thank you sooo much!!!!

waise let me tell you a secret!

I didnt had any intention of writing a filler chapter when I opened my laptop!

but dont know what went into my head and i wrote dis one😛😛😛

And ur last line is going same for u!!!
plzzz update

m dying!!!

love u too :* 😊😊😊

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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
Reserve
Unres..

Superb chapter it was. Awwah Shanaya is such an adorable kid. Karan why don't you just flip off! Don't need another glue here. Its such a treat to read SanDhir related stuff when the show is heading nowhere. Thank you so much for the pm and the update. Update soon xxx

thank you sooo much dear😊😊😊