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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful and beautiful os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice os :)
At first I felt bad for Kriya but I was happy that she was getting the love Sharon
I loved the KriSha bonding especially when they were teasing each other
WOW Rey was harsh :( I feel bad for Taani but she shouldn't have behaved like that
I'm happy Kriya got Rey and her dad at the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
wow...diz waz pure bliss...
d emotions dat u displayed wer suprb...
i mean it seriously...
i lovd it to d core of my heart...
i mean i dnt have words to describe it...
very very very very well written...
u r n amazing writer...
m nt left wid adjectives to write in d comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
superb ishu...

loved it dear..

beautifully penned down
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kreya204

Awesome!!!
Really emotional n grt os!!!
At d start wen u wrote dat rey n kriya had a breakup n he was in a relationship wid taani i was lyk what d...!!!
Den krisha bonding was also superb!!!
Den d kriyansh fyt was shocking!!!!
I mean rey shouting at kriya for taani!!! 😡 😡
I was lyk...whom shud i murder taani or rey???
N den d revealations!!!
OMG!!! U gave d turn lyk nythng!!
Taani n rey were nt taarey!!! 👏 😃 !
N kriyansh patch up!!!! Grt!!!
Ol thnx to sharon for getting sick!! Agar vo sick nahi hoti to kriya hospital nahi jaati aur naahi usse sab pata chalta!!!
N d way u've untangled kriya n gautam's relation is out of dis world!!!
I mean i cud visualize d typical father daughter reunion scene!!!

N specially d last lines of tangling n untangling relations!!!
Dese r really grt!!!
I wonder tujhe itne deep thots aate kahan se hai???
Tu sach mein secondary mein hi hain na??!! 😆 😉
So ol in ol it was an awesome os!!! Another addition to ur grt works!! 😉


Haan ji di mein abhi 9th mein hi hun , agle mahine going to 10th. xP aur yeh thoughts bas aa jaate hain .Mrko khudh nhi pata...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 this is something very beautiful and awesome!!!
loved it!!! Bahut zyada!!!
kria ka thought abt her life...
kria being compared to Sharon kria ka secret relation while reading all this I had Goosebumps...
I thought Sharon too hated kria but dn kria told Sharon can b sister anyone would like I loved it !!!!
rey kria ka crush!!! 😳 but rey and kria wer in a secret relation... :o
rey and taa... Together... I was hell shocked...
rey the way he was behaving with kria...
I loved it but also scared me... While reading that part I was like party ke time rey and kria wil b one...
the way rey pinned kria to the wall their confrontation... Can't really tel how I was feeling...
Sharon came to noe the truth mereko,laga hungama hoga...
I thought Sharon would break the friendship...
and wen rey went and asked kria sorry I thought its coz of Sharon and kria ne Jo answer dia!!! Loved it!!!
but then the twist u bought its amaazing!!!
loved that!!!
taa...ko cancer... Last few days rey so caring!!!
loved it!!! Bahut zyada!!!
kria and taa... Friends now...!!!
finally kria ne apne dad se baat ki and aisa sach...
loved the way u bought twists!!!
loved this update!! Amazing concept and story!!!
and kria ka thought abt her life has changed!!!!
and the last lines abt tangled and untangled loved it!!!
totally correct!!! Amazing job!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
at first feeling bad fr kriya
hate rey but as i read love krisa bonding

taani is cancer patient
rey only want give her happiness for some time
kriya dad has a fear thts why he keep kriya away
awosm os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

you seriously wrote that all on your cell phone. 😲
god! ishana tu superman hain!

okay now coming to the OS
the title perfectly suits the OS. 'It's The Perfect Match'
i really liked the story. i mean it was different and i never read this kind of piece of work.
well done 👏

beautifully written.. 'as always'
thanks a lot for the PM
do write more 😃

PS: aaj kal itne KRIA OS kyun likhe ja rahe hain ?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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girl, trust me..this was an awesome piece of work :D ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
amazing os
beautiful one
d way u protrayed her feelings was so nice
loved it
thanks for the pm

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